SwaSan SS - Forever Yours! Part10 Pg47 04.01.16

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Yayyy!🥳 I was right! I was right!
This was exactly what I guessed before you confused me in the middle! I give you credit for the Annapurna part Manasi I didn't see that coming! But I knew it was going to be Kavita and her conversations...Whooo!
Anyway, I seriously enjoy your writing, they sort of fills me with childish excitement! Can't wait to see how this crack patches up! Continue soon, with another awesome chapter!⭐️

Thank you Saku...😳

glad you are enjoying it..😃

well I was obvious that Kavita will be involved but Annapoorna also I tried hinting once but it was too subtle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
OMG! That was unexpected!
Annapurna?/
Awesome update.. Do update soon Manasie

expect the unexpected...😆

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo
Loved the update Manasie
I like this Ragini
Awe such a well devised plan by Anupurna felt bad for Swara why didn't she try to talk it out with Sanskar or did she?
Poor Sanskar Kare koi bhare koi
I can't wait for them to meet! Thanks for PM
Xoxo.

Thank you they will meet in the next update😳

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written...

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Manasie..This was an interesting update..😉 Swasan romance was ☺️ I loved it.haaayy Ragini bhi maa banne jaa rahi hain..Nice😊😊 So Swara left Sanskaar 😭due to a misunderstanding created by Kavita and AP😡😡 AP still doesn't want Swara back in Sanskaar's life..Oh no.. Hope Swasan reunite..😃

Thank you Naina..

Ap is so prejuced here..

and yes SwaSan will re unite in the next part

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice story..
So, ap I s villian...
Waiting for swara sanskaar confrontation scene
Hope u update soon
I have liked the first part
If possible, pls sent pm

Thank you..

there wont be any major confrontation because our Sanky has a soft heart😳

for pm's please like the first part...

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Wow Manshi..
Wonderful story yaar..
Feeling very bad for SwaSan. 😭
Hate AP and Kavita.. 😡
RagYa is cute here.
Waiting for father daughter bonding..
Thanks for PM.

Thank you soo much

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini
AWWW THIS UPDATE WAS AWESOME
OHHH ANNPURNA IS THE CULPRIT.. AGAIN THAT BEING BONG ISSUE😡 poor swara.

Felt shy reading the room scene so well written.☺️ Hayeee lovely..
So its going to be interesting to see how it proceeds thanksss for pm.
Love
Niyati

Thank you soo much glad you liked it😳

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Awesome update Manasi 😳 Swara and Sanskar are so cute 😳 And i'm loving RagYa here 😆
AP the mastermind 😡 Sab kuch iska kiya hua hai 🥱
I hope everyone gets to know about her and Kavita's real face soon.
Update soon 😳

They will soon know everything and sabko sazaa bhi milegi..

I am glad you liked it...😳

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sneharay
Wow..just read all parts in a one go..its a awesome story..loved it..waiting for next part 😊

Thank you soo much😳

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
very nice update thanks for the pm

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: foresight
interesting...swara jumped the gun and AP knew she would. wonder why? is it just bengali thing or is there more to it?

Swara is a really naive character.. just as AP thought she blindly believed in what she was

it's a bong thing infact she had also rejected Swara's hand for Lakshya first

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Anglaise
superb update dear..
well written..
superb..
plz pm me next time..
update soon..

Thank you😳

for pm's please like the first part

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Mannu🤗
Amazing update dear
SwaSan moments were so good
Ragini is pregnant...I don't know why but I feel something bad is going to happen
Ap the double faced woman...she was thecreason behind their separation m happy that suju is with his son's decision
Waiting for the annual function
Thanks for the pm n continue soon

Nothing bad will happed actually but for once her child will be in danger..

I am trying to give all character's a new light here..

glad you liked it Sonu