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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: swethalovely
Just awesome...

Thank you😊

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Excellent OS with wonderful concept👏

Beautifully written, you penned the emotions very well

Write more on swasan

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: piccola1
A Deluge outside and inside the car...! Beautifully written and a balm to the yuck we will have to live through over the coming episodes..Lovely one, Sakura !
Ever noticed ? All our stories show Swara taking the first step to the confrontation! We're all rooting for fair play here !!😊

Thanks Pic. 😊

I seriously needed some balm to calm my poor nerves I really want Swasan soon...oh I won't make it🤢

But true dear, we all want Swara to initiate the talking. I think that idea comes from our mutual belief on Sanskar that he would never break his promise to her and mention his love again. Fair play it should be and I desperately hope so

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Beautiful and I hope you con this os further

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Excellent OS with wonderful concept👏
Beautifully written, you penned the emotions very well
Write more on swasan

Thank you😊

I already have one finished and one ongoing short stories on this adorable couple. 😊 Have you chanced upon them? Anyway yes, I do hope to write more on them.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome OS

Thank you😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez
Beautiful and I hope you con this os further

Thanks😊

I would hope to write more one shots but I don't think this can be continued dear. It has reached the climax you see.😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ChoclateLover
Beautiful OS 👏

Thank you😊

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Wow Saku lovely OS... though at first I had a doubt that this song might not suit the os but by the end you proved me wrong... it absolutely did...I loved it...
Please keep writing more

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: manasie23
Wow Saku lovely OS... though at first I had a doubt that this song might not suit the os but by the end you proved me wrong... it absolutely did...I loved it...
Please keep writing more

Thank you dear😊

Even I had a small doubt about the song but it has a dose of emotions behind the lines that go well with Swara's POV of Sanskar. I would try another OS sometime later, if the track gets hold of me and I find some nice song to go by😊

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