PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
Nice one!

thank u 😊

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
This is going really exciting
Plss Sanskaar sahi vakt par aa jaaye aur sab theek ho jaaye!

thank u sooo much sakshi dear.😃.let us see who saves swara😊

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

PART 11

Samar opened the door, dragged her inside and bolted the door from inside. He swept Swara off her feet, carried her towards the bed and laid her down. He looked at her beautiful face with her eyes completely closed.
He thought "You are mine Swara ..." and he touched her forehead with his index finger and traced it along her cheek and then her lips, smiling sinfully.
Samar bent and lowered his head towards her face. She was looking angel like in her red party wear knee length frock.
Suddenly someone knocked the door..."Knock...Knock..Knock.."Samar was startled. He didn't know what to do. He suddenly took a blanket and covered Swara from head to toe. Then he went and opened the door.
It was Lakshya and Samar felt really angry at him for disturbing such a pleasurable moment.
Sm:(angry tone) Kya chahiye tumhein.?
La:(angrily) Wahin toh main tumse poonchna chaahta hoon..Karna kya chaahte ho tum..?
Sm: (shrugs) Main toh bas aaraam kar raha tha..Tabiyat kuch teek nahin tha..
La: (serious tone, frowning) Oh Really..!! Tum Swara ko saath mein kyun leke aaye the..?
Sm: (startled, but doesn't show) Arre..Swara yahan kyun hogi ..?
La: (impatiently) Jhoot bolne ki koshish bhi mat karo...I saw you carrying her inside...Hato tum ab..
And then Lakshya pushed Samar aside and got inside the room. He looked towards the bed and saw the blanket covering a body. He took the blanket and flipped it aside. Swara was lying unconscious on the bed. Lakshya was really shocked to see her like that.
La: (bends down and pats her cheek) Swara..Utho..
Just then Samar had another idea, he walked outside the room and locked the door from outside with a click. Lakshya didn't notice him slip out of the room or lock the door, he was busy trying to wake her up.
Samar ran as fast as he could to the party hall and he walked towards the waiter (whom he had asked to serve the spiked drink to Swara earlier) and slipped some money into his pocket. He whispered something in the waiter's ear and then pointed towards Sanskaar, Ragini, Adarsh and Parineeta, who were standing together in a corner.
Sa: Swara kahan par hain..Woh tum dono ke saath thi na..
Pa: Ragini, Swara kahan chali gayi..?
Ra: Pata nahin..We had told her to wait for us over there, when we both went off to the washroom..
Ad: Aur yeh Lakshya bhi gaayab hain..
Sa: Arre Adarsh, woh washroom gaya hain..Mujhse keh ke gaya tha..Abhi aata hoga..
Just then the waiter approached them.
Waiter : (to Ragini) Madam ji..Woh jo ladki thi na aapki dosth..Usse ek ladka wahan se andar ke taraf leke gaya..Woh ladke ne mujhe ek drink deke bola ki aapki dosth ko woh drink serve karo..Kuch milaa diya tha shaayad uss ladke ne woh drink mein..Woh peete hi woh ladki behosh hone lagi aur woh ladka usse sahaara dene ke bahaane andar leke gaya..
Sanskaar couldn't believe his ears. Hot fury blazed in his eyes and he angrily went towards the waiter. But Adarsh restrained Sanskaar inside his grip and whispered in his ears.
Ad: Ruk jaao Sanskaar..Pehle Swara ko dhoondna hoga humein..Iss aadmi pe bhadakne se kuch nahin hoga..
Sanskaar was panting heavily trying to control his anger.
Sa: (to the waiter) Tum ne dekha kya, ke woh uss ladki ko leke kis taraf gaya tha..?
Waiter: Main dikhata hoon na saab ji..Par mujhpe gussa mat huyiye..Mujhe nahin maaloom tha ke usne woh drink mein kuch milaya tha..!
Ragini and Parineeta were also in panic. They were afraid to waste anymore time.
Pa: (half crying) Bhaiya..Please baatein baad mein karenge..Dikhayiye aap pehle..
The four of them hastily followed the waiter and Samar was watching them from a distance with a smirk on his face. On the way they met with Sonia and she too tailed along urgently.
Meanwhile, Lakshya had took some water from the bathroom and sprinkled it over Swara's face. Slowly Swara was coming to her senses, but she was finding it difficult to open her eyes.
Sw: (whimpers) Hmmm..Please don't touch me..Tum kaun ho..
Lakshya bent and lowered his head towards her face. He began to pat her cheeks and kept on sprinkling some more water on her face.
La: Swara..Main hoon..Lakshya..Please utho tum..!
Just then the door was unlocked and Sonia, Sanskaar, Adarsh, Parineeta and Ragini rushed into the room along with the waiter.
They all were shocked to see Lakshya with Swara. They could see him bending over Swara's face. Ragini and Parineeta clasped their hands to their mouths in bewilderment as Lakshya stood straight and faced them, shocked at their reactions.
Sa: (shouts) LAKSHYA..!!
La: Sanskaar..Main woh..Swara ko..
Lakshya couldn't complete the sentence and he received a hard blow on his face. He fell on to the ground and blood gushed out of his mouth.
La: (holding his face, helplessly says) Meri baat toh suno tum, Sanskaar..
Sanskaar charged forward and furiously hauled Lakshya up, grabbing his collars. Lakshya lost his patience and he too grabbed Sanskaar's collars defensively.
La: Stop it, Sanskaar..!!
This time, Lakshya received hard punch across his cheek and Sanskaar was blinded with rage.
Lakshya tried to push him away, but he was unsuccessful.
Meanwhile, Ragini and Parineeta were trying to revive Swara. They made her sit up and gave her some water to drink. Swara opened her eyes weakly, and as her vision adjusted to the sudden brightness, she could get a view around the room. She was shocked to find Sanskaar hitting Lakshya.
Sw: (shouts) Hey..what is happening..! Stop fighting guys..!!
When Sanskaar heard her voice, they stopped fighting and both of them turned around at the same time to look at her. Sanskaar freed himself from Lakshya and rushed towards Swara. Sitting by her side, he cupped her face and looked at her with tears of concern in his face.
Sa: Swara..Tum teek toh ho..!
Sw: (tries to smile) Sanskaar, mere sirr mein bahut dard ho raha tha aur kisi ne mujhe yahan leke aaya tha. Aaram karne ke liye..
Then suddenly she remembered Lakshya's voice, after water was sprinkled on her face.
Sw: Haan..Shaayad Lakshya tha..(smiles at Lakshya)
Sanskaar understood that Swara didn't know anything about Lakshya's intentions. Just then Lakshya too approached them, wiping his eyes furiously on his sleeve.
La: (angrily) Woh main nahin tha Swara..Woh Samar tumhein yahan leke aaya tha..!
Waiter : Nahin maine dekha tha..Yehi ladka tha..Issi ne mujhe woh drink diya tha..Swara madam ko dene keliye..Uske baad hi unhein chakkar aaya..
Lakshya went and grabbed his collars.
La: (fierce tone) Jhoot kyun bol rahe ho tum, haan..!! Kya woh Samar ne tumhein paise diye hain kya..??
Sonia was shocked hearing this. She turned Lakshya around and slapped him hard across his face.
So: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere bhaiyaa pe ungli uthaane ke liye..!
Swara was shocked hearing all this.
Sw: Lakshya..!! Tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya..?!!
La: (helpless face) Nahin Swara..At least tum toh mujhpe vishwaas karo..
She buried her face into her palms and began to cry hysterically. Ragini couldn't take it anymore, and she placed her arms around Swara, glaring at Lakshya with her tear stung eyes. Then she got up from the bed and walked towards Lakshya with a cold expression.
Ra: How could you, Lakshya..!! Mere saath pyaar ka naatak kar rahe the kya tum..?
Lakshya shook his head and tried to come closer to her with an anxious face.
La: Nahin Ragini..
But Ragini held up her hand with murderous eyes, so as to stop him.
Ra: Tumne Swara ke saath aise ghinouni harkat karne se pehle ek baar nahin socha, humare rishtey ke baare mein..
Lakshya realized that there was no way he could prove his innocence.
La: (determined face) Toh phir teek hain Ragini..(looks at everyone else, mainly at Sanskaar) Agar tum mein se kisi ko bhi mujhpe vishwaas nahin ho toh, main kuch nahin kar sakta..Trust ke bina koi bhi rishta meaningless hain..Mujhse zyaada, tum logon ko iss anjaan aadmi pe (indicates the waiter) bharosa hain na..(tears fill his eyes, and wipes away furiously)Fine..!! I don't want to prove anything to you all..(nods his head angrily)
He just turned on his heels and stomped away from the room, shaking with grief and anger. Sanskaar and Adarsh looked at each other trying to gauge his words and then they both looked away.
Parineeta turned towards Swara.
Pa: Swara Ragini..Chalo main tum dono ko hostel chodti hoon..Sonia kindly excuse us..! We are sorry for all these mess..
So:(nods) I totally understand..It's ok..!
Sonia hugged Swara and tried to comfort her.
Swara, Sanskaar, Ragini, Parineeta and Adarsh left the farm house immediately.
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Later when Sonia walked back into the party hall, she noticed the same waiter with Samar. She was shocked when she saw her brother handing him some money. She reached near them with a look of suspicion.
So:Bhaiyyaa..!!
Samar was confused and he looked at Sonia. He watched the waiter to go away . But Sonia caught hold of his arm and turned him towards her.
So: Bhaiyya aap usse paisa kyun de rahe the..?
Sm: (smiles) Tip de raha tha..!!
So: Kya aapne usse woh paise , Lakshya ke khilaaf gawaahi dene keliye diye..
Samar realized that he could not fool his sister, who was as sharp-witted as him.
Sm: (fiercely) Haan..!!
So: Par kyun bhaiyya..? Kya Lakshya sach keh raha tha..Kya aapne Swara ke saath yeh sab kuch kiya..Lakshya ne nahin..?!
Sm:(furiously)Pyar karta hoon main Swara se..Samjhi tum..(looks away furiously) Aur main usse woh Sanskaar ke saath nahin dekhna chahtha...Agar aaj woh Lakshya beech mein aaya nahin hua hota toh, Swara poori tarah meri ban gayi hoti..!!
Sonia understood that her brother had the same kind of obsession towards Swara, which she had felt for Sanskaar.
So: (bitter expression) Ek doosre ke liye bane hain woh dono..Swara aur Sanskaar...!! Aapko pata hain bhaiya..Main bhi Sanskaar ko paana chaahti thi..
Sm: Kya..?
Samar had an immediate brainwave. He knew what he had to do now. He cupped his sister's face affectionately..
Sm: Sonia..Kya tum ab bhi Sanskaar ko chaahti ho..?
So: Haan..Par..
Sm: Par war kuch nahin..Main tumhari madat karoonga usse paane mein..Tumhein mujhpe bharosa hain na..
So: (nods happily) Bilkul bhaiyaa..
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End of PART 11
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Naina😊

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

It's thrilling naina...

I dint expect lakshya to save swara..

It's a surprise...

Felt very bad for him😭

Cos of that rascal swara need to face so much... Sanskaar z very much worried..

Sanskaar in his place z furious can understand...but wat are others doing..

Trust nayye lakshya par😭

Sonia again evil ahhggg😡

Stupid samar hate him...

He stooped very low🤢

Brother sister duo very dangerous n cheap...

Bt dint expected Sonia to go back to negativity...

Nice update naina... curious for next..

Dnt knw how samar will play his cards...

Good job honey.👏⭐️

Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago

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Jwala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Nainu.. engane und? ipo storyk vanna change kando.. interest koodiyath kando? enik chilav tharunnath epozha? you did ot wonderfully dear.. bangiyayi ezhuthito.. ini ee story kure kond pokam. superb nainu.. I'm very clever na. ithile itre comment cheyyan ullu keto. . chilav ennanu ennu maatram paranja mathi. . love you so much.. and always contact me for other bakwases.. pinne ente lakshji ne paavamaki maatiyath kando.. angane irikum ennod kalichal.. paavam lakshji.. nalla role kitti

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

for the first time i have to say...poor Laksh. i hope people find out the truth soon before more friendships and relationships get broken. sonia and samar are truly brother and sister...obsessed villains. hope swasan can protect themselves against these two.

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Kashis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

full of surprises, twist turns nice

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Naina...feeling bad for lakshay.i hate dis evil bro sis...plz swasan ko save karo inse n raglak ko milado...

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

amazing update naina
nice twist dear ... feeling bad for lakshya
hate that samar but now tht stupid sonia with samar...
hope truth come fast in front of all

cont soon
thnks for pm