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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rerose


Naina,i am crazy fan of Harry potter series,I just loved the way u merged them with Swasan characters just loved it a lot dear👏👏
Do continue soon dear,waiting for the next update eagerly😊😊...



Thank you sooo much Jenni..😃😃😃 You are also a fan like me..I am happy you loved the update😳
I will be updating tonight dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52


Originally posted by: gayu6


Loved chechi. Different concept I too love harry potter very very much chechi. As they were expecting her hair to become straight instead she tells her feelings for sanskar. He too liked it. Before they were fighters bt actually she has feelings for him. So sweet chechi and raglak too I loved. Bt more than them I loved swasan and their actions. Continue as ss chechi ...



😃 I am so glad that you loved this story Gayu dear😃😃😃
You also love HP like me..We sisters jodi same to same na😃😛
Thank you very much dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey naina🤗

Ok m not a harry potter fan so i don't know what is it all about
But I know one thing there is a love potion n swara had it n now sansku is in danger😉
Maja ayega
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


I am glad that you loved the story even though you are not a HP fan😃 Aww so sweet of you dear Sonu🤗Thank you soo much yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Ok so I will try to make this an SS instead of a TS. The number of chapters will be less than 10.
PART 2

Ragini came to the Great Hall of Hogwarts castle for having breakfast. She had the bottle of love potion in her hand. The bottle was still full, but little did she know that half of the volume was plain water. But she was still lucky, because even that would do the work.
She remembered about the Potions class in which she had heard about this potion known as 'Amortentia' for the first time. She could still hear the Potions teacher's words, "It's the most powerful love potion in the world! It's supposed to smell differently to each of us depending upon what attracts us. Amortentia doesn't really create love, it is impossible to manufacture or imitate love. This will simply cause a powerful infatuation or obsession. But no one should underestimate the power of obsessive love."
Ragini smiled and thought, "Real love or obsessive infatuation, I want Lakshya..". She then looked at the Slytherin house table and found Lakshya sitting among his team mates. She knew that he got selected in the Slytherin Qudditch team as a seeker this year. Word was that he had got the selection into the team, since his father, Mr. Swayam Singhania rich and highly influential. But Ragini didn't care about such gossips and she was sure of only one thing - She loved Lakshya.
She took a bowl and filled it with some gulab jamun from a tin, which her mother had sent her through owl post. Then she secretly added a small amount of love potion into it. She had to save the potion for some more days, since she had to give the dosage daily to sustain the obsessive love for her inside Lakshya's mind and soul. She took the gulab jamun bowl and set forth towards the Slytherin table. When she reached near Lakshya, she gathered her courage and called his name.
Ra: Excuse me, Lakshya..
Lakshya looked up and he noticed a beautiful Indian girl, whom he knew was from the Ravenclaw house. He smiled at her and came nearer.
La: Hello..You are an Indian, right..?
Ra: (smiles) Hi..I am Ragini..Ragini Gadodia..
La: (smiles) Hi Ragini..You are also beautiful like your name..
Ragini blushed and she gave him the bowl of gulab jamun. Lakshya was surprised and he smiled at her gratefully.
La: Wow my favourite..Gulab jamun..We won't get it here in Hogwarts, na..Thank you..
Ra: I wanted to wish you luck for the game, by feeding sweet..Err..Shall I feed you..?(smiles)
La: Ya..Sure..
She happily took a spoonful and fed him.
Ra: All the best for the game, Lakshya..You know I am supporting Slytherin House in this game..
La:(surprised) Is it..? But Ravenclaws usually never support Slytherin..(frowns) They always favour Gryffindor in a Slytherin-Gryffindor competition..
Ra: But since you are in the team this year, I am going to support your team..Ok you have this sweet fully..(then lowers her voice) No need to give this to anyone else..It's especially for you..
La: Ya..I understand..(winks at her) Thank you Ragini..
Ra: My pleasure Lakshya..
When she turned to go,
La: Hey Ragini..
Ra: (turns) Haan..
La:(winks naughtily) See you after the match..I want to meet you again..I have some plans for both of us..
Ra: (happily) Ya..sure..
Ragini watched him have the sweet fully and she was feeling satisfied. She could see the transformation in him. The flirty grin which he was flashing at her got washed away completely from his face. It now turned into a look of pure admiration and she was sure that the love potion had worked.
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As eleven o'clock approached, the whole school started to make its way down to the Quidditch stadium. The Gryffindor Quidditch team set off along the grounds, towards the changing rooms. It was a clear day with a very light breeze. Seeing this wonderful weather, Sanskaar would have been excited otherwise. But his mind was still stuck on Swara and her surprising confession. His best friend, Jamie was also thinking about the same.
Ja: Sanskaar..Swara was serious about you..
Sa: No Jamie..She was just trying to pull my leg, I know..
But Sanskaar's heart didn't want to believe what he was saying. Her innocent face kept blossoming inside his mind's eye.
The team entered the locker rooms, and the players pulled on their scarlet coloured Gryffindor Quidditch team robes.
Quidditch was a game played in the mid-air, by players riding on broom sticks, and had four kinds of balls instead of one. There were seven people on a Quidditch team, three Chasers, two Beaters, one Seeker and a Keeper. Chasers' job was to score goals by putting the Quaffle (a red, football-sized ball) through one of the fifty foot high hoops at the end of the Quidditch pitch. Each goal scored ten points for the team. The two Beaters were equipped with heavy bats, to repel the Bludgers (two heavy black balls which zoomed around the play area, trying to knock out the players from their brooms) from hitting their team members. The Keeper defended the team goal post, where as the Seeker had the hardest job of all - catching the Golden Snitch (a tiny golden ball with fluttering wings), which earned the Seeker's team an extra 150 points. A game of Quidditch didn't end until the Snitch had been caught.
Sanskaar was the Seeker of Gryffindor Quidditch team and his broomstick was the Firebolt Supreme -- the latest model of the Firebolt series racing brooms. Lakshya was Slytherin team's Seeker.
As the Gryffindor team walked out onto the pitch, with broom sticks in their hand, a roar of noise greeted them. Mostly loud cheers , because along with the Gryffindor students even the Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff students badly wanted to see Slytherin lose the match against Gryffindor. But they could hear the 'boo's and hisses from Slytherin students in the crowd, too.
The Quidditch teacher, who was their match referee, asked the captains of both teams to shake hands. But they exchanged threatening stares and gripped each other's hand rather fiercely.
Q.T: "Mount your brooms, please." Ok..One..Two..Three..
The referee blew the whistle, aloud.
Fifteen brooms (including the referee's) rose up, higher into the air. The match had begun.
Sanskaar flew higher than any of them, squinting around for the tiny golden Snitch. He tried to keep his thoughts regarding Swara at bay, but his eyes were searching along the crowd of spectators. Then he spotted her sitting among the Gryffindor students, cheering for him and felt thrilled.
He could hear the commentary and he realized that one of his team's Chasers had scored a goal.
"TEN POINTS TO GRYFFINDOR!"
Then again he heard the cheers of Gryffindor supporters when the team scored yet another spectacular goal.
He heard the commentary again, "TWENTY-ZERO TO GRYFFINDOR!"
Feeling relieved, Sanskaar zoomed along, gazing around for the Snitch, but still making sure he caught every word of the commentary.
Just then Slytherin scored a goal and Sanskaar didn't want them to win the game. So he desperately searched for the characteristic golden glint of the Snitch. But then he noticed that the Slytherin Seeker, Lakshya was tailing him closely. He kept cutting across Sanskaar to change direction.
Sanskaar urged his broomstick forward as they rounded the Slytherin goalposts and Lakshya fell behind.
And then Sanskaar saw the tiny golden ball fluttering close to the ground, near one of the barriers. He dived; Lakshya saw him dive and he sped after Sanskaar. But Sanskaar was speeding up, excitement flooding him. Dives were his specialty.
But then one of the Bludgers came streaking past Sanskaar's right ear, hit by the gigantic Slytherin Beater, Mathew Hudson. Then again the second Bludger came pelting across from nowhere. The other Slytherin Beater, Gregory, had sent it to block his course. Sanskaar veered off course, avoiding it by an inch, and in those few moments, the Snitch had disappeared from there.
There was a loud "Oooh" of disappointment from the Gryffindor supporters.
But then Slytherin scored another goal and there was an eruption of cheers from the Slytherin supporters.
Now their scores were level. If Lakshya got the Snitch before him, Slytherin would win. Sanskaar dropped his broom lower, narrowly avoiding a Slytherin Chaser, and started scanning the pitch frantically. He saw the snitch again, it was circling the Gryffindor goalpost.
Sanskaar accelerated, eyes fixed on its golden gleam, but next second Lakshya appeared out of somewhere and he blocked Sanskaar. When Sanskaar tried to look at the snitch again, it had vanished.
And then Gryffindor scored another goal. The score was Thirty-Twenty.
The Gryffindor crowd below was screaming itself hoarse, Gryffindor was leading. Sanskaar could feel hundreds of eyes following him as he soared around the field, high above the rest of the game, with Lakshya speeding along behind him.
And then he saw it. The Snitch was sparkling twenty feet above him. Sanskaar put on a huge burst of speed; the wind was roaring in his ears; he stretched out his hand, and his fingers grasped around the tiny speck of gold.
The stadium exploded into ear deafening cheers and he soared above the crowd, grinning from ear to ear. The tiny golden ball was held tight in his fist, beating its wings hopelessly against his fingers.
Gryffindor had won the game against Slytherin with a huge score of One hundred and eighty - Twenty.
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The after match-celebration party, was in full swing when Sanskaar and Jamie finally arrived into the Gryffindor common room. Loud cheers and clapping greeted him, and he was soon surrounded by people congratulating him. And then he noticed Swara at the back of the crowd, eagerly waiting to get a glimpse of him. He thanked everyone and impatiently moved forward, since he felt a strong wish to be near her, to hear what she wanted to say to him.
And finally when he reached near Swara, Sanskaar got the surprise of his life. She flung her arms around his neck and then kissed his cheek with a wide smile. She withdrew from the hug and looked at him with admiration.
Sw: Congratulations, Sanskaar..I am so happy for you...
Everyone else in the Gryffindor common room had stopped to stare in surprise and shock. They all knew about Swara and Sanskaar's enmity.
Sa: (shocked) Err..thanks Swara..
But then he saw the looks on the faces of his fellow Gryffindors. They were waiting for his reaction.
Sa: Hmm..Swara..I need to talk to you..Can we just..
Sw: (smiles)Oh..You need to talk with me in private..Why not..?
Swara led Sanskaar out of the portrait hole and she took him to a nearby class room. Just as they got inside, Swara bolted the door and turned towards him happily.
Sw: Ok sweetheart..Tell me..
Swara wound her arms around his neck again. Sanskaar thought, "Gosh..! sweetheart..??! what has got into her.." He took her arms off him and distanced himself from her.
Sa: (serious tone) Stop playing with me..Swara
Sw: (clearly hurt) Why are you being so mean with me..Sanskaar..(pouts like a child)
Sanskaar loved the way she pouted her beautiful lips. He had always thought that her lips were special..He gazed at her lips and then into her eyes, intently. Then he had a strange urge to kiss he lips, but he turned away from her as quickly as the thought came into his head.
Sa: (complaining tone)Why are you being so different today, I..I just can't believe this..I can't believe it's you, Swara..!
Sw: (defiantly) I am not being different..
She caught hold of his arm and turned him around fiercely.
Sw: (looking into his eyes painfully)You are being different, Sanskaar..You are not even interested in looking at me..(sobs slightly)
Sanskaar stared at her incredulously.
Sa: But for heaven's sake, Swara..why should I look at you..? (shouts into her face)Will you just STOP THIS DRAMA, SWARAAA..!!
Swara just broke into tears, at that moment and Sanskaar felt bad for hurting her. For the first time in his life, he was seeing the soft and weaker side of the fierce and stubborn girl, Swara Bose, who always used to fight with him for various reasons in the past.
He came closer to her and held her shoulders. Then he tried to explain to her in a soft voice.
Sa: I am sorry, Swara..But look at you.. you are behaving strangely..! We always used to fight and..
He couldn't complete his sentence, since she had placed her index finger on his lips to shush him. She was gazing into his eyes with a pleading look.
Sw: Shhh..I don't want to fight with you, Sanskaar..I already told you that I love you..
Then, the very next moment, her lips met his lips. Swara was kissing his lips with all her love. All Sanskaar could do next was just raise his hands and cup her tiny face, lovingly inside his palms. He then drank in her lips with so much love and passion. She felt her eyes moisten and tears streamed down her eyes. She embraced him with all her love and he was overwhelmed. He stopped kissing her and then hugged her back.
**************End of PART 2*********************
I will update the next part tomorrow..
Hope you all enjoyed this update..
Plzz let me know your views, my dear readers..
Love,
Naina😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: hp_2006



😃Thank you sooo much Jami🤗
Ente ee attempt ishtaayi nn arinjathil santhosham dear😃😃
TS aakan mikka readersum sammaikunnilla..SS aakanam thre..
But njan oru small SS aakan ulla plan l aanu..😛 drag cheyandallo Jami paranja pole😉




SS is Fine too 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
nice one...malfoy laksh flirting with Rags...the way he is on the show, that is so apt...slimy slytherins
wondering what will happen with the effect wears off...btw did they get a real whiff of the portion and who did it remind them of...i mean the sanky (thought it seems it will be swara now) and rags...would she still think of laksh?


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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
SwaSan ended up that way...yesss!!
nd I dunno whether laksh is totally under influence of amortentia yet..but he certainly seems to be..although there was water in the potion.

thanks for bringing back the memories of HP quidditch naina.:)))

love--
Medha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome- the Quidditch match was truly exciting and reminded me of my mega love for HP- will be reading my collection again this weekend perhaps:) And SwaSan- Ohh Emmm Deee!!!! Whoa! What is going to happen when this potion wears off?! Eeeks my poor Sansku is falling for real! And Ragini- she seems sweet bless her! Still don't like Laksh (which is good 😆)!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Thanks for taking ne to my favpurite world with my favourite swasan
The match and all made me remember harrys matches and all.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Eeerrr Naina please tell me Swara is not under the influence of amortensia... please I so want this to be real between them

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