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@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: muktai

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I'm glad you like it. Thanks for feedback dear.

Yes I'm new here jesi. Mukta is my name.

I have written 3 OS previously and 1 FFhave started. If u wand I can send u links.

pm me mukta

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@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Gosh that was stunning! ❤️

The way he burst out while confronting her and her comforting seeing his vulnerability.

Really nicely written! ⭐️

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Very very well written 👏
It was touching and well described 😊 Swara realized her feelings, she started liking him, she realized she can't stay without him 😳
Well done 👏

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Amrtina

@Amrtina

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

"I strongly believe that we should never miss selfless love and person offering it to us..."

Such a lovely Os

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zainab

@RUCHIYADAV2201

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Very nice😳.lovd it when swara lectures lux

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arathy

@sarathy321

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Superb os dear...
Kaash aise scenes serial mein hota...

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Beautiful! !

Im so glad swara got ready to give a chance to their relationship. ... falling in lovedoesn't always happen in a hurry or suddenly. ..sometimes its those little daily things in life tht make u love ur life partner more n more...

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome Os and you wrote Swara's emotions very well! Loved the way she dealt with Lakshya and loved that she actually was able to sense that something was fishy!

Brilliantly written and am looking forward to reading more on SwaSan from you!

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Gangaaaaaaa

@SanaHolic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

awsum reading
jst loved the way these two [swasan] understand each other & care 4 each other..
Fab os..
loved it

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hi Mukta 😊

Really liked this piece. The way you have portrayed Swara's desire to give her relationship with Sanskaar, their marriage a genuine try; as well as Sanskaar's intense hurt and pain, thinking that Swara would possibly leave him to go back to her relationship with Lucky, was very good.

This para especially was very apt: ""For successful marriage only love between two people is not important. Trust, understanding, respect, loyalty, and genuine concern all these things count"

Have no words to describe the cunning and devious antics of RagYa. 🤢 They are so desperate to split SwaSan! But thankfully Swara realized their game, and firmly told Lakshya she had zero interest in him. That reassured but also confused Sanskaar, and the hihglight for me, was the sweet way Swara explained to him that she wanted to be with him, give herself time to fall for him, and to grow old with him. Very sweetly put!

And their declaration of their feelings for each other at the end, where Sanskaar says he is sure, Swara will soon grow to love him as much as he loves her, was very well done.

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