Naina, my dear...this was so amazing, so descriptively written, I just can't find words enough to compliment you. Let me tell you when I read this lovely chapter. I woke up around 4.30 am, feeling thirsty, and after having some water, I just casually checked my phone and saw your PM notification about the update.
I couldn't resist reading it then, and I was completely lost in the evocative beauty of this chapter. When I woke up again today morning, I read it again. I think I will be bugging you to update soon, as I just cannot have enough of this story!
Nainu, the way you described the architecture of the haveli--it brought the setting right before my eyes. I've been to Rajasthan a couple of times on holiday, and Jodhpur, Udaipur and Jaisalmer are among my favorite places. I got reminded of all that, the way you were describing the mirror inlay work, the multi colored glass mosaics and windows. Very romantic setting. 😉
And the connection, the chemistry between SwaSan was mind blowing. I loved the way both of them are feeling the stirrings of such powerful emotions when they are with each other, they aren't able to figure out why, but both are very conscious about it.
Sanskaar, wanting to make up with Swara for being rude earlier, and taking them for a trip round the haveli, was very cute. He is so smart and canny too, he realized that the best way to put Swara at ease, is to talk about her work, and the way they both smiled at each other after that...😳 And wonder of wonders, the authoritative, imposing Sanskaar Maheshwari couldn't help apologizing sweetly to Swara, and feels seeing her smile is completely worth the "sorry". 😳 Yeh tho gaya!
Am wondering what Kavita's approach would be now. Hope she wouldn't turn too negative or try to harm Swara. The way you've described her, she sounds a bit like Ragini was earlier in the serial---quiet, unassuming, feeling immersed in her affection for Sanskaar even though she probably realizes at some level, that he does not feel for her even half of what she feels for him. I do feel a little bad for her, but more scared of her future actions! And am curious about Lakshya also---does he love Swara? Or does he only consider her a friend? Will Ragini disclose her feelings for him before Swara does?
I think I've rambled on and bored you with this long comment. But I couldn't help it as I completely loved this chapter. Please update this story soon, Nainu! 🤗
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