SwaSan TS: I LOVE YOU Sanskaar (Completed)

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Note: Felt like writing something on Swara confession. Hope you like it..


PART 1:

Swara finally realizes that she loves Sanskaar and thinks to say it to him on his birthday... Sanskaar also knows that Swara loves him as he might have listened her saying to Sharmista but waiting for her to say. Ragya also gets to know abt it and are very angry about it.

Morning:

SwaSan Room:

He felt sun rays hitting his eyes. He got up like a normal day but suddenly remembered it was his birthday. He thought why Swara didn't wish me. She is like "jeeta jaagta calendar" how can she not wish me

He glanced at watch when his remaining sleep evaded and his eyes were big in shock.

Sanskaar: It's already 8 and he shouts Swara... Swara...

Swara literally came running and asked

Swara: What happened Sanskaar why are you shouting like this early morning?

Sanskaar: It's already 8 why didn't you wake me??

Swara: I waked you but you were saying wish me wish me and then slept off again

Sanskaar: Oh did you wish?

Swara: For what I should wish you Sanskaar? Did you get any award?

Sanskaar: By keeping his palm on his face and says yes I got "World's best sad Husband award"

Swara: What happened morning itself you are blabbering something go and get ready everyone are waiting for you for breakfast after that you should go to office as well

She turned around and smiled while he looked at her retreating figure

It was 10:30 AM and no one has wished him till now and he is not able to understand why no one wished him. Swara made sure none does. His phone wasn't receiving any calls or messages today because his sim card was replaced by her. He called Swara but her number was busy because unknowingly he was calling her number with her sim only. He frustratingly engrossed himself in the files.

It was 11:15AM when his secretary informed him about his meeting with some clients in some random hotel which was Swara plan so that he reaches the venue on time.

It took him almost 40 minutes to reach the place and he was there at 11:55.

His entry was at right time. The hall he was guided to displayed some party arrangements. He thought the place isn't for him when he heard a sound exactly @12:00PM

"Happy Birthday to You... Happy Birthday to you... Happy Birthday dear Sanskaar... Happy birthday to you..."

He has just recognized the voice of his wife when he heard the other another one

"Happy birthday to you mere Bhai"

It was Adarsh and Laksh (though laksh was not interested he was forced to wish)

He looked to find them but couldn't find anyone. When suddenly a balloon burst and everybody appeared from nowhere wishing him, hugging him and congratulating him. He smiled when his mother told him that it was Swara's plan to wish him at his birth time that is 12:00 PM. He smiled at her wonderful idea and turned his gaze in all four directions. Parineetha told him that there is another surprise waiting for him.

He heard a voice

"Sanskaar"

He looked at the direction of the sound and saw his wife standing with the mike in her hands.

Swara: Sanskaar you have a Priceless heart which always cares for everyone. Sanskaar this one is exclusively for you my dear husband

"Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye...


Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye"

After finishing the song she said

I LOVE YOU Sanskaar... I love you till eternity... I wish we get to celebrate 100 more birthdays of yours and may I sing 1000 more songs for you...

Sanskaar eyes were shedding tears. His wife has bowled him with her words

After that each and every member of family said few things about Sanskaar. The cake cutting and the party continued till late and he got his best birthday gift in the form of a perfect family, Lovely & Adorable wife.

Laksh and Ragini fumes in anger as they are not able to bear all these

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago

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Part 2(a):

After party around 6PM everyone started to home

Swara: Sanskaar I will drive the car

Sanskaar: Ok. But why??

Swara: Just like that I want to drive

Sanskaar: Ok

After half an hour Sanskaar notices that they are going in some other direction

Sanskaar: Swara where are we going? It's not the way to our home

Swara: Don't ask anything just enjoy the weather and ride

Sanskaar: So I think there are some more surprises to come. Ok I will wait for sure madam

MM House:

AP: Where are Swara and Sanskaar?

DP: They will come lately

Laksh: Why?

DP: I wanted them to spend some time so I asked Swara to have dinner outside and return

Laksh gets angry and leaves from there where as Ragini follows him

DP: Now you all also go and rest as everyone might be tired

In Car:

Sanskaar is impatient

Sanskaar: Swara where are we going? We are almost out of city

Swara Just gives a smile and says I also don't know Sanskaar but just you wait and see

Sanskaar: Very funny. I understood you won't say ok atleast until then I will play FM in which Tum Hi Ho song plays

"Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho"

Both will be listening to song and remembering their moments

Finally Swara notices there is some river bank beside the road and directs over it and follows the bank.

Sanskaar notices this but won't say anything

At the same time car gets stopped

Sanskaar: What happened why did you stop the car?

Swara: Petrol got over

Sanskaar: What? Swara are you serious? I don't have my mobile. No Petrol. I don't know where we are and why we came here.

Swara: Sanskaar you trust me right?

Sanskaar: More than myself I trust you Swara

Swara: Then please don't ask any questions and close your eyes

Sanskaar closes his eyes and Swara ties hand kerchief across Sanskaar's eyes and she goes out of the car to arrange something.

Sanskaar hears the sound but not able to understand what she is doing

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Part 2(b):

After sometime Swara comes, takes Sanskaar and asks him to open his eyes after she counts three

Sanskaar slowly opens his eyes and is surprised at the sight

He could see car standing in bank of River over river bed. Car's head light is illuminating River water making it a beautiful scenario. Stars clearly visible as if someone arranged them that way. Reflection of moon in crystal clear water. Then bon fire set by Swara on one side. Then she has arranged a dinner table with portable table set and cake was waiting for him there.

There were candles on the table and cake was his favorite.

Sanskaar has tears his eyes turns towards Swara and says I can't say how much happy I am this is the most wonderful birthday which I can't forget even in my life time. Thank you Swara. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

Swara hugs Sanskaar and says I LOVE YOU TOO Sanskaar. I am happy you liked it

Sanskaar: Not liked Swara. I Loved it & no words to express how much happy I am

Swara: Ok now no more emotions come you need to cut the cake

Sanskaar: Not me alone we both will cut it together

Swara: Ok

SwaSan cut cake together and feed each other, both are very happy. Swara keeps the cake aside and gets Sanskaar's favorite Chinese food.

Sanskaar: You arranged my favorite food also great. But we will make a small change you sit I will serve and feed you as well by saying so Sanskaar drags chair for her to sit and serves for both of them in same plate and starts feeding Swara whereas Swara feeds Sanskaar. Finally they completes eating and are lost in each other eyes but finally gets disturbed by the ring of phone call

Swara: Sanskaar Bhabhi is calling I think we should leave it will take 3 hours to reach home

Sanskaar: Swara we will stay here only for some more time. This place is very nice

Swara: But what we will say in home

Sanskaar: Don't worry I will talk give me phone

Parineetha: Swara where are you? When you will reach?

Sanskaar: Bhabhi we will reach lately petrol got over so after we get petrol we will start & come

Adarsh takes phone from Pari and says don't worry take your own time anyway Swara is having spare keys so no problem.

Sanskaar: Thank you Bhaiyya

Sanskaar: See problem solved so we will start after some more time

Sanskaar: By the way Swara how did you find this place?

Swara: I don't know about this place just I thought to drive until petrol finishes and where the car stops there we will celebrate My Sanskaar's birthday

Sanskaar: Wow that's really awesome but where will we get petrol?

Swara: In car everytime you will be having extra petrol can right

Sanskaar: No I don't have

Swara: What? Now what we will do? How we will go?

Sanskaar: He places his fingers on Swara lips and says simply I said don't worry it's there

Swara smiles.

Sanskaar: Swara Whole world is there. But we reached here today. Where no one is there only we two are present. It's very nice feeling. Thank you Swara.

Swara places her head on Sanskaar's shoulder and is lost in his thoughts

After sometime both at a time says "I LOVE YOU "

Both are shocked and looks at each other and smiles after sometime.

Sanskaar: After 5 years I celebrated My Birthday with LOVE OF MY LIFE this is the best day and best feeling.

Swara: Same here Sanskaar. I can't forget this day

By talking with each other almost it becomes 11:45 PM.

Sanskaar gets up and makes Swara to stand up and he goes on his knees and says

Sanskaar: Swara you are the most beautiful thing happened in my life. I can't live without you even for a sec. I LOVE YOU more than my life. Will you marry me once again here itself as it's the most memorable day in my life I want to make it more memorable. Swara nods yes.

Sanskaar lifts Swara and takes "Sath Phere" around bon fire lost in each other's eyes after which he makes her stand and puts a ring on Swara finger with letters engraved SS. Swara loves it...

Swara: Until today I didn't say that I LOVE YOU so When did you get this ring that too with letters engraved? Do you have any other girl in your life or wat??

Sanskaar: Are meri maa nothing like that. I know before only u love me.

Swara: How??

Sanskaar: When u were saying to maa I listened. So I thought once u say what u feels I thought to give it to you.

Swara: Oh then no problem.

Sanskaar kisses Swara on her forehead and both hug each other.

Sanskaar: Swara finally its 12AM my birthday also completed. So, let's leave. But before leaving will you dance with me Swara?

Swara nods yes. Sanskaar plays the song Manwaalage in the mobile and both dances for the song lost in each other.

"Manwa laage.. o manwa laage

Laage re sanware

Laage re sanware

Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage

Laage re sanware

Laage re sanware

Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka

hai daav re"

Song might have completed but still they are lost in each other. Finally they come into the world by thunderstorm

Sanskaar: Swara lets leave I think it's going to rain

Then both gets in to the car and leave for home

Finally around 3AM they reach home and drift to sleep as they were too tired

MORNING:

Swara gets up and sees Sanskaar talking with someone regarding some place.

Sanskaar: Whatever it is, you think how to buy that place as I want to buy it at any cost saying so he keeps the phone

Swara: Sanskaar which place you want to buy

Sanskaar: The place where we went yesterday and spent time. As it's very important place for me and I will make it more memorable all our life Swara which is only for US.

Swara hugs Sanskaar and says I LOVE YOU Sanskaar. Sanskaar too hugs Swara and says I LOVE YOU Swara...


PS: Done with TS pls give ur valuable comments..

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhasini2727

It's beautiful asha😊⭐️

Thank u yar...😳
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🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ashu
Beautiful TS dear
Loved the way she has confessed her feelings
Their date was awesome
So cute n lovely OS
Loved it
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey ashu

Beautiful TS dear
Loved the way she has confessed her feelings
Their date was awesome
So cute n lovely OS
Loved it

Thank u Sonu...🤗
Happy u loved it ..😳
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its really nyc
loved it vry much...
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So cute and lovely
Please write another. One also
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Originally posted by: iam-in-love

its really nyc
loved it vry much...

Thank u yar...

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