Incandescent- A SwaSan OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Shru - This is such a pleasurable and happy happy OS! My morning is made after reading it...But first off, I hope you're feeling better after writing it. Lots of jhappis 🤗🤗🤗

How I wish this happened on the show during Diwali? But we get an actual Dhamaka instead! Anyway, coming to the OS, I loved the nautankibaaz Sanskaar 🤣 How cutely was he pretending to sleep while trying to secretly admire his wife 😆

Swara, as innocent as ever, fell for his pretense and thus the morning lesson began ☺️ I just loved the fact that Sanskaar abandoned his Sanskaar here. This was such a naughty and cute scene ❤️ But they got interrupted by Sujju! 🤔

And then, the next part where SwaSan act completely like a newly wed couple and it doesn't go unnoticed by Ramu and he teases them, pleasant surprise here 😲

When you mentioned AP, I was feeling zero sympathy for her thgh. Very uncharacteristic of me to say this, but she deserves what she got 😳

SwaSan's gifting scene was ☺️ and 🤣 Swara is learning quick from her husband 😆

The message at the end abt how they can cope was beautiful and something I'm sure would never be dealth with in depth on the show. But, i'm pretty satisfied with what you gave us. Swara's concern and fear over the fire crackers, Sanskaar making her understand that they'll face everything happily as long as they are together, Swara's realization of how much she and everyone else hurt Sanskaar and abt the depth of his love. The guy never ceases to amaze me too, both on the show and in your stories

You nailed it all over again and I'm going to blame you if we don't get good Diwali scenes 😆

Btw I've missed my class to read this and I really gotta go now! Keep writing 🤗

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Shruti *hugs*
Thanks for the much needed relief..it was like a soothing balm for my shipper heart...!!!
The hurt pain and anger has been eased a lot by this story...it was a perfect remedy for poor swason phankas who had been tortured to no ends by these CV's
The love romance desire comfort was very poigantly described!!
The start was fabulous and the end perfect...!!
I just loved how u described the little things about their repo
Thanks u so much for writing thus story at a Time when it was required the most
my heart is pained to see sanky in such Condition..when would swara acknowledge his sacrifices which he is giving without boasting
Thanks again
And a wonderful piece of writing
love
Samiya

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Hi Shruthi,

Will comment soon...got my fingers jammed between car door last week...still recovering...so not much commenting on IF last week

Originally posted by: harshsriti

shruti... love you dear.. for this lovely update. .. it is very sweet and beautiful update... now I have no hopes from Cvs.. they destroyed swara.. so I have only hopes from the lovely fictional stories in the forum.. swara gifted hand kerchieves to sanskar.. that was wonderful. . loved swara's concern for sanskar. . thank you dear for such a lovely update.. hope more and more amazing updates from you shruti.. sorry I'm not getting any words.. whenever I'm thinking about swara.. my blood boils.. shruti I have a request please write something like a new girl in sanskar's life or kavitha returns.. swara's jealousy. something like that.. Please. . fed up with the torture. . love you dear.. hope my request full filled.

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

This OS is a lovely surprise and a much needed relief from all craps of the real show..

The story , the concept , the dialog everything is perfect and the way you presented the picture of their relationship , their bonding is just amazing , I am still imagining your story , I wish cvs reads your OS.

And I also liked the Sujatha part very much as i am tired with her bangalan jaap everywhere, Being a Bengali , I actually hate her carzy comments she every time made for Bengali women, But if she really accepts Swara one day gladly , I will be like (only because she would finally stop bangalan jaap 🤣), and I don't trust cvs, so there's a possibility cvs gonna make Sujatha the next negative character trying to separate SwaSan. Thats why I wish cvs read your OS and collect some intelligent points from here.. 😊

The best part was Diwali gift part , well you did not forget the role of hankys 😆 I loved it , and then Sanskar's words , oh my God , I am in love with the dialogues you used here, So matching with his personality yet so different from the show...

Your OS is all SwaSanians dream come true, you gave us a much needed relief converting our feelings in your beautiful words, and Thank you so much dear, for that 😊

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome..

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chalo at least someone knows how a diwali gift should be. Warna kal ke disastrous episode n precap ko padhke i was just so fed up! Thanks for this diwali gift! 🤗

They are so comfortable around each other. That scene in the morning where he pulls her to him ☺️ Ram waise jyada bolta nahi hai, par jab bhi muh kholega direct sixer hoti hai uski 🤣

Swara scared of crackers and even doesnt want her beloved hubby anywhere near them 😳 swara gifts kerchiefs to sanky??! They say u shudnt gift kerchiefs, jhagda ho jata hai. But ye dono to fight anyways so might as well give it. Swara ke hi kaam aane hai 😆

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Shru🤗

Such a beautiful n light hearted OS

SwaSan were so cute n so much in lovebut only in OS because i know we never get these kind of scenes on the show...CVs r vampires😈blood suckers kahin ke they love to suck our blood...khoon choosne waaley CVs...love u shru ur stories r much better than their so called creativity👏

N u dedicatef this post to the SwaSanians...awww🤗

Enough of my blabbering now coming to the OS

Swara loves Sanskaar...the way she behaves when sanskaar felt uncomfortable because of the sunrays was superb

Their morning romance was so cute...finally the behaved like a normal couple but sujju caught them😆wrong timing aunty ji😉

Sanskaar gifted her a beautiful necklace n her return gift to him was hanky🤣Swara's gift was more important kyunki woh jada zaroori tha she must had used all of his hankys🤪

N finally no devar devarani was there...m so happy

Loved it shru

Thanks for the pm dear🤗

Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

So beautifully written..

Swara's fear..Sanskaar's dialogue 👏

Depth of Swara's realization well penned 👏


loved it ❤️

u deserve jhappi fr writing dis 🤗