PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey naina
First of all
Beautiful story
Loving the colg going swasan ragya n adri
So sanskaar proposed swara in 3 days...wow he is so fast
swara thought he likes ragini...poor girl but sansku toh swara ko hi like karta hai
Loved it dear
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thank you dear Sonu🤗
I am glad you loved the theme😉
Swasan love at first sight hain na..he had to propose her coz of Adarsh's Dare😆

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: RAONE8

Awesome update
cont sooon

Thanks dear 😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: anu012

superb naina...cont soon
thnks for pm

Thank you so much anu😳😳😳

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

awsm update... Loved it...
SwaSan luking each others eyes... 😊
Sanskar loves Swara & but Swara misunderstood Sanskar...
Finally MU is clear between SwaSan...
waithing for nxt pt...

Hey Silpa dear..😊😊 I am glad you loved it😉

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the update dear sis. I got the answer for all my questions chechi. While reading the entire update my face was like chechi. Dare Wat he gave was super and ragini pari idea was super awesome to stare sanskar eyes. And it was laksh turn he sung a song. And again it was sanskar's turn. And this time he choose dare and Adharsh asked him to propose his love infront of everyone. After tat the girls left and as swara lost her phone he came to took it. He heared sanskar and laksh talking abt his proposal. She misunderstood tat he was n love with ragini. And she convey the same once they reached their hostel. After the college at evening everyone was waiting for sanskar to propose his love. He came with bunch of roses and walk towards swaragini and proposed swara. Swara 1st felt happy bt she remembers last night talk. And laksh went to clear her misunderstanding as sanskar too loved her at their first meet. Awesome chechi

Hello my lovely sis, gayukuttyyy😃
Unak intha update romba pudichath lle..😉
Thank you so much maa..for your lovely comments..🤗
Ithe padith naanum romba romba santhoshamaayitein😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice...very nice even I got scared that he will parpose ragini good...continue

Thanks dear..I am glad you could enjoy this update😃😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

PART 4

La:This is what happened Swara...
Sw: Really Lakshya..(laughs) Main kitni buddhu hoon na..Aadhi baat suni aur galat baat samajh gayi..
Then she saw Sanskaar,Adarsh,Parineeta and Ragini coming towards them. Swara slowly went to Sanskaar and gazed into his painful eyes.
Sw: Sanskaar..I am sorry...Woh main..
Sa: Kuch mat bolo Swara..
He took her hand in his hand and squeezed it gently. He looked into her eyes, which were tearful some moments before.
Sa: I am sorry for your tears, Swara..And I promise you that I will never let them come into your eyes again in your life..(he takes her other hand too in his other hand) I promise that I will always be the reason for all your happiness, Swara..
Swara smiled widely and nodded again, happily. Everybody clapped their hands and cheered for them. Ragini went and hugged Swara.
Ra:I'm very happy for you dear...
Ad:(clapped on Sanskaar's shoulder) Dude...Are you happy now?
Sa:(smiling happily)All this happened because of you Adarsh...Thank you so much...(hugs him)
La:Otherwise, yeh do pyaar karne waale itne jaldi ek nahin ho jaate...Hain na Swara?(looks at Swara and laughs)Now friends, lets leave them alone for some time...
Others agreed and they all moved to the canteen leaving Sanskaar and Swara alone in that garden. Swara began to feel nervous,once everybody went away. She was looking everywhere else, other than Sanskaar. She was aware of his gaze on her, and there was a butterfly fluttering feeling inside her tummy.
Sa:Swara...(looking at her intently)
Sw:Haan...(looks at Sanskaar and smiles nervously)
Sa: Baitho na...(he sits on the garden bench)
Swara silently went and sat a little bit away from Sanskaar. Sanskaar moved to sit near her and Swara's heart began to beat faster. She was feeling really tensed and slowly she looked at him. He was looking at her so intensely that she couldn't meet his eyes. Sanskaar had never looked at her like that before, and she looked away feeling even more nervous.
Sa:Swara...Tum kuch kahogi nahin..?
Sw:(looks at him) Kya..
Sa:(holding her shoulders and then turning her towards him)Idhar dekho toh Swara...(laughs gently) Arre tum itna sharmaa kyun rahi ho yaar..(smiles at her feeling amused)
Swara slowly looked at him and saw that he was smiling happily. She found his smile so cute that she forgot all her nervousness.
Sw: Sanskaar main tumse ek baat poonchoo..?
Sa: Haan..
Sw: Tumhe mujhse pyaar kaise hua..?
Sa: (shrugs) Bas..tumhe pehli baar dekhte hi..
His eyes filled with love and she blushed deep red. But still, she didn't look away this time and kept looking into his handsome face without even daring to blink.
Sa: When I saw you for the first time, I felt that I have known you forever, Swara.. I just knew that you were "the one" for me..I didn't believe in "love at first sights" till now..But after seeing you, I have started to believe in them..
Sw: But Sanskaar..Why did you dance with Ragini then..? Why didn't you ask me..?(looks at him sadly)
Sa: (sighs)Sach bataaoon toh, I was so nervous to ask you..Par Ragini aur main bahut ache dost ban gaye the..Iss liye, I was more comfortable dancing with her..You know, I didn't know that you loved me Swara..I am sorry if I hurt you..! (looks at her with helpless eyes)
Sw: Its ok Sanskaar..(nods and smiles)
Sanskaar raised his hand and touched her cheek. Swara squirmed slightly and gazed into his eyes with sparkling eyes, as he was caressing her cheek.
Sa: Tum kitni achi ho Swara..Aur..Sach kahoon toh, I have never met a girl as beautiful as you..
Sanskaar's heart warmed at her innocence and beauty. His heart skipped a beat whenever she blushed. Now he just wanted to kiss her senseless, then and there. His gaze became intense and the pace of Swara's heart beats increased. It was as if she could read his thoughts. Unable to face his intensity, Swara got up shyly and turned her back towards him.
Sw: Sanskaar..Main..Mujhe lagta hain ki humein waapas jaana chahiye..
Sanskaar realized that he was making her nervous and he enjoyed the fact. Smiling widely, he also got up. He went behind her and took her hand in his hand. Swara didn't turn to face him and her heartbeats were racing now. Sanskaar raised her hand to his lips and kissed it.
Swara's heart stopped for a moment and she felt a shock of electricwave run through her hand straight to her heart. She withdrew her hand in shock and then smiled widely without looking at him.
Sw: Main jaa rahi hoon Sanskaar..
And she ran away from him.
Sa: Swara..ruko toh..
He also ran after her, laughing pleasantly. She turned a corner and looked back at Sanskaar while running. But she couldn't find him and run into some person and stopped. She looked at the person whom she had hit on.
She knew that he was a final year student, who did the same course as Swara - BSc. Computer Science. His name was Samar Modi.
Sw:Oh!!I am so sorry...
Sm:(looking at Swara irritatedly)You are a first year, isn't it? (angrily)Dekh kar nahin chal sakti kya?
Sw:(feeling worried)Sorry...Mujhe maaf kijiye...
Sm:Hmmm...(and he went away angrily)
Sanskaar came running to her. He saw her looking nervously at Samar who was walking away.
Sa:Kya hua, Swara?
Sw:(looks at Sanskaar) I hit him while running and he got angry...He is our senior..
Sa:Don't worry Swara...He won't do anything to you...Main hoon na...
Sw:(taking his hand) Ab chalo Sanskaar...We shall go to the others..They will be in the canteen...
Sa:Teek hain...
Then they went to the canteen. Adarsh,Lakshya,Parineeta and Ragini were sitting around a table.
Ad:(sees them)Lo aagaye humare lover boy Sanskaar ,aur uski Swara...
Pa:Itne jaldi aagaye tum dono?(giggles)
Swara and Sanskaar smiled and sat with them.
La: Acha hua tum log bhi aagaye..You remeber..we all had planned to go for the latest Shahrukh film on coming Saturday...We were discussing about that..
Sa: Arre yaar, haan...!!
Ra: We can go for the matinee...
Ad: No Ragini...We shall go for the morning show...So that we can go somewhere else in the afternoon...
Sa:Wow!!that'll be wonderful..(looks at Swara romantically)
Sw:(smiles shyly at Sanskaar) But Adarsh..Will we be able to get the tickets??..Since its the next day after release, there will be very much rush..
Ad:No problem..I will make arrangements for that...
Suddenly one of the boys in Sanskaar's class came to them..
Boy: Sanskaar..we are going to play football..Are you coming...?
Sa:(gets up without thinking about anything)Haan...Main bhi aaunga...Bye friends...see you afterwards...Bye Swara...(and he runs away with the boy)
Sw:(with a helpless face)Byee...
Ad:Chalo Lakshya..Hum bhi chalte hai football khelne...mazaa aayega...
La:Ok Adarsh...
They both said "Bye" to the girls and went away..
Ra:Chalo Swara...hum bhi chalte hain...
Pa:(irritated)Yeh Adarsh bhi na..!! Mujhe ghar chodne ke baare mein bhool hi gaya..Boys are always like this.. Main bhi chalti hoon tum logon ke saath..
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In the girls hostel at night, it was 10 p.m. Everybody was preparing to sleep. Ragini and Swara were lying on their beds.
Sw:Yeh Sanskaar bilkul paagal hain...Woh aur uska football...!!
Ra:(laughs)Woh toh hain...
Sw:Uske paas mujhse teek se "bye" bolne ka bhi time nahin tha...
Suddenly Swara's mobile rang. She took it and saw that it was Sanskaar. She didn't pick the call for sometime. The mobile continued to ring. Then she answered the call.
Sw:Hello!!Kaun bol raha hain..?
Sa:(in a romantic voice)Tumhari Sanskaar...
Sw:(haughtily)Sanskaar...?? Main kisi Sanskaar ko nahin jaanthi...
Sa:Come on Swara...Naaraz ho mujhse?
Sw:(in a sad voice)Aur nahin to kya...?You were very busy in the evening...You didn't even have time to say "bye" properly...
Sa:(feeling hurt)I'm so sorry Swara...Now onwards I won't do any such thing...I promise to keep you happy always...
Sw:(feels happy)Acha..??Kya kar sakte ho tum mere liye?
Sa:Kuch bhi..
Sw:(smiles)Kuch bhi??
Sa:Haan baba...kuccchhh bhi...
Sw:Teek hain...Teek hain...(giggles)
Sa:Acha...tell me one thing...
Sw:What??
Sa:Tum mere liye kya kar sakti ho?
Sw:Hmmm...Kuch bhi...
Sa:To jaldi se mujhe ek kiss dedo..
Sw:Kya??
Sa:You only told me now that, you will do anything for me...
Sw:Phone pe?
Sa:Haan...phone pe...Ok..Pehle main deta hoon...Mmmuaaah...Ab tumhari bari...
Sw:(giggles, but then feels shy) Hmmm...Jaao Sanskaar...(then whispers to the phone)...Yahan pe sab log hain...Mujhe sharam aa rahi hain...Main nahin de sakti..
Sa:Koi bahana nahin chalega...You should give me a kiss now...
Sw:Kyaaa Sanskaaar..?
Sa:Ok baaba..If no one else is near you, will you give a kiss to me...?
Sw:Hmmm...Teek hain...
Sa:Promise...?
Sw:Promise...
Sa:Byee...Goodnight...
Sw:Bye...
Sa: Swaraa..
Sw: Kya..?
Sa: Mmmuaaahh..
Sw:(giggles) Rakhti hoon...Goodnight...
She kept the phone and lay on her bed and smiled to herself.
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Next day morning, Ragini and Swara were walking through the corridor to their class. Then they saw their seniors standing on one side. Samar was with them. He saw Swara.
Sm:(to Swara) Hey...Ruko...
Sw:(in a frightened voice)Me??
Sm:(to Swara) Haan...Only you...(then to Ragini)You can go to class..
Ragini looked at Swara nervously and went to her class.
Sm:(walking around Swara)What do you think about yourself??
Sw:(looks at Samar and trembles) Kya..? Err..Kuch nahin..
Sm:(glares at her)Hmmm...Whats your name?
Sw: Swara...
Sm: Yesterday, why were you in such a hurry??
Sw:Woh... main...
Sm:Yeh "woh main main..." kya laga rakha hai??Jaldi bol...(comes closer glaring at her)
Sw:(moves back from Samar)Woh..I am sorry...Mujhe maaf kar dijiye..
Another senior: Chod na Samar...
Sm:(to Swara)Hmmm...Teek hain...Tum jaao...
Swara was relieved and she went to the class quickly. She went and sat in her place.
Ra: What happened Swara? What did he tell?
Sw: Nothing...He asked me my name...Then he scolded me for running into him yesterday..
Pa: What is his name..?
Sw: Samar...
The teacher came to the class.
T: Good morning class...There is an important announcement. The Social Service Club of our college is organizing a camp for the first years. It is compulsory for everyone to participate. The camp is for a week.. It starts from this Sunday and will end on the coming Saturday...
There is another important announcement from our H.O.D (Head of the Department)...Boys, all those who are interested in joining in the football team of our department shall give their names to the our team captain, Samar Modi, by today afternoon...Our team requires new talented players..The Inter departmental football tournament is going to be held on this month end. Our team selection will be done today afternoon, from 2-3 pm..The best players in the tournament will also be selected in the college team..
Then the teacher started her class.
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In the afternoon break:
The teacher went out after the class and Swara,Ragini and Parineeta were chatting with the others. Suddenly Samar and two of his friends came to the first year class.
Sm:Listen first years...I am Samar Modi,our football team captain...Those who are interested for the team selection can give their names to me...
Some of the boys went to him and started to give their names...Swara showed him to Parineeta..
Sw:(in a low voice) That's him...Samar..
Ra:Come on...Lets go for lunch...
They were passing by Samar as he saw them.
Sm:Hey...Stop.. you three...where are you going?
Ra:For having lunch...
Sm: Swara...Come here..
Swara looked at the other two and she moved towards Samar.
Sm:Can you dance Swara?
Sw:K...Kya...?
Sm:(smiling sweetly) Come on Swara...Dance for us...
Sw:I don't ...
Sm:(takes out his mobile and plays the music "Prem Ratan Dhan Paayo") COME ON..DANCE SWARAA..(angrily yells)
Swara began to dance. Every one began to clap their hands. She was dancing so beautifully that even Samar began to clap his hands. Swara was relieved to see this and she danced even more beautifully. Samar couldn't take his eyes off her. He thought "She is so beautiful. And she dances well too..." Suddenly one of the boys in Swara's class called him..
Sm:(angrily)What do you want?
B:To give the name...
Sm:(comes to his senses)Oh..Alright..Stop dancing Swara...You three may go now..
Swara,Ragini and Parineeta hurried out of the class and saw Sanskaar,Adarsh and Lakshya standing there..Sanskaar's face was livid with anger..
Sa:(angrily to Swara) what was that all about? Did he make you dance...
Sw: (nervously)Haan Sanskaar...Today morning also he called me and asked my name ;he scolded me for running into him yesterday.
By that time Samar was leaving their class with his friends. He didnt notice Swara and the others.
Sa:( tries to go for Samar) Usse to main...(angrily)
Sw:(holds him)No Sanskaar..Don't create any problems..
Pa: He targeted only Swara..He didn't call any of us..I don't kow why...
La: Actually Sanskaar had sent in that boy to distract Samar..That boy is our friend..He is our room mate in the hostel...
Sw:(smiles)Thanks...You saved me from him..
She looked at Sanskaar thankfully..But he was still angry and was not looking at her.
Ad:Anyways..We have come here to tell you that we three are going for our football team selection..It is in the evening..That's after 3 oclock...just after the class ...
Ra:But our teacher told that its from 2-3...
La:Thats for your team..Ours is different team na..Remember, we do different courses..
Pa:Oh..We didn't think about that...
Ad:Parineeta...sweetheart...Will you wait for me after college..We shall go home together..
Pa:(complains)Aa ha ha...Yesterday you didn't even want me when you went to play football...Ab kya hua?(walks away from Adarsh)
Ad:Woh main kal tumse sorry kaha tha na phone pe..(goes after her)...Sorryyy yaar..Ruko tum , Parineetaaa...
Swara looked at Sanskaar, who was now smiling. She knew he was thinking about their conversation on the phone yesterday.
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End of PART 4.
Did all of you enjoy the update..
Please dont forget to like and comment, dears..
Love,
Naina
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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Naina chechi my lovely sis I was waiting for ur update. Loved the entire part asusual chechi amazing awesome mind blowing. I loved tat he told swara he won't let her tears cum hereafter and he ll b the reason for her happiness. The remaining 4 went to canteen leaving the 2 love birds to spend some time. Swara was feeling very nervous and sanskar started to tease her. So she ran and hit some senior our villan came. After tat they both went to canteen and joined their friends. Once sanskar heard football he and adharsh laksh left ASAP leaving the girls. At night sanskar called swara and asked sorry for he left soon in evening. Swara asked abt dance with ragini and he told he too was nervous and don't knw hw swara will react. Next day morning also the senior called her and talked with her. At lunch time also he asked her to dance and seeing her dancing he too admired her. By seeing sanskar got angry and asked a boy to change samar's direction. Possessive carring lover. Loved this part chechi.