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Loved it..!!
i was guessing this one..!!
w8ng for next..!

The wait was worth it. :))

Awesome update and i loved it.👏 The reveal was big and I still think there is something more to the truth. I don't know why but I feel that way. 😆

Gosh, now I'm scared.
For two things.
One as to how Ragini's plan is going to unleash.
Second, you said that we are really close to the FINALE?
Dear, I never want ur SS to end.
Please assure me that you will continue to write after Snow Queen
Or I will begin to cry 😭
I loved loved loved the Yashodara twist
And I loved that Ragini's plan was soiled
Sujata 👏
The Swara-Sanskar scene has gotten me goosebumps that are still there as I am writing this
Eagerly waiting for another chapter ⭐️

Loves the update...

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good Update..

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res. Read it, loved it immensely. But don't wanna comment over the phone. This deserves a reply from laptop 😊. For now: simply amazing. 😉

Un-res

Saku, this was a moving update on so many levels. I loved the way you had fleshed out Sujata's character. Someone who is presented in a near uni-dimensional, caricature like way, on the show. You portrayed the pain in her heart so well, of always loving Ram, to the level of adoring worship almost, but to be never able to get his love back. Of that constant fear, jealousy and near hatred of Yashodara---someone whom she hadn't even met, but who was a near-phantom like presence, hanging over her happiness with her husband.

And the way you described her crushing sense of loss, and still her determined love, after coming to know of Sanskaar's real birth mother:

""After all Kanha always belongs to Yashoda. She touched his cheek lightly, recalling the first time she had touched his warm skin, feeling the warmth of motherhood tingling through her veins. It would take a lot more than Yashodara to make that sensation go away. Yashodara might have given birth to a baby; she was the one who gave birth to Sanskar.""

Top notch, my dear.

My two pennies' worth: I now suspect Sanskaar is Durga Prasad and Yashodhara's son. Not Ram and Yashodhara's. Will you confirm or deny this in the next chapter? 😛

And needless to say, I loved the "water romance" and the growing sense of awareness, of desire, between Swara & Sanskaar. I also liked the touch of Swara hiring a detective to keep tab of Sanskaar, since she couldn't just automatically trust him, after all he'd done. But now, with that final email, she doesn't feel the need to open it, since her feelings have changed.

But I don't have a good feeling about that email, before the all important board meeting, where Ragini seems to have plotted something. Would the email contained information that might have helped her head Ragini off?

Can't wait. Update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Sakura

Sujata is truly amazing

A woman is a mother by her heart not by giving birth

Just like Yashoda and Radha(Karna's foster mother)

You are a fantastic writer

Now I am hating Annapurna more than Ragini

Actually I can't decide whether I hate Annapurna more or Ragini

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: manasie23

I loved this update... well thought and presented... ohh God your ending always scare me and make me pray for Sanskaar... I hope he does not become a scapegoat in between all the snow queens..
And well it is said 'history repeats itself' lets see how Swara-Sanskaar react to it...

Originally posted by: swa291

So my thoughts were correct or in this part that sanskar is yashodras child. Who is his father or if he is ram's son is still a question.

Swasan portions 👍🏼