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Posted: 9 years ago
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After 3 yrs---
A lady is seen walking out of Jail,with a bag in her hand (She is Ragini). A auto stops "madam, kahin jaana hai aapko" the driver asks. Nahi, humme kahin nahi jaana,she replied. Kahan jaaye, apna ghar, parivaar sab kucch toh kho chuke hai hum woh bhi apni galtiyoon ki wajah se, she thinks to herself.
In MM-
Everything has changed in MM. The control of house has been passed on to Swara. She has accepted Sanskaar. They have a one year old daughter whose name is Sanaira. Laksh has married again & he cares very much abt his family members.
All the family members are having there breakfast. Swara is feeding Sanaira (with baby food). Just then Gadodia family enters. Shekhar,Sharmishta,Dada ji,Dadi & Dida. They wish Maheshwaris. Swara & Sanskaar takes there blessings.
Shekhar- DP ji aapko toh pata hi hai aaj se Mahalaya ki shuruwat ho rahi hai, aur hum ne Badi mein shaam ko ek chotti si puja rakhi hai, jisme aap sabko aana hai.
Dp- Jee, jarror Shekhar ji, hum sab aayenge.
All were talking. Dadi thinks- Sab ko apni khushiyon ki padi hai , kisi ko yaad bhi nahi ki aaj mahri Laddo ki rihahi hai, pata nahi kahan hogi woh iss waqt.
On road-
As Ragini is walking aimlessly,she faints. She falls on the road.
A SUV stops there. A man around 28yrs old come out of it. He sees Ragini. His heart skipped a bit. He sprinkels water on her face but she did not respond. He picks her up and make her lay at the back seat. And starts the car. They come in a big mansion. Its Deewan Mansion. The man enters the house picking Ragini in his hand. He goes to guest room and lay her down on the bed. He says- Rani (a servent) where is mom?
Rani- Bhaiya, madam apne kamre mein hai.
Man- Okay, tum jaa kar doctor ko call karo.
Rani- Ji bhaiya.
Just as Rani goes out, a lady enters the room.
Lady- Kya hua bete. She sees Ragini lying on the bed unconsious. She says yeh toh Ragini hai na.
Man- Yes mom, ye Ragini hai. Jiske liye maine 3 saal pahele case lada thha, yeh jaante hue ki main woh haar jaunga, kuyki maine iss ki aankho main pashtawa (repentence) dekha thha.
Lady- Sirf yahi baat thhi ya... (she was cut off by man)
Man- Mom plz, iss waqt usse ek dost ki zaroor hai aur main uska dost banana chahata hu.
She was going to say something when Rani enters with doctor.
Doctor checks Ragini & says - Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai, lagta hai stress ki wajah se behosh ho gayi thhi. Thodi der mein hosh aa jaye ga. Doctors goes away. Man eyes Ragini lovingly. He puts blanket on her & goes.
Outside the room-
Two kids collide with the Man.
Kids are- Ansh deewan- Sweet, naughty, 5yrs old.
Palak deewan- Sweet,cute, 5yrs old.
They are twins. Seeing him they say (in unison)- Dad & hugs him. Man hugs them back & gives them chocolates. They go for playing.
In afternoon-
Ragini becomes consious and looks around. She thinks "Were am i, how did i came here?" She gets up & goes outside. She sees A man , a lady & two kids sitting & having lunch. She recognises the man. She goes toward him.
Ragini- Viren ji aap, aur main yahan kaise.
Viren asks her to relax and sit. He introduces his mother Avantika Deewan & the kids with Ragini. Kids go to Ragini & says hi. Ragini hugs them & a smile comes on her face.
Kids go for playing. Avantika gets a call & she goes to take it.
Ragini- Virenji main yahan kaise...
Viren- Ragini, tum mujhe raashte mein behosh milli thhi isliye main tumhe yahan le aaya.
Ragini- Mujhe patta nahi thha ki aapke itne pyaar bacche bhi hai.
Viren smiles a little & says- Yeh mere bacche nahi hai, meri toh abhi shaadi bhi nahi hui hai.
Ragini (Shocked)- Toh yeh aapko...
Viren- Yeh mere dost ke bacche hai. Actually 5 saal pahele mera dost apni wife ko yahan chod kar ek meeting ke liye gaya thha. Uss waqt Payal aur Ansh sirf 2 mahine ke thhe. Achanak humme khabar milli ki uska accident ho gaya hai. Hum jab hospital pahuche tab tak usski death ho chuki thhi. Iss sadme mein uski wife ki bhi death ho gayi. Aur tab se yeh bacche mere aur mom ke saath rahte hai. He had tears in his eyes.
Ragini goes to him tries to console him.
Ragini- I can understand.
Viren- Thanks.
Avantika who was watching this feels happy seeing Ragini & Viren together.
Ragini- Viren ji yahan koi guest house honga kya.
Viren- Kuy?
Ragini- Main wahan shift ho jaati, aur mujhe job bhi dhundhana hai toh...
Avantika- Ragini beta tum Viren ki dost ho aur tum yahan rah sakti ho. Aur rahi baat job ki toh tum chaho toh Jyoti NGO mera hai wahan tum baccho ko singing aur dancing sikha sakti ho.
Ragini- Aapko mere atite se koi problem nahi hai.
Avantika smiles and says- Ragini, mujhe insaan ki parak hai, aur main tumhare attit jaanti hu. Ragini galtiyaan sabse hoti hai lekin asli insaan woh hota hai jo apni galtiyon se sikh le aur apna past bhula kar zindangi mein aage badhe.
Ragini had tears in her eyes she hugs Avantika. Avantika smiles Viren too smiles.
So, how is Ch-1?????

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
OMG amazing chapter, thank you for posting the update, i like how Viren is taking care of Ragini. please post the next part soon, I want to see how Ragini and Viren's relationship develops. thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Dat was a lovely update
Can't wait to see the bonding of Ragini n Viren
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Dat was a lovely update

Can't wait to see the bonding of Ragini n Viren
Thnku for the pm

me tooo hope we get the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Wow man!
Fabulous update!

I want to read the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
wow dis was amazing , amazing n amazing . Actually god ve created u wit super brain which has lots of creativity n d great thing is ua using it , idk Hw u manage to write 2/3 ffz. ua just amazing lyk ua ffz.n thank u foh d pm
Edited by Rachel006 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rachel006

wow dis was amazing , amazing n amazing . Actually god ve created u wit super brain which has lots of creativity n d great thing is ua using it , idk Hw u manage to write 2/3 ffz. ua just amazing lyk ua ffz.

agree with you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
really nice update
finally u have updated this story I was desperately waiting to read this story
and I hope that now u would update it fast
continue soon
waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
amazing!! thank u so much for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

OMG amazing chapter, thank you for posting the update, i like how Viren is taking care of Ragini. please post the next part soon, I want to see how Ragini and Viren's relationship develops. thank you

thanks😊

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