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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Wow,it was a mindblowing update,I just loved it a lot👏👏

I can't wait eage to know,what is going to happen next,pls do update soon dear😊😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: rerose
Wow,it was a mindblowing update,I just loved it a lot👏👏
I can't wait eage to know,what is going to happen next,pls do update soon dear😊😊

I will update soon! Thanks dear😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: abika
intrestingg

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
That's awesome..
SwaSan Fight cutee...
AP is scaring me to hell...
She is cold and yet to dangerous to handle...
Cant predict what will be her next move...

Swara Ragini talk was awesome...
One to one fight begins...

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Continue soon..

I'm so very sorry dear. I missed this comment while replying.😕

Thanks a lot😳 You'll know AP's moves soon and Thanks again for your praise on Swaragini confrontation.

Will update soon😊

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Mind blowing update!

I can't believe that Annapurna is preying on Sujatha's insecurities! And that too by using her own sister?

Loved the SwaSan moments. Swara crying for Sanskaar was beautiful.

The best part of this update was Swara and Ragini's talk. Swara called Sanskaar her king? She's damn right that Sanskaar is not her weakness! BTW who was on the phone during that conversation?

Waiting for the next update eagerly...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Mind blowing update!
I can't believe that Annapurna is preying on Sujatha's insecurities! And that too by using her own sister?
Loved the SwaSan moments. Swara crying for Sanskaar was beautiful.
The best part of this update was Swara and Ragini's talk. Swara called Sanskaar her king? She's damn right that Sanskaar is not her weakness! BTW who was on the phone during that conversation?
Waiting for the next update eagerly...

Thanks dear😊

AP is the oldest queen here. She knows what weapon should be picked each moment.

I'm glad you liked Ragini Swara talk, can't tell you who was no the phone though.

I'll update soon😃

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#327

absolutely brilliant!! May I safely expect that Swara is warming up to Sanskar slowly.

How much I love the dialogue when she insists him to throw away those pills... such a childish innocence. Hope Swara becomes Sanskar;s childhood Shona .One day she'd may be.It

This particular conversation between Sanskar and Swara pulled the strings of my heart !!

So now AP is playing her cards with the half truth that she knows. Is Sanskar child of Yashodara ??

Ragini and Swara conversation is just superb !! The way she says that Sanskar is not my weakness but Lakshya is yours .Swara tuned into the Snow Queen mode here

Does Ragini knew that Swara loved Sanskaar in the past or is it her assumption ??

I just love this Ram Prasad here , he'd go to any lengths to protect his son . This character is just amazing !!

I am eagerly waiting for your next update !!

Wish you a very Happy Diwali Sakura !!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
absolutely brilliant!! May I safely expect that Swara is warming up to Sanskar slowly.
How much I love the dialogue when she insists him to throw away those pills... such a childish innocence. Hope Swara becomes Sanskar;s childhood Shona .One day she'd may be.It

This particular conversation between Sanskar and Swara pulled the strings of my heart !!

So now AP is playing her cards with the half truth that she knows. Is Sanskar child of Yashodara ??

Ragini and Swara conversation is just superb !! The way she says that Sanskar is not my weakness but Lakshya is yours .Swara tuned into the Snow Queen mode here
Does Ragini knew that Swara loved Sanskaar in the past or is it her assumption ??

I just love this Ram Prasad here , he'd go to any lengths to protect his son . This character is just amazing !!

I am eagerly waiting for your next update !!

Wish you a very Happy Diwali Sakura !!

Thanks a lot dear😊

Of cause you can safely expect that. Hmm someday she might.

I can't talk about Yasho😉

Yes dear it is Ragini's assumption, SwaSan was never in a relationship before.

I'm glad you're a RP fan👍🏼

I'll update soon.

Happy Diwali to you too😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#329

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#330

Res. Read it, loved it immensely. But don't wanna comment over the phone. This deserves a reply from laptop 😊. For now: simply amazing. 😉

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Saku, this was a moving update on so many levels. I loved the way you had fleshed out Sujata's character. Someone who is presented in a near uni-dimensional, caricature like way, on the show. You portrayed the pain in her heart so well, of always loving Ram, to the level of adoring worship almost, but to be never able to get his love back. Of that constant fear, jealousy and near hatred of Yashodara---someone whom she hadn't even met, but who was a near-phantom like presence, hanging over her happiness with her husband.

And the way you described her crushing sense of loss, and still her determined love, after coming to know of Sanskaar's real birth mother:

""After all Kanha always belongs to Yashoda. She touched his cheek lightly, recalling the first time she had touched his warm skin, feeling the warmth of motherhood tingling through her veins. It would take a lot more than Yashodara to make that sensation go away. Yashodara might have given birth to a baby; she was the one who gave birth to Sanskar.""

Top notch, my dear.

My two pennies' worth: I now suspect Sanskaar is Durga Prasad and Yashodhara's son. Not Ram and Yashodhara's. Will you confirm or deny this in the next chapter? 😛

And needless to say, I loved the "water romance" and the growing sense of awareness, of desire, between Swara & Sanskaar. I also liked the touch of Swara hiring a detective to keep tab of Sanskaar, since she couldn't just automatically trust him, after all he'd done. But now, with that final email, she doesn't feel the need to open it, since her feelings have changed.

But I don't have a good feeling about that email, before the all important board meeting, where Ragini seems to have plotted something. Would the email contained information that might have helped her head Ragini off?

Can't wait. Update soon. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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