The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 37

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Hey hi..

Rd all the "missed" parts.. ;)

Enjoyed my reading completely..

So laksh is now trying to treat his psycho wife..

N the way he is doing is commendable !!

He is trying to clear all her insecurities..

Superb imagination !!

Swara n sanskar

last three parts were simply the BEST !!

hope it wd be a little longer..

But I totally loved it !!

Sanskar n swara's kiss were so natural n unique..

N the way sanskar explained the definition of kiss to swara !! Ws hilarious !!

Last part..

According to me the best part of ur ff !!

The way u portrayed emotions here !! *commendable*

Swara is confuse abt what she is feeling for sanskar n moreover all the confusion she is facing..

The way sanskar tried to solve her confusion..

They way she brk down !!

Simply perfect !!

N m curious what will sanskar do now !

-Will he give her some space (I.e kinda ignore her) so she try to come out of it herself.. so she confess her love or to be more apt come into some conclusion..

-Or he will shower his love n concern like always..

-Or now as he know that she do feel something for him (coz she did replied to kiss, well that doesn't matter that she responded in mid of second kiss.. Oo yes I liked that kiss count part :D that was unique once again.. ) yup sorry where were we so she do feel something for him.. So he allow her to get over this stupid confusion state.. By giving her extra attention..

Well in short Waiting for ur next update..

Tc

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Wowww bubble 2 solid awesome updates. ..short but more than made up in content. I loved the light banter in part 20 where she is berating him fr kissing her but then she was an active participant too n the way he brings tht to her notice...tooo cute!

Loved the way u handled swara's emotions in part 21 too...her insecurities laid bare to sanskaar...and typical her...not worried abt herself but abt sanskaar n his family n whether they deserved her or not...n her tears but he has misread them surely. ...she is crying coz his words hv assured her frm her worst fears n finally giving her an accepted feeling. I do hope swara conveys tht to sanskaar tho...

Thnx fr d pm bubble!!

Originally posted by: hasinig89

Hiii Bubble..

I don't know what to say...the way ur unfolding the story is like a flower blossoming from bud..petal by petal..freshly...i really enjoyed all the chapters.. I didn't realize that i woke up to 1AM to complete all these parts..that says how much i got involved..oops sorry ..you made us to involve by your narration.

After reading all these chapters I had developed a soft corner towards Ragini..in my heart.And Laksh seemed very matured...ohhh swasan midnight conversation, explaining & exploring the kiss...awesome...

Keep writing...

Suhasini

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved both the updates bubble. So swara s confused of her feelings for him ah? Both the part s abt swasan and their convo and their feelings

Originally posted by: chestha5931

Awesome..awesome and just awesome
Loved every bit of it.
Continue your great work bubble.
Thanks for the pm