Swasan Ss:Loved u yesterday,love u still...update part6 pg11 THEY WIN

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Hey guys, I m here with my very First SS. Please please do comment whether you liked it or not. Shall I continue it? Please do tell.

SWASAN SS: LOVED YOU YESTERDAY,LOVE YOU STILL, ALWAYS HAVE AND ALWAYS WILL.

PART 1
It was my(swara) best friend Priya's Wedding when I was so excited that I forgot everyone around me and suddenly collapsed into someone spilling half of the colddrink I was holding and hitting him hard on his hand with my edgy bangle.

Apologising for my carelessness, I tried to see his face but I guess he was in real hurry to reach someone or somewhere that he paid no attention to his spoilt coat and my 'Sorry'.
I stopped there for a couple of seconds and again started walking towards Priya's room where she was getting ready. This time I walked carefully.


Soon, It was VARMALA time. Groom's Bestfriend picked him up high enough to prevent Priya from putting garland in his neck. I then whispered something in her ears.
Agreeing to which she pretended to put garland in the neck of that bestfriend. Her fiance immediatly jumped and held her hands. We all laughed alot. And soon after it , the varmala ceremony was over.
There were Pheras and after that,the Doli time.

I cried more than Priya. Priya's husband said politely to me that I should stop crying otherwise he soon had to find a caring and loving groom for me from the crowd to handle me. I smiled and wiped my tears and hugged priya tightly.She went to her new home.

Back home in the evening, tired and sleepy. I went in flashback.
Mehndi,Sangeet, Parlour, that GUY whom I had sent in bit trouble!
Who was he? Why didn't he respond to my Sorry? Soon, sleep overpowered my eyes and I slept.
Next day,it was Reception party. In Priya's room I got bit free time to ask about her husband and her wedding night ;) Her reply made me quite surprised and nervous; " I guess You need a Husband too! " said Priya.

The First moment I was like ,'No Swara, You need to pay more attention on your carrier. Your dreams. No love,No guy in life'.But the very next moment, I wished to have someone who would love and respect me and whom I would love and respect so much that we would make each other forget our bad Past memories, become it others Present and allow each other to live independently in Future with a trust enough to keep us stay back together.


Lost in thoughts I didn't realise that I was standing there alone. All had gone to the hall for cake cutting. After dancing n food,it was time to go back.


Priya asked me to go to her room where she had forgot her mobile in drawer of her dressing table. I went outside. It was quite dark.I was bit scared but I went to the room up on the third floor of an isolated building in the resort only. I was climbing stairs when I realised someone following me. I turned back but there was no one.
While reaching third floor where her room was, a guy jumped in front of me. I was shocked
There was no one whom I could call out for help. I tried to run but he caught hold of the end of my duppata. I cried,I shouted... No one heard me. He came closer and I was trembling with fear still trying hard to push him back n hit him. But all went in vain.He was quite Strong.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Y to ask continue...

because I dont know whether anyone liked it ir not
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amazing plz continue
waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: nikhathfatima

amazing plz continue
waiting for next part

thank you so mch 😳 excited about my frst ss. Will soon update this 😳
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Guys atleast comment did u like it? Its my frst ss. And i dont know the response 😭
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Originally posted by: sasir

Interesting..
Continue soon

thanx alot.. I ll continue it very soon
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PART 2
Holding my breathe I started praying as it was my last option. He began to come closer when someone hit him hard on the face.
I opened my eyes. I saw a tall guy in dark blue suit with his back on my side. He was holding the goon from his collars. He again hit him hard until he begged for forgiveness.
I was still trembling.
After enough hits he let him flee with a warning not to do the same with any other girl ever again.

Goon ran. Now I was curious to see the face of the tall young man.He turned around. I still remember that moment.my heart skipped a beat. He was so handsome with beautiful eyes full of innocence. We had 10 seconds eyelock.
He then uttered few words which brought me back to my senses.
"Are you okay?"
His voice was full of sweetness.

I nodded. Suddenly I felt as if I have seen him earlier. Oh yes! He was groom's best friend who had picked him up at the time of varmala. And Priya had pretended to put garland in his neck.

"Relax! I'm here now."
His words actually made me feel good. I was feeling so safe with him. He seemed to be a responsible guy. He asked why I was there to which I told him about Priya's mobile.
"Okay,go and bring her mobile"
I went inside the room still bit scared.went to the washroom,washed my face. My heart was still running fast.After 10 mins Icame out thinking he might have gone. But to my surprise he was still there.
It seemed as if he wanted to take me to the hall safely. I was feeling much better now.
It just clicked my mind that how was he there?
"Did you hear my cries?"
"No, I had forgotten my car keys in Raman's (Groom) room."
His room was opposite to Priya's room.
I nodded.

We came down the stairs. On the last footstep I slipped and was about to fall hard on the floor when he held my hand tightly.
"Careful!" Said the young man.I was again saved.

I was now hurrying to go to Priya. We went to the hall where she was waiting.
"What took you so much time? I asked you to bring my mobile. What were you doing?" said priya.
I wanted to tell her everything but may be the time was not appropriate.
I simply apologised. We hugged.All went back home.

On the way back home travelling in taxi I recalled that goon trying to take advantage of me,then that handsome guy saving me.
"Wait!! Oh no, how can I do this? I didnt even say him 'Thank you!' He saved me twice and I didn't thank him even once. What would he be thinking?" I spoke to myself. Actually I was so scared and everything happened so fast that I forgot to thank him.I was feeling ashamed.

After half n hour of travelling,I reached home still lost in his thoughts. I was staying alone persuing my master degree.
I slept very soon that night.
Week passed. It was Wednesday when Priya,Raman and 2-3 other members were coming my home for dinner. I was busy preparing whole day.

It was 8' on the clock when door bell rang. I opened the door. Priya had come.I hugged her. I warmly welcomed her husband,her sister and brother in law. And the last one :o ...
It was HIM. I had mixed feelings. Suprised,nervous,excited.

"Swara,are you going to stand on the door all night?" Laughed Priya.
I came back asking them to sit and relax while I come up with the eating stuff.

My kitchen is attached to the dining room. I was seeing Him through the window.
Suddenly he looked at the window. I looked away shyly. I brought everything that I had made.

We chatted a bit and started having dinner.
" Swara!!Did you cook this? :o" exclaimed priya
I was bit nervous. Was it bad? Not so tasty? I didnt know.and Have I again made a bad impression on him?
"Yes,I cooked it. Is not it okay?"
-"Its perfect!"

I was so relaxed. It was first time I made so many things for so many people. I never cooked like this earlier. Thats why priya was shell shocked. I had learnt cooking everything served in dinner that night in last 3 days from internet ;)

We were eating when HE started coughing. I immediatly gave him a glass of water.
"Thanks!"
The moment he said thanks, I was againn embarassed. Why didn't I thank him?
But today was that golden chance of talking to him,thanking him .I was thinking of a way.
It was 11' o clock. Priya was asking me to now allow her to go.

I still had not got a single chance to talk to him. But allowing her was the only option for me. She then along with everyone,bid me goodbye.

He looked at me,smiled a little. He turned to go. My heart was beating bit faster.They went. I closed the door. After 10 seconds, someone knocked the door.

I opened it. It was HIM.
"Hey! I forgot my car keys,can I take it?"

I didn't reply. I was lost thinking,Had he the habit of forgetting car keys? Or he also wanted to talk to me?

"Excuse me! Can I?"
-"Sure"

Keys were on the sofa where he was sitting.He picked them up. I was not able to speak althought I was dying to speak.

He started moving towards the door.
"Thank you, Mr...". At last I grabbed the courage enough to speak.
-"Sanskaar! Sanskaar Maheshwari."
I smiled.
"By the way, thanks for what? Rather I should thank you for lovely food", he said politely.

"Umm, thank you for saving me that day. I m really sorry I didnt thank you that day. I m feeling ashamed. You saved me twice and I didnt even stop you for a second and say thanks. I dont know what to say now. I know I was scared but I should not have behaved that way. I was..."
"Wohooo! Don't you breathe?" he laughed.
I was so nervous as well as excited that I didnt realise I spoke everything in single breathe. I smiled.
"Its okay. No need to say thanks again n again. It was my duty.If there was any other girl I would have done the same."

He seemed to be A wise man!
Suddenly, I saw a bruise on his hand.
"Did you get this while beating that goon and saving me?"
-" No, a girl was moving carelessly on Raman's wedding, who spilled her colddrink on my coat and hit me hard on my hand with some kind of jewellery she was wearing. She didnt even apologise.Anyways I'm okay :)"
I was shocked 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harneen read both the parts dear,it was really awesome 👏
Do continue soon😊
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thats very cute..
lol swara is that girl !!
waiting for ur next update !!
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...
Loved it..

Thank you for the PM..
Continue soon..

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