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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
superb update

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
'Your past is the only thing that can eliminate your present. It is a poison your elixir cannot withstand' , this sentence on one side and d whole update on other !

Bwhahaha.. Dont tell me are you bringing Kavita in, somehow?? His past that is the only thing that might somehow eliminate his present Swara.. A poison which made him a diff person altogether, an Elixir, Swara cant withstand.. 1) Sanskar used to love Kavita to evry depth. 2) Swara has mo idea about her poisons n elixir's of past, How would sanskar even handle things if Kavita comes back.. He will b damaged in order to set everything right..!

Baki.. U never cease to amaze me with the way u r handling this story.. Lakshay.. U might hv hd been successful in plantong a seed of confusion in ur brother's mind but never forget, he loves swara more than anything.. nor you or ragini can shake swasan, not in a longer run atleast!

Waiting for the story unfold.. m excited.. Eeepppsss !

You got me😉 How did you even see that coming? I need to sharpen my wit if I want to surprise everyone it seems!😆

True, Lakshya or Ragini cannot shake SwaSan in the long run. 🤗this is for saying that!

I'll update soon.😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Oh Wow!!! That was something worth waiting. Everyone is holding on to their cards quite tight. Patte khulenge magar dheere dheere. Poor Swara, trapped among these sharks. But koi nahin. I'm Sure Sanskaar is there to protect her.
P.S. could you please give me a link to your other works.
Thankyou

Thank you! Sanskar will protect his Swara, there's nothing for us to worry.

PS; in the fan fiction index you'll find my SS Ice King, it has the link to its sequel in the first post. Happy reading!😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Awesome yaa

Thanks dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Brilliant update! I think I can kind of guess the past after reading this update.
Is Swara Ragini's sister? The sister that she wanted out of the house? If so, did Swara find out before her memory loss?
I absolutely loved how scared of Sanskaar Ragini seems to be! It was a delight to read her thoughts.
Where exactly does Lakshya get off reminding Sanskaar about that worthless promise? And then he dares to act like he is the victim? I am so glad Sanskaar replied back to him and how!
Was Adarsh's wife, by any chance, Sanskaar's first love? In one of the previous parts, Lakshya was talking about how Adarsh was the only one to snatch something from Sanskaar, was this it?
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks dear😊

yes, and Swara found it and something else too.

Ragini here knows her enemies well.

It was high time for Sanskar to reply.

I really can't talk about Adarsh just yet😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Awesome update

Thank you😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86
Ragini ka laksh ko thappad lajawaab . Yaha bhi laksh waisa hi hai jaisa serial mein pyaar ke naam pe gulati khata hua bandaar. Accha hai sanky ko pata chala ke uska lucky cheater hai naa li uski biwi
Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki secret leak karwane k picje bhi adarsh ka haat tha kuki lucky k paas dimaag nahon hai
Par mujhe ek baat abhi bhi clear nahin ragini swata se nafrat ku karti hai.use uski maa nahin mili isliye ya phir luvky ki wajah se. Waise toh itna dilschap tha updaye aapko bahut sukriya
. And pm k liye thank u.

@ bold Are yaar haste haste mar jaungi! Lakshya ko kisine kabhi bhi itna insult nahi kiya honga wo bhi tameez se😆

Suchchi, usske pass dimag nahi hai, wo toh bus mouke ki faida utta raha ta. Ragini aur Swara ki kahani mein twist abhi bhaki hai,

You're welcome dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
Hi,Saku🤗
Read both chapters 5 and 6 at one go,really it is too good dear,waiting to see things getting the peek of it's level👏👏
Do continue soon dear😊😊

Hi Jenny🤗 (I think that is your name right?)

Thanks dear, I'm so glad you found it interesting, I'll continue soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

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Saku, I am so sorry I took so long to update my comment, the weekend was a hive of activity. 😊 Taking kiddo to art class on Saturday, date with Hubby to see Spectre, and then Sunday had guests over at home. Wanted to comment in detail from my laptop as I don't like leaving cursory, proforma comments typed on my phone.

I was intrigued by this chapter. Lots of ground you've covered here, and there was a shift in pace from the earlier updates. Read almost like a Sheldon novel, with loads of double crosses and double-double crosses going on. 😉

So Kavita is Adarsh's wife---the one who left Sanskaar broken hearted. Adarsh was vile and cunning enough to treat his cousin that way, and wants to play his rather foolish younger brother to inflict a similar, but even more damaging blow. My, this is like the Kauravas all over again. I like the overtones from the epics you bring into your works.

So Sanskaar did play a role in creating that initial storm in Swara's life--where Lakshya, callow and impetuous as ever, suspected her of having a fling with Sanskaar, though he was engaged to marry her. Fickle and untrusting! So I guess after this, he would get married to Ragini? But then how does he veer back to Swara?

Sanskaar, at the time of the wedding, confesses to Swara that he genuinely loves her, and also that he would let her go back to Lakshya later, once he's come into his senses and divorced Ragini. 🤢 I'm sure he meant it, the Sanskaar in your fic does seem to love with the same selfless, passionate intensity as the one on the serial. But I guess in the intervening period, Swara grows to love him too, and when she's framed for leaking Sanskaar's secrets to Lakshya, the supposed betrayal becomes too much for him to bear? After what happened with Kavita--Adarsh?

Saku, once again, hats off for creating such layered works. You imbue your characters with so many shades of gray. I've told Medhu before, this has now become my favorite color, after reading a couple of her pieces on Ragini & Sanskaar. Your writing makes me love it all over again!

And yes--Update soon! And a looong one at that. 😉

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