PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 74

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ishanita thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
ooommmggg
nainu u updated😃 so fast...lots of Huggies kissies for u..
I was literally in shock seeing the word updated on pg100.
told my brother to pinch me and he did that really hard but no worries can bear that pain for zinda .😛
I was jhumofy in the whole house today
u made my day girl.😃
my mom was screaming at me.
while reading door bell rang and literally I cursed that person and agn my mom shouted.
OK bahut ho gayi bakwaas
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yaar swara kya Karun m is ladki ka.
literally she is crazy can't see what her heart wants.
can't see him with other girl , not letting him to talk with her that morning...chahti kya h? khush bhi na rahe aur sad b na rahe.
wth
she is currently sort of clutching both lucky and sanky under her claws.😡
at a tym proposing lucky other tym craving for sanky.what is this? behaving lyk dil phaink aashiq.
kabhi ye to kabhi WO.😡
sorry was really rude but she is now getting on my nerves.
uska confusion bichare sanky par bhari pad raha h.😡
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uttara and karan.I lyk dem😊
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lucky...what to say to u man..
swara she zyaada to lux ji confuse h.can I say lux ji I hate u want to kill u lyk ur previous birth?😡

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poor sanky jus luv u yaar...
swaru ghaas ni daal ri?
don't worry baby come to our forum ,there r many who can give their lives for u.😉😉
sanskaar jus make her jealous badly she will automatically come in your arms running.
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naina might be u won't lyk my comment this tym dearie but this swara and her so called pyaar lux ji making me go mad.
but the update was superb as always.
I luv u for longer update.
can I ask which thing motivated u to write long?
I want that thing to motivate u again and again😉😉
sorry if it hurted from bottom of my emotional dil😭...luv swasan and naina very very much..😳
isha

Edited by ishanita - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update...
swara proposing laksh was more out of force than will.. like she just had to do that in order to create distance between herself and sanskar..


the scene in the terrace was lovely...


your story is damn good and i always look forward to your updates..
update next chapter soon...

love
Jessica
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Posted: 9 years ago
Naina..you make the situation more complicated lakshya accepted swara...swara knew abt her growing attraction...then y she propose lakshya...how swara and sanskar bcm one...i realy confused dr...any way nice update love swasan terrace scene...update soon
with lots of love
krishna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congo's naina and all zinda luvers .
we reached pg 100 ...yipeee
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Posted: 9 years ago
i hv no words to say naina 🤗 loved it alot..swara mind says she loves laksh bt her heart alwys look for sanskar..superb amazing update!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Intense but with conflict now. Waiting to see how you resolve the situation. Good work 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
heya again to trouble u
tnx for explaining me to such a depth.
really the previous birth wishes jus slipped off my mind .
now can understand swara .
its earlier birth wish plus her own guilt for kavi that is stopping her from accepting her luv for him.
now even I respect her more she is thinking of others before her...but one day she will realise who is her real soulmate
waiting for that day .
update soon
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a fablous update naina
I liked it very much
Plz update soon
I am curious to know the further story
Thq for the nice long update hope the next one also be the long one
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update naina i am so happy u updated it plz update soon . i am going crazy over this story. u r an excellent writer. terrace wala scene was the best . update it quickly plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!!! It was amazing...
Naina di

Ur marvelous!!!

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