SwaSan OS ' Without You'

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

U made me cry...😭

Without sanskar story...The emotions if the story was fantastic dear...

Loved swara braveness...and arav mini version of sanskar...

U wrote it so well dear...

Loved it...

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@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice one!

Love the way you write your dialogues btw. It's not anything OTT or dramatic, but simple and very effective. 😊

Those Swasan moments in the bedroom were soo cute!

Sanskaar died. 🥺 And what a way to go. Really liked how he was trying to cheer up his Shona, even in his last breaths. That was painfully beautiful.

So good to see Swara being strong and making Sanskaar proud. Glad she has a part of Sanskaar with her, to love, nurture and cherish until she joins him again.

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Just mind blowing OS!!👏 Its vry touchy and emotional too, specially at the end. I'm really crying after reading it. My poor SwaSan had to face a lot of trouble, so much that Sanskar lost his life!!!😭 Then at the end Swara gave appropriate reply to all.😉 Feeling bad fr Sujata mom. She loved her son vry much. Really loved that Swara asked Sujata to come and stay wit her and Arav. Arav is vry cute,always imitating his father.😆 Just loved it!!😳

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