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Naina 🤗
Firstly I am ever so sorry for commenting late on Part 3- it has been crazy for me all week!
I had actually read Part 3 at 2 am the other morning but was in no state to type comments at that time so decided to do it when I would make some sense at least 😆
Part 3
That kiss- 😳. It is a teenage story but the way your exploring the feelings and interactions is so lovely, am hooked! I loved the description of Hogsmeade woven into the SwaSan story. I was so sad for my Sanskaar in this part- the potion wore off as we knew it would but still . I loved their scene and the fact that they both felt each other's emotions, pain, confusion in different ways and Swara is so affected, even when the potion wore off, his grief was registered by her. Oh and RagYa bits are nicely done too!
Part 4
This was seriously awesome. I'll be reading again in a minute! I loved how Swara did realise Sanskaar hadn't tried to give her a love potion. The way the clever girls cornered poor Jamie was 😆; I felt for the lad. And the whole conversation about their torrid kiss between SwaSan was 👏. In the end, I am so impressed that Sanskaar stays as he does in the show and doesn't shy away from re-affiring his love- that is what I love about this man- errrmm boy! Cannot wait to see what happens next and please don't make me suffer too long! Oh again, RagYa- this will be very interesting to see how it pans out!
Lovely work Naina and keep PM'ing me please!
CID
Anupamaa
