SwaSan OS:RELIEF - Page 8

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

lovely OS

Originally posted by: rg0782

It was superb dear!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: RAONE8

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Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Medha 🤗 This is so lovely!!

I loved the back story. Swara's musings added the depth to Sanskaar's bargain later. They say daughters wish for a husband who is similar to their dad. Sanskaar has all the qualities she had hoped to see in her dad when she was young. Its as though she is making peace with those missing moments of her childhood through Sanskaar.

Shekar never was never the father figure to her. He never was her support system nor did he give her his unconditional love. But with Sanskaar's love, she was able to feel the sense of security.

I loved the bed-room scene!! Swasan always rocked in the romance department. But the cherry goes to the conversation. The sheer poignancy of it stole my heart.

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

Medhaaa

I'm not going to say much about the father-daughter equation that you have so nicely put down...true we don't miss things we never had

Damn that has got to be awkward...hai the desi nuskas of cloves

What a blackmail!! U can call it ultimatum, I call it blackmail.

Awesomely written mahn...

thanks for the PM medha, love you loads, xoxo😊

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

Loved the os especially the part where swara feeling were described of pain of not having a male figure in her life to give her a feeling of protection or not ever knowing how it feels to be a daddy's girl

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Wow !

This was cute 😃

Yes swara missed a major part of her growing up days. Where she felt she was angel/ princess to a man who would never ever hurt her.

Mila har rishta muskurata khilkhilata par na mila wo ehsaas jahan main bhi thi pariyon ki shehzaadi.

Aww can I just take away sanskar ? Why is so cute sweet loving adorable loveable januables. And u writers never leave a chance to beautify him even more .tchh .

Beautiful as ever

Loved it

Write soon..I miss reading ur stories

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax

it was beautiful. SwaSan love making sounds so romantic. very well written