Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 6

really amazing as always...wondering how it got to divorce in the first place though...it felt as though she loved Sanky as well and would choose to be with him after that letter

Saku...Saku...my dear...😊 You have a glorious talent for strewing amazing little gems through your chapters, and each time I read certain sentences of yours, I start smiling to myself at the sheer magic of the words.

My personal favorites from this chapter were:

""I've heard many love stories, helped and wrote many too, but never had I lived a love story as I have lived yours.'...

But you warned me, that if I lived too long with venom I might contaminate elixir as well.'...

She came to heal me, I wound her far worse.' He started slowly. She had become my bliss when I realized I was her agony.'

I wanted to set her free Shai. I wanted to let her go.' His voice almost choked. But... But destiny has banished her back to me. As empty as I am without her.'""

There's that amazing duality again, which you had portrayed so well about Yashodara in SQ, where you'd compared her to mercury--beautiful, yet deadly. Deadly not because of herself, but because of her effect on others. Both boon and curse. 😊

Lovely touch. As you can see, I am a big fan of exploring such dualities and apparently self contradicting statements (which are, curiously enough, both true, if viewed at from different angles). 😊

I loved that moving, heartrending last para, too. For more of the apparent self contradictory statements, 😊 ""Now I have to keep her around me, but not go closer to her, not fall in love with her when she would question me why I don't. ...I'll have hold that gaze of hers, that deems me the prince of her fairy tale knowing she would soon recall what a monster I've been to her.""

Yikes, Ragini is as cold, as conniving and as Machiavellian here as she was in IK & SQ, and on the serial. Thoroughly, shudderingly evil, and yet oddly, spine chillingly fascinating...

As for Lakshya, the less said, the better. At a time when the love of his life is in a critical condition, struggling to regain her health and memory, he still feels insecure and jealous enough to think of competing with Sanskaar for her affections. Man, he doesn't deserve Swara. He doesn't even deserve Ragini, for that matter...😛

Sakura...u r just tooo good. Thr i was bemoaning the end of Ice king n snow queen n u give us elixir...such a tantalising start...cant wait fr the story to unfold!!!

i love u sakura... !!!
cnt wait for the nxt update..

What on earth?? Even now, this guy is thinking of competing for her love??

Great beginning, this sounds good..! 👏Angst, definitely..and lots of venom as well. 😛

Well written update dear Sakura👏👏

Awesome update Sakura