PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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Wow its amazing naina di plsz update soon

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Sorry Friends, but I have read all your comments and I actually wanted to reply to of them.😊 But since it would take time and would delay my update, I chose to update this part as soon as possible. 😳

I want to thank all my precious readers for the love and support you are giving me..🤗I love you all..I will surely reply to all comments for this update😊😊

PART 10

AFTER TWO WEEKS

The inter-departmental football tournament had begun. Sanskaar's department team(Abhir's team) and Samar's team (Swara's department) had reached the Finals.Today the Final match was going to be held.Both the teams were equally strong and were waiting eagerly to play their first match against each other.
Sanskaar and his team members were waiting in the changing rooms in their blue colour team uniforms..Their Captain Abhir came to them..
Ab:Guys..Samar's team is a very strong team and we have to play very wisely..Use all the tactics which our coach had taught us,but remember, only in the right places...
Everyone nodded their head in assent.
Ab:Ok..Now lets face it...BOYS..ARE YOU READY..??
All: YES!!
The whole team marched into the stadium and they stood in a row..Sanskaar looked at the place where Swara was sitting..She gave a thumps up to him and he smiled back at her..Samar's team also marched in and stood in a row opposite to them...Their uniforms were red in colour..
The captains shook their hands..And the game began..
The first half passed without scoring any goals since both the teams were equally strong..
During the halftime interval Swara and Ragini came to Sanskaar and Lakshya since they hadn't wished them Good luck in the morning...Parineeta had wished Adarsh from the home itself when she came with him in the morning..So she sat there itself saving the seats for Ragini and Swara ..
Sw:Sanskaar..Uss Samar ko haraao...
Sa:(disappointed)But Swara ..Woh log bhi bahut tez hain...Aur woh Samar bhi bahut acha player hain...
Sw:Khud pe bharosa rakho Sanskaar..Sab teek hoga..Jeet ke aana..
Sa:(smiles)Thank you Swara ..But Samar ki team tumhari department team hain na..Phir bhi..?
Sw: Kya farak padta hain...Tum uss team main nahin ho na.. (smiles)Main tumhare team ke saath hoon..
Sa:Thank you sweetheart..(and took her hand and held it closer to his chest)
But Samar was noticing them and he felt somewhat sure that Sanskaar and Swara were in love..He felt disappointed and he was really angry at Sanskaar.
Meanwhile Ragini went to Lakshya.
Ra:Lakshya,All the best..I know you will win..
La:Thank you Ragini..Love you..(smiling)
Ra:(smiles)Love you too..
Ragini and Swara went back to their seats..Sanskaar felt a new excitement in his heart as he remembered Swara's words again and again.."Khud pe bharosa rakho Sanskaar"..."Jeet ke aana"...
Soon the game began after the halftime interval. Sanskaar had the ball and he was dribbling the ball well and was making his way through the opponents and was heading to the opposite team's goal post. Suddenly out of nowhere someone snatched the ball from him and ran in the opposite direction with great speed.
Sanskaar turned back and saw that it was Samar. Sanskaar ran after him, gathering speed. Soon he reached near Samar and was about to take the ball from him. But it was too late and Samar kicked the ball hard when Sanskaar reached for it.The ball went straight into the goal post and keeper couldn't catch it...GOAL
Sa:Ohh!!Damn it!!(sat in the ground on his knees, disappointed)
La:(comes to him and pats on the shoulder)Koi baat nahin, Sanskaar..
Sa:(gets up and nods his head)Lakshya, I will pay him back...
Sanskaar looked angrily at Samar who was surrounded by his cheering team members..Samar saw Sanskaar's face and he gave Sanskaar a thumps down and made a sneering face at Sanskaar...
Sanskaar was really angry and he started to go for Samar..But Abhir came to him..
Ab:(stops him)Sanskaar..Yeh kya kar rahe ho..?Yeh ek match hain...Koi jung nahin..Isliye tumhe iska jawaab khelke dena hoga..I know that you can do it Sanskaar..Come on Sanskaar..Try to score...
Sa:Yeah..
The game resumed and soon Sanskaar got the possession of ball...Once more he was successful in dribbling his way through the opponents and he reached near the goalpost..Samar again came to him and tried to snatch the ball..But Sanskaar was ready for it..He kicked the ball hard and it went flying into the goal post..But Alas!!The keeper caught it...
Sanskaar was really disappointed and he looked at Swara ..Swara gave him a double thumps up and she mouthed "You can do it!!"...
Sw:(prays)Hey Bhagvaan.. please mere Sanskaar ko himmat dijiye..Uski madat kijiye please...
The match progressed and there was only 1 minute left for the match to end..Sanskaar thought "Its now or never...If we didn't score now they will win..No!! ". And he ran as fast as he could to reach the ball. Samar was dribbling the ball and was heading towards the goal post. Sanskaar thought determinedly "No Samar..Not this time!!"
Samar was going to kick the ball and Sanskaar took his chance and snatched the ball from him before he could even realize. Samar kicked foolishly and saw that the ball was not with him. There was a huge applause and cheers from the Sanskaar's team supporters. By the time Samar turned back Sanskaar had reached a great distance from him. Samar sweared loudly and ran back after Sanskaar. But Sanskaar had reached near the goal post and kicked the ball hard and he scored!!!GOAL..
All of the Sanskaar's team members came to him and hugged him tightly...Sanskaar felt really happy...The whistle sounded showing the end of the session...
Ab:Sanskaar..You saved us...Now we will get the extra time.
La:Yes..and we have to beat them in the next 30 minutes.
Ab:Well guys...We can do it...!!
They all stood in a round and held their hands together,raised them together and encouraged themselves...
The extra time game and started and the game progressed without any goals from the both teams. Both the teams were defending really greatly and both couldn't even reach the other goal post. Now there were only five minutes left. Adarsh was running as fast as he could with the ball and he was successful in evading the opponents and was nearing the goalpost. Suddenly one of the opponents came to him and snatched the ball and ran back quickly in the opposite direction. Samar was in the scoring position near the goalpost and he passed the ball to Samar. He was ready and he tried to kick the ball into the goalpost. But the keeper was quicker and he kicked back the ball in the opposite direction.
Sanskaar was ready for it and he dribbled the ball expertly and ran to the opposite team's goal post. When he reached near the post two of the opponents came to prevent his progress..Sanskaar saw Lakshya at the scoring position near the post...
Sa:(yells)LAKSHHHYA...(and he kicked the ball in his direction)
Lakshya took possession of the ball and kicked it...The ball flew straight into the post evading the waiting keeper and the much awaited GOAL was scored...The whistle blew just at that time notifying the end of the game...
The crowd cheered and applauded with a great noise...Sanskaar went and hugged Lakshya tightly...
Sa:We won Lakshya...!!
La:Yeah Sanskaar(hugs him back)
Soon everyone came down to the ground. Sanskaar and Lakshya were surrounded with the team members and the supporters. Sanskaar looked at Swara through the surrounding people. He could see her smiling happily at him and waving at him. He also waved back at her happily.
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Abhir and the team went to the stage and received the cup from the Principal. Sanskaar was announced as the Man of the Match.
The new college team was announced on the basis of the tournament's performance. Abhir, Sanskaar, Adarsh, Lakshya, Samar, two others in Samar's team and some other good players from the remaining teams were also selected in the college team. Abhir was declared as the captain of the new team.
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After some days, Swara and Ragini were walking through the corridor and they saw their seniors standing there. Samar was also among them. When he saw Swara he walked towards them.
Sm: Swara ...How are you..?
Sw:(tensed)Fine...
Sm: Mujhse nahin poonchogi "How are you"?
Sw:H..How are you...?(fearfully)
Sm:(imitates her) F..Fine...(laughs seeing her fearful face)Waise tum aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho...
Sw:Jee..?
Sm: (smiles) Ab tum jaa sakti ho..
Sw:Jee...(and walks swiftly with Ragini)
Samar watched Swara go with lots of desire in his eyes. When Swara and Ragini reached their class,Parineeta was already sitting there. They went and sat with her.
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Meanwhile, Sanskaar,Lakshya and Adarsh were sitting in their class. Sonia came into the class with their friends. She moved towards the front of the class.
So:Everyone listen please...Aaj mere birthday hain..And I have organized a party, only for us youngsters in our farm house...I invite each of you to my b'day party...Party aaj shaam ko 5 baje hain...
Everyone wished her singing the "Happy birthday" song. She walked towards Sanskaar,Adarsh and Lakshya..
So:Hii guys...I also wish to invite Ragini,Parineeta aur Swara for the party ..
Sa: Its will be nice Sonia..
So: I know..I will go and invite them during the break time..
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Swara, Ragini and Parineeta reached Sonia's farm house by 5' o clock and they were standing at the portico waiting for the boys to come. Suddenly Swara noticed Samar who was standing at a distance near a car talking to some of his friends.
Sw:Arre..did you notice that?
Ra and Pa:What ??
Sw:Woh..Samar..(and shows them)
Ra:Ab yeh yahan kya kar raha hain..?
Sonia noticed them standing there and came to them.
So:Arre..Tum log yahan khade ho..?Andar aayiye na..
Pa:Haan..Par Sonia..Woh humare senior Samar hi hain na..(shows her)
So:(smiles)Arre haan..Woh mere bhaiyya hain..
Ra:Kya..?
So:Haan..
It was then that the boys came in Adarsh's car...They got down and came to them..
Sw:Sonia,yeh lo tumhare B'day gift...
So:(takes it)Thank you Swara ..(hugs her)
Everyone gave her the gifts and she told them to come inside...
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Sonia cut her Birthday cake and everyone was having the cake. Samar saw Swara and walked towards her. Swara,Ragini and Parineeta were standing together and were talking with each other.
But just then Sanskaar, Adarsh and Lakshya went to them and were now standing with them. Samar noticed them and so he waited there itself and watched. Sanskaar put his arm around Swara and was laughing with her.
Jealousy burned in Samar's eyes. He angrily thought "Yeh Sanskaar ko toh main nahin chodoonga..Hmm..Usse main baad mein liptoonga...Pehle toh mujhe yeh Swara chahiye..."
Sanskaar,Adarsh and Lakshya went to talk with some of their classmates. Swara ,Ragini and Parineeta were standing in a corner. Suddenly the fruit juice Parineeta was having ,fell onto her dress from her hand..
Pa:Ragini,mujhe washroom jaana hain...Please come with me..
Ra:Ok..Swara tum yahan ruko..
Sw:Haan..
Samar thought that this was his chance. He took a drink from the counter and secretly added some tablet to it. The he called a waiter and asked him to give that drink to Swara. She was standing alone in a corner. The waiter approached her and offered her the drink. She took it and drank from it. Samar walked towards her.
Sm:Hii Swara ...
Sw:Hii...
Sm:Don't worry..I just came to talk with you..(smiles cutely)
Swara couldn't recognize that this was Samar. The tablet was affecting her senses and she was feeling a little dizzy. Samar understood that the drink was working...
Sw: (uncertainly) Oh...!!(tries to smile)
Sm:So then..How is the party..?Are you enjoying..?
Sw:Err...Excuse me...(holds her head) I am not feeling ok..
Sm:Tum aaraam karna chaahti ho...Aao na mere saath..
Sw:(shakes her head) No No..Wait..Ragini ya Parineeta ko aane do..Unke saath jaaongi main..
Sm:Unse main kahoonga...Tum aao..Tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hain...
Sw:Teek hain...
Unnoticed by anyone Samar led Swara out of the partyhall towards a long corridor. After walking some distance,she fell on to his shoulders. He put one arm around her shoulder and dragged her along. Then he reached in front of a room which was far away from the hall. He opened the door,dragged her inside and bolted the door from inside. He swept Swara off her feet, carried her towards the bed and laid her down. He looked at her beautiful face with her eyes completely closed.
He thought "You are mine Swara ..." and he touched her forehead with his index finger and traced it along her cheek and then her lips, smiling sinfully.
Samar bent and lowered his head towards her face.

******This Story will be over in a few more updates,PART 15 will be the final PART*******

End of PART 10
Share your views my dear readers.
Love you all,
Naina😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

naina...omg...plz plz stop dis samar...i want our swara to b safe...update soon dear...

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Ananna Islam

@M_Annu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

yaar..swara ko bacha lo..sanskar ko bhej do yaar..i m feeling crying..i know our hero will come to save his lady love.

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swethalovely

@swethalovely

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Awesome update

Samar 😡

Continue soon

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

Naina.. 🤗
Nice Update dear!
loved their football match.
Omg, Samar is Sonia's brother! Never expected ! btw I Loved the way sanskar hold swara's hand close to his chest 👏
Stupid Samar!! He ll b a gud headache to swasan. Can I punch him plz 😡
Hpe Sanskar arrives! U cant stop at dis point re!
Continue soon..
Kidu Update!
😳 . TC 🤗

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

no Samar don't disrespect a girl man!!! nainu make sanskar come & save her princess.. eagerly waiting for next part..

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

First it was Sonia who created problems for swara and nw her brother samar. They both don't have any other work to do? I hate him he added some tablets in her drink and took her to some other room. Hope Sonia or sanskar ll cum to save her from this idiot samar. I loved the entire update chechi.

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

nice update naina ...
football match was awsome ... san win man of the match yipeee...
loved swsan romance
hate that smar ... hope san reach at time & show right place to samar

cont soon& thnks for pm

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#440

naina!! what a twist...please get sanskar to save her and beat this idiot up! may be swasan should get samar and sonia hooked on each other...bala tal jayegi then

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