THE LOVE POTION SS- PART 8 Pg 44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

Owie super duper cute ending.

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Saumya

@Saumya2102

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Hi Naina!!

Finally you updated!! I've been waiting for this update since ages!

Yayy!! Laksh broke up with his girlfriend! I never liked her. She seemed to be arrogant! So RagLak finally patched up! To be honest, I don't read RagYa parts with concentration, my whole mind is traveling in the beautiful world of SwaSan!!

Sanskar slept in seating position while waiting for Swara.. He must be looking so cute!! I am drooling over my imagination only.. wondering how Swara would have felt!

Affection was clearly visible by the way Swara gently let her fingers through her hair waking him up.

Sanskar is so naughty! He started romancing in the common room.. I badly wanted to suggest him to scoop her in his arms and go to his bedroom! I am so besharam!!

But.. Swara's resistance turned off his mood.. He got really angry and a little extra rude to her! I felt bad for her. The way she cried on the cold hard floor for full one hour.

Sanskar can never see Swara in pain.. Be it in serial or in FFs.. All hos anger washed away with her tears.. and he opened his arms for her.. *Me does "awww"*

Swara literally ran into his arms.. They missed each other so badly.. They can't even stay apart for a few hours..

Swara was like.. I love you I love you Sanskar.. Sanskar said I love you too Swara.. And here I was like.. I love you both infinity!! They're so adorable and the first couple I've fallen for so madly!!

Ummm.. one more thing.. I discovered your Zinda Rehti Hai Unki Mohabatein and Aadha Ishq.. Both stories are marvellous!! Update them soon and I want PMs for both!!

Love

Saumya

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Naninu.. girl you made me to wait a long to get an Update!! Aww such a cuttie lil update Manh. Me loved each and every inch of the Update. Nice Wrapping dear. One of my favorite works of yours. Thank you for the uodate. Take care

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Res - might take a while to Unres - will read all the parts😊

Nyna

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I have finally managed to read the whole SS - and what a beautiful amalgamation of HP and SwaSan and surprisingly, Ragya - Loved the whole SS. They did not actually need a love potion, just a gentle nudge to inflame those latent emotions.

Reading the SS bought back all my HP memories (I remember when the last book the Deathly Hallows was released, I collected my pre-booked copy at 6 in the morning and had read it by the end of day - 😉) I think I might go back and read the entire series once again.

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Nyna

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

Awesome update. 👏

But felt bad because it was the final update of this story. The story had a different plot and it was interesting too...

But atlast laksh realized his love for ragini and the mutual confession sequence was nice.

And swasan sequence was also awesome. Swara was shattered seeing sanskar's angry towards her and she waited on the cold weather to his arrival. But after seeing swara in tears sanskar forgot his angry...

It was a nice story...

Thanks a lot for your pm...