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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely ff dear
amazing updates
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Just read both parts together. Nice concept! 😊

Did Ragini come in between Swalak?😲

Swasan are adorable. How protective Sanskaar is of Swara and she is fully happy with him and the kids.😳

You made RagLak bhai-behen ahaha! 🤣 ⭐️

Waiting for next part now 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Dhokha Ya Daam Tha

Part 3

(outside the Life care hospital)

Swara-sanskaar m feeling nervous

Sanskaar-swara its ok dear everything will be all right

Swara-I have been practicing from last 10 yrs but i don't know why m not feeling good seems like something bad is going to happen

Sanskaar-shona I trust u kuch nhi hoga(he gave a kiss on her forehead)now go

Swara-R u sure

Sanskaar-I m

Swara-okk then bye

Sanskaar-bye

(sanskaar left from there)

(In the reception)

Receptionist-good morning Dr Swara

Swara-good morning Niya where is Dr khan

Niya-woh nhi aye abhi...but he will be there

Swara-okk m going to my cabin so whenever he came just inform me

Niya-okk doctor

(in swara's cabin...an intern Saba entered)

Saba-good morning Dr swara

Swara-good morning saba how r u...where is Sanam Ansari's report

Saba-m fine mam...n here r sanam's report(her phone starts ringing n she disconnects the call)

Swara-saba what is this u know na u cant use ur mobile while working go n put ur phone in ur locker

Saba-sorry mam actually my boy frd na he is a jerk he thinks ki main acchi doctor nhi ban sakti n that idiot(swara glared at her)sorry mam i'll go main phone rakhti hoon

Swara-hmm

[saba went from there n swara starts smiling then saba's one dialogue came in her mind...(mam he thinks ki main acchi doctor nhi ban sakti)...n she closed her eyes n remembered something]

(Flashback starts...12 years back...Mumbai)

Swara-ohh god m getting late bhaiya plzz drive fast na I have an important interview mujhe late nhi hona

Rickshawala-behenji rickshaw hai taxi nhi...time lagta hai aur upar se yeh dekho Mumbai ka traffic

Swara-ohh no...bhaiya here is ur m going

(swara started walking,suddenly a car passes and splashed some mud on her)

Swara-oye ameer ki aulaad andhe kahin ke ruk

(the car has stopped n the driver came outside)

Driver-kya hai

Swara-dikhta nhi hai kya car na hui hawai jhahaj ho gya road par bhi log chaletey hain

Driver-arey madam jane do na our sahib is getting late

Swara-accha just look at me...my dress is completely ruined n u know what i was going for an important interview now u tell me what whould I do

(a guy came out of the car)

Guy-what happened rattan

Driver-nothing sir this girl

Swara-ohh hello mister just look what ur driver has done

(that guy took out his wallet n gave 500 rs to swara)

Swara-isme itna chillane jaisa kya hai...dhulwa lena Mumbai main bohot acche dry cleaners hain itna bohot hai ho jayeha aur faaltu ki jhik jhik mujhe pasand nhi have a nice day

Swara(almost shouting)-oye ruk

(she goes to the near chai wala)

Swara-bhaiya ek cup chai dena

Chaiwala-ji behenji

(she came back with a glass of cutting chai and throw it on that guy's blazer)

Swara-what the hell...r u mad...u stupid girl...have u lost it

Swara(she gave back him his 500 rupee note)- isme itna chillane jaisa kya hai...dhulwa lena Mumbai main bohot acche dry cleaners hain itna bohot hai ho jayeha aur faaltu ki jhik jhik mujhe pasand nhi have a nice day mr arrogant

Guy-r u mad or what i was going for a meeting

Swara-oh yeah me too going for my IV...mera placement ka final round tha for an imternship and just see what u have done

Guy-wait a minute u n doctor hello miss jhik jhik tum kabhi acchi doctor nhi ban sakti n IV haan ohh really tumhe dhakke maar ke nikaal denge tum ghusna toh IV dene

Swara-mujhe atleast andar ghusne to denge tumhe toh gate se hi bhaga denge tumhare khud ke office se

Guy-tum jaisi sarfiri doctor kisi patient ko na miley

Swara-tum jaisa pagal boss kisiko na miley

Guy-u

Swara-yeah me...u know what just go to hell

Guy-yeah i guess hell is better than ur company

Swara-so just go na...why r u still standing here

Guy-rattan lets go

Guy-god kaise ladki thi koi iske saath kaise kaam kar sakta hai

Swara-kaisa banda tha koi isske saath kaise kaam kar sakta hai...bappa mera IV acche se ho jaaye bas aur interviewer aisa khadoos na ho

(she called the HR n told her ki she will be late because of some emergency n goes back to her house then she changed her clothes n was going back for her interview when she saw some crowd on road)

Swara-bhaiya kya hua

Driver-madam ji shayad accident hua hai

(swara goes to the road n saw a 60+ old woman)

Swara-ohh god inhe hospital lekar jaati hoon

(after 1 hour)

Swara-dr is she all right

Doctor-yeah she is okk nothing much just some minor injuries u can take her home waisey she wants to meet u

Swara-mujhse par kyun

Doctor-i don't know

(swara goes to that lady)

Lady-aao na beta

Swara-namastey I m swara

Lady-hamara naam Savitri Maheshwari hai sorry hamari wajah se aapko itni pareshani hui woh hamarey driver ki vajah se

Swara-its okk mam actually I m a doctor so thats why yeh meri duty hai

Lady-call me dadi maa no mam okk

Swara-okk dadi maa(her phone starts ringing she picked up the phone)yeah i know m late but there is an emergency na...listen m sorry n m coming...what but u cant do this...arey but ur boss cant reject me like this...plzz try to understand...what sorry hllo hllo

Dadi-kya hua...is everything okk

Swara-yeah everything is fine

Dadi-beta kya hua hai btao plzz

Swara- actually dad I was going for an IV but now they have rejected me

Dadi-IV

Swara-yeah its a part of our placement cum internship...i was selected for Life Care hospital n today is the last round i.e. IV with the trustee but main late ho gyi aur that stupid idiot trustee rejected me(with a sad smile)my bad luck but m not feeling bad because ur life is more important than that internship

Dadi-do u know who is the trustee

Swara-hmm some stupid Sanskaar Maheshwari mera bas chaley na main ussey jaan se maar doon

Dadi(she smiles)-waisey hum thik hain toh aap hamey hamarey ghar tak chod dengi

Swara-sure waisey m sorry i forgot to take ur mobile so aapki family ko inform nhi kar paayi

Dadi-thats completely fine beta but bill

Swara-mainey clear kar diya

Dadi-but beta

Swara-its okk na shall we go now

Dadi-chalo

(they reached the MM)

Sujata-maa yeh kya hua aapko...beta aap kon

Ram-maa r u all right n who is she

(dadi told them everything Ramta thanked swara n ram tried to gave her the money which she had paid but swara refused n said she dont want that)

(after half n hour...sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar(in a panic tone)-maa where is dadi maa is she allright hua kya hai

Sujata-she is fine sanskaar n for that we should thanks to swara

Sanskaar-who is swarasujata-woh

sanskaar-whatever main dadi maa se milke ata hoon

(he n sujata goes to dadi's room n starts chatting with her...swara who was busy on the phone came there)

Swara-aunty i think I should go now

(sanskaar turned n saw the same girl with whom he collided few hours before...n the same girl who throwed cutting chai on him that too in middle of the road)

Sanskaar-Miss jhik jhik tum

Swara-aap

Sujata-u know each other

Sanskaar-mom this girl is crazy waisey miss jhik jhik job mili

Swara-aapki meherbaani se nahi aapney duaa di thi na...kaali jabaan

Sanskaar-what kaali jabaan...excuse me u said u r going to be a doctor n u still believe in all this

Swara-i was just kidding

Sanskaar-really mujhe toh hansi nhi ayi

Swara-sense of humour jo itna kharaab hai

Sankaar-listen u jhik jhik

Swara-dont call me that

Dadi-okk plzz can u both stop it now n sanskaar aapney IV se pehley hi bechari ko reject kar diya

(SwaSan looked at dadi with confusing look)

Dadi-swara meet my grandson Sanskaar Maheshwari...the idiot n stupid trustee n she is Swara Bose the upcoming dr jisey aapney reject kar diya

Sanskaar-stupid n idiot

Swara-woh toh main hoon...sorry

(sanskaar starts smiling n swara too joined him)

Flashback ends

(Swara opened her eyes n smiles)

Swara-zindagi bhi ajeeb hai jin sey koi rishta nhi tha unhoney apnaya jin sey itna gehra rishta tha unhoney

(she again closed her eyes n a voice starts occupying her thoughts)

Voice-u know what the problem is...u don't have a character paisey ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti ho na tum

Another voice-hamein laga ki tum hamari bahu ban sakti ho but i was so wrong tum toh hamari izzat ko nilaam kar do...swara aaj se tum hamari zindagi ka hissa nhi ho arey tum toh is layak hi nhi ho woh toh hamarey bte ki wajah se tumhe apna rahe the humne tumhara rishta maanga tum jaisi anaath ka warna hum tumharey aage haath failayein arey ho hi nhi sakta tumhari aukaat hi kya hai kahaan tum aur kahaan hum log

Knock Knock

Flashback ends

(swara heard a knock n came out from her thoughts)

Swara-come in

Wardboy-mam Dr khan is in his cabin he wants to meet u

Swara-m going

(at Dr khan's cabin)

Swara(she knocked the door)-sir may I come in

Dr Khan-come in Dr swara

(swara enters)

Dr Khan-sit dr swara

Swara-Dr Khan tell me

Dr Khan-swara I have a frd Dr Avinash Sharma he is a doctor in Sanjeevani hospital

Swara-mumbai

Dr Khan-yes a complicated case...case of a heart transplantation n only u can do that

Swara-Dr Khan u know na i cant go to India so m unable to do the surgery plzz try to understand

(she was about to go when Dr Khan said)

Dr Khan-she is a kid...a 5 year old kid swara...u r also a mother na

(swara stopped)

Swara-5 saaal ki bacchii

Dr Khan-Hmmm her name is Diya Shekhawat

Swara(she was speechless)-Dr Khan I have to go home give me some time

(At MM...in SwaSan's room)

Swara-sanskaar m confused...i mean India

Sanskaar-then don't go

Swara-she is a 5 year old kid sanskar

Sanskaar-exactly that's what m saying na...go for her

Swara-par sanskaar mujhe kuch samajh nhi a rha hai aap toh sab jaantey hain na

(suddenly aarav came there he was crying)

Aarav-mamma chot lagi

(his hand was bleeding)

SwaSan(they both were shocked)-aarav baby u okk na

Sawara-sanskaar plz go n get the first aid kit

(Sanskaar gave her the first aid kit n saloni too came there...swara starts doing aarav's dressing)

Swara(she was panicking)-saloni what happened bhai ko chot kaisey lagi(swara was in tears)

Saloni-mumma we were playing n he slipped...sorry

Sanskaar-its okk princess that wasn't ur fault

(swara finished his dressing but aarav was still crying...Swara comforted him n he stopped crying)

Swara-baby kuch nhi hua mumma is here na come on stop crying (she kissed his cheeks...he stopped crying but he was still sobbing)

Dadi-aarav come beta come with me

swara-yeah go with dadi I'll get u the milk...go me n dad r coming

(Saloni n Aarav goes to there room with dadi maa)

Sanskaar-swara so now what

Swara-we r going sanskaar we r going to Mumbai agar aarav ki itni choti chot se mera yeh haal hua hai toh us bacchii ke parents toh roz mar rahe hongey

Sanskaar-that's my shona

Swara(she called Dr Khan)-Dr Khan I m going to India

Sanskaar-I'll book the tickets...hum sab jayenge...dad too needs me in his new project n Aarav n Saloni too have their 2 months vacations I'll go n talk daadi n mom dad too

swara-I'll prepare the milk

sanskaar-hmm

(he went from there)

Swara-Nhi jaanti kya honey wala hai par meri nafrat kisi ki zndagi se badi nhi hai...finally MUMBAI...m coming back

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sonu 🤗
Such a lovely update dear👏👏
Everytime Sanskaar calling Swara as Shona really s so very dreamy
Awesome update ,do continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. Do continue😳
Rags separated swalak evn as his sister. Hehe
Love swasan
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
i love SwaSan first meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ff !!!!
Loved the update
Hope there will be no trouble in Swasan relationship
Do give next part asap 😛

I have a doubt... Both Arav & Saloni are kids of swasan or not ????
Plzzz clarify!!! 😲
Edited by Annei123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This curiosity kills me.. sonu.. I want more flashbacks. . I want to know what happened in her life.. the first swasan scene was just perfect. . loved that very much.. swasan and family coming to India. . want to know what is waiting for them here.. do continue. . superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was soo sweet Sonal awww really feeling bad for diya. Wondering wat would hv hapnd ragini hd done to swara . god its getting damn interesting. Awesome awesome. Swara loves her kids a lot ..
Hehehe I loved the flashback.
Cutting chai 😆 mud lolll😆 it was very funny . miss. Jhik jhik hahaha stupid Bose 😆 dadi is so sweet ... Aww that was soo sweet

Wat will be next? Update asap
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Thnkss for pm bebs
Love
Niyati🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update!
Loved Swasan's nok-jhok and their names for each other! 😆
Swara was humiliated by her to-be in laws😲

They're all coming to India now, awesome! Waiting for the past to resurface now. 😊

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