Incandescent- A SwaSan OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Thank u sooo veryyy much for this short and sweet lovely OS.
This was so needed!
After the horrible precap and confusing negative spoilers, I was in total confusion and in pain yaar!
This made my mood so better.
Good start, early in the morning😊

Now coming to the OS.-
SwaSan chemistry was so passionate and sweet!
Loved it beyond words.

Then the way u wrote it made it the more beautiful. Your choice of words, and the description of their love, relationship, trust was so elegant and exquisite! Truly Incandescent!

Loved it sooo much. 👏👏

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shru🤗

It was one of the most beautiful one shots I've read and a best one centering Diwali. Thanks for remembering me at the beginning❤️ After all ek Swasanian ka durdh toh ek Swasanian hi jaane

we'll have to imagine tons of happy moments to get through this torture unharmed.

Coming to the OS, so the lessons are going well huh☺️

then the gift exchange was mind blowing, Swara as usual thinking of her own benefit here, after all it would be her using those handkerchiefs right?

What touched me most was the conversation. True, even if we have overcome the pain, the scars are ever present. Memories would always remain and fears would be recalled from time to time, the most important thing is to counter them and keep holding to what you treasure. Totally agree with Sanskar here. Felt the depth of his love once more and too glad to see the same reflected from Swara

This is just pure gold!!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: indrani7495

Wow...beautifully written...how i wish even d channel people show some realisation now ...oderwise the character swara is becoming unrealistc...bt ur OS was again an awsome read after ur four shots...👏🥳and thanx for d pm...!!

Originally posted by: .Regal.

I absolutely love the title of your story, very fitting for Diwali and Swara and Sanskaar!

I loved Sanskaar naughtiness in the being, tricking Swara seems to be the way to go!😳 I really loved how they seemed to be wrapped in their own little bubble throughout the story. Even with the other characters, Sanskaar and Swara seem to gravitate to each other nonetheless. Sanskaar letting his guard down is so nice to read, considering he is withholding all his emotions.

Oh Sujata, even when she approves of Swara she still ruins the moment! Sanskaar helping the ladies, wouldn't of pictured it any other way. Always trying to be with Swara, not that I mind 😃.

AP wise thoughts put everything is perspective from the 4 shot before. I feel that even is Ragini ruined the relationship with Swara, there seems to be an underlying mental condition for her actions. Laksh on the other hand broke his relationship with his brother all by himself. 😡 Constantly berating him, and only thinking about Swara. Even in the last fic, he pushed Sanskaar even when he was hurt for Swara. (not that I don't like Swara), but somethings shouldn't come in between siblings. Sanskaar seems to be always considerate, and Laksh has no regards for anyone but himself!

The gift exchange was by far the cutest little snippet I have ever read!😳 Swara is beyond adorable and I love that their friendship is the foundation for the love, because it gives such cute moments!!

And of course, Sanskaar consoling a slightly traumatized Swara and vowing to love and care for her forever - what more, as a reader, could I possibly want! This couple will be the death of me!

Thanks for this fab epilogue? story!

And I think I might be binge reading your other stories tonight! 😆

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shru 🤗

Thank you so much for writing this! After yesterday, all of us needed this to boost us all up. 😆

Coming to the OS, I was blushing throughout the first half of the OS. Sanskaar and Swara living together like a proper husband and wife - how I loved it. Beautifully portrayed. I also enjoyed Swara's realisation that in all this mess - Sanskaar has been the one who has been hurt the most and she has to make up for it. 😉

I am glad you showed Sujata a bit different from the show. I like Sujju's comic element in the show but I would rather have her accept Swara they way she has accepted them in the OS.

Lovely! 👏

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hello! I always get so happy when I see a (relatively) new reader (you read the 4 shot:)) and one that leaves me such detailed and thoughtful, not to forget- kind and sweet comments- is especially welcome! Thank you for your lovely words! Please share your name if you don't mind?!

So glad you like this and you certainly picked up all the nuances I hoped would come across so I am so pleased. Sujju- haha- exactly- still interrupting like she did in the tent the other time?! At the moment, you are in the minority for liking Swara 😆. I always try to stick up for the girl but in the show, at the moment- she is annoying me hugely. So wanted her more "real" here. Sanskaar is easy to make look good- no effort needed 😃. Epilogue indeed but just wanted it constructed as a stand alone story too. Thanks again for your words x

Originally posted by: kaku17

shruti...🤗

thanks so much for a lovely Diwali gift...it was required after a pathetic episode yesterday...🤢.

I loved the naughty duo...and my heart is totally set on dramebaaz sanskaar...who so diligently teaches swara the asanskaari things and she being a wonderful student...😆

I loved the way you incorporated the unpleasant happenibngs in their past with their blissful pleasant...as I feel one cannot simply brush those unpleasantness totally under the carpet ...moreover when the residual feelings of the aftermath is still around...

sanskaar's gift was so awww and the way he decides to gift it 😳...but swara's gift takes the cake...😛...liked her sense of houmour which she totally lacks in the show 😡...(anyways am not gonna start on show wali swara cuz if I do I won't stop and this time I defo would spew venom at swara which hardcore swara fans might not like...)

please keep writing more and give us swara and sanskaar, the duo whom we all have come to love..😃

cheers

Originally posted by: Messi2

awesome yaar thanks u dedicated it to us ur one of the writers here lifting up swasan fans spirits warna yeh episodes tho...