BIN TERE KYA HAI JEENA ~ SWASAN SS PART 5 UPDATED ON PG 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
isse kehte hai updt..meri sunday ni8 bana di tumne...
wow!swara u go girl...obviously,how can she tolerate someone insulting her sanky..
she is accepting thr relatn & sanky was so muched touched by swara's gesture..
his waiting,selfles love is now paid off..
yes yes,as i said ragz jis class me parti hai sanky uss school ka master hai..
i love to c hw sanskar gv ragini sheh & maat in her own game..go on.
thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute one.
Swara gave correct rply to Ragini.
Plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

isse kehte hai updt..meri sunday ni8 bana di tumne...

wow!swara u go girl...obviously,how can she tolerate someone insulting her sanky..
she is accepting thr relatn & sanky was so muched touched by swara's gesture..
his waiting,selfles love is now paid off..
yes yes,as i said ragz jis class me parti hai sanky uss school ka master hai..
i love to c hw sanskar gv ragini sheh & maat in her own game..go on.
thnks 4 pm.cnt soon

Thanks for liking the story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Super update so swara also started to have feelings for sanskar. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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BIN TERE KYA HAI JEENA ~ PART 5


While Swara was busy collecting her sargi and blessings of elders, Sanskar was lost in deep thoughts in his room , he was restless inside , though he maintained his calm and composed nature outside , various kinds of thoughts were fighting one with another in his brain and he was worrying on Ragini's next steps , he knew her well , he could catch her intentions like reading an open book , though the whole family accepted partial memory loss drama of Ragini , Lakshya and Sanskar never believed that , between the two , Lakshya is not getting any reason not to trust her either ,it's his immense hatred for Ragini which stopped him to trust that drama queen again , but Sanskar on the other hand , was analyzing the matter in the view of his own experience of knowing Ragini , he was observing her steps , and gradually becoming more confirmed about the obvious fact that the memory loss had been indeed a drama, there was something more dangerous cooking up in Ragini's brain..

"Lucky ko kaise pata chala ki main kamreme nahi hu ? usne toh mujhe guest room tak jaate dekha hi nahi , toh.. kisine bataya hoga , and except Ragini , koi aur ho bhi nahi sakta , kiunki logon ki baatein chupke se sunneki adaat hai usse.. hmm..but kyun ? kya chahti hai wo ? kahi , Lucky aur mere bich problem toh create nahi karna chahti hai na wo ? ya phir...Swara se firse badla.."

Sanskar was thinking all possible motives behind Ragini's game but Swara's thought made him more concerned and worried ..
" nahi Ragini ,mujhe pata hai , tum firse koi khel khel rahi ho , and ye ho nahi sakta ki tumhare target me Swara nahi hai ..lekin tum bhul gayi ho , main tumhare guru hu , main agar badal bhi gaya hu toh wo bhi Swara ke liye , Swara mere liye sbkuch hai , meri jeene ka wajah , aur main achchai ke saath zaroor hu , lekin bewakoof nahi hu , meri nazaar harwaqt tum par rahega, aur agar tumne Swara ke saath kuch bhi galat karne ki koshish ki , toh tum wo Sanskar ko dekhogi jise tum kabhi dekhna nahi chahogi , main Swara ki safety ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu , kuch bhi matlab kuch bhi.."

Sanskar decided to protect Swara at any cost and at that moment swara entered with Sargi .. Sanskar immediately removed the minimum trace of tension from his face and smiled "aa gayi ? ab dekho , ab bhi soch lo , tum ye sab kar logi ? matlab kya zaroorat hai?"

Swara :" Sanskar firse wohi baat ? dekho mujhe ye karna hai bas , ab tum mujhe na tang mat karo , mujhe ye saara khana khatm karni hai subah hone se pahle.."

Sanskar sat beside her and said "(with smile) achcha ? khana zyada hai ? main kuch madat kar du ?" he picked up one parantha..

Swara was not looking at him , she was thinking something else , there was a visible sign of worry on her face and Sanskar noticed that..

Sanskar :"kya baat hai Swara ? kya soch rahi ho " asked Sanskar (while eating parantha 😆)

Swara : "wo ..Sanskar, Ragini bohat hi padeshan hai , Lakshya ne usse wada kiya tha ki aaj pura din uske saath bitayega , par subah hote hi baat badal di aur kahe raha hai meeting hai office jaana hai ..mujhe darr hai kai Ragini ki tabiyat firse na bigad jaaye... aur kal raat bhi wo padeshan thi..mere pass aayi bhi thi"

Sanskar looked at Swara :"Ragini tumhare pass aayi thi ? kab ? mere jaane ke baad ?" (he asked with excitement )


swara : "haan toh..(surprised) lekin tum kyun puch rahe ho ?"

Sanskar immediately backed off from showing further excitement and told "kuch nahi aise hi pucha..tum batao jo bol rahi thi..waise paranthe achchi bani.."

Swara still did not notice that Sanskar was eating sargi she just went on saying "main kahe rahi thi ki.."

Sanskar "hmm.." (eating)

Swara : "ki ..tum aur Lakshya saath me office ka kaam samhalte ho na, clients se meetings etc tum dono hi samhalte ho na eksaath?"

Sanskar :"hmm" (eating)

Swara :" so main kahe rahi thi ki... aaj tum chale jao Lakshya ke jagha pe, ..aur meetings samhal lo..""

Sanskar :"hmm" (eating)

Swara :"matlab , isse Lakshya ke pass koi bahana nahi rahega aur wo Ragini ko waqt de payega , khush ho jayegi Ragini ,plz kya tum.."

Sanskar "hmm" (eating)

Swara :"kya hmm hmm , tum sun bhi rahi ho ya..omg!!!! tumne meri -puri sargi khtm kar di.." (she noticed at last

Sanskar (making puppy face) " nahi tumhare liye choda hai na..dekho wo do chamach kheer wo adha parantha ..aur tum toh Ragini ko le kar padi ho toh maine socha khane me madat kar du kyun ki subah ho jayegi aur tum khatm nahi kar paogi na?"

Swara :"achcha ji ? ye koi madat hoti hai ha ? tumhe kya tum abhi jaake naasta karoge aur mujhe pura din kuch nahi milega khaane ke liye.."

Sanskar :"wohi toh..fir kyun rakh rahi ho vrat? jaane dete hai..aur waise bachi kuchi jo kheer hai wo tumhe khana hai ya fir main hi.." Sankar winked..

swara started punching him on chest showing fake anger and Sanskar was laughing and running around the room , Sanskar was saying "dekho ye husband atyachar ho raha hai tum apne pati ko khana nahi khane de rahi ho ? yehi haal rahe gaya hai husband ka toh vrat karne me kya faida?"

Swara was laughing at his words and chasing him, but suddenly , she lost her balance and was about to fall,Sankar immediately caught her from falling by holding her tightly around her waist ..
"tum theek toh ho na?" asked Sanskar..

Swara was still laughing balancing herself perfectly in the strong embrace of sanskar , she placed her hands on his chesht and kept on laughing , sanskar was watching her , he was watching his lady love smiling after long , he was feeling like God giving him result of good works of his previous 100 births , that beautiful eyes , which was craving for happiness since long , got the magical touch of Sanskar's love and devotion and Sanskar was on cloud 9 getting his swara so happy..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Har pal haseen sa huaa hai
Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai
Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..


Swara looked back at sanskar and she also continued the eyelock with a smile..

Jab se juda tujhse jiya
Chain o qaraar dil ko mila...

Jab bhi rahoon sang tere
Bhoolun har gham shiqwa gila
Tere ishq ka hi nasha hai
Meri rooh tak mein basaa hai
Tune aankhon se jo chhuaa
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..



Swara blushed a little and lowered her head , at that time sanskar felt embarrassed and he made Swara free and told "haan...to.. ab kya kar sakte hai , maine toh sargi khatam kar li hai , toh..compensation dena padega.."

Swara ;"It's okay sanskar , tumne drama zyada kiya khaane ka aur khaya kam hi... kaafi bacha huya hai , kaafi hai mere liye..thank you for madat (laughing)"

Sanskar laughed back and said "nahi fir bhi...tum mere liye itna kuch kar rahi ho toh mujhe bhi kuch karna banta hai... chalo muh kholo ...aa karo" he took some chocolate and requested Swara to have it..

Swara :"ye kya hai ? sargi me koi chocolate khata hai kya? aur ye ab kis khusime ?"

Sanskar :"bahez nahi..abhi subah hone hi wala hai , dekho subah se pahle kuch bhi kha sakti ho..aur tumhare saasu maa ne sargi khilayi hai , ab saasu ma ka beta tumhe chocolate khila raha hai toh khana toh padega yaar..."

Swara smiled and and had the chocolate from Sanskar's hand..

Sanskar :"aur waise main aaj bohat khush hu..bohat din baad...kiunki tum khush ho aaj, bohat din baad.."

Swara looked at Sanskar and sanskar could notice the happiness in her eyes also...

Sanskar continued :" aur waise..aaj office me koi meeting nahi hai , Lakshya kyun ye sab kar raha hai wo tum samajh sakte ho... fir bhi.. main niche jaa kar sab ko kahunga ki main office jaa raha hoon kaam samhalne so that Lucky ke pass koi wajah na rahe, aur I will make it sure ki Ragini aur Lakshya eksaath waqt bitaye , ya kahi ghumne jaye, mujhe pata hai tumhari khusi Ragini ki khusi se judi hai and for you happiness, well I can do anything...wo dono jayenge ghumne , tum chinta mat karo..have your breakfast then take some rest okay.."

Swara (with smile) "thank you bolu ye tumhe manjur nahi , par ye jaroor bolungi , ..tum bohat achche insaan ho sanskar , nd I am lucky to have you in my life as .."

"as a friend.." sanskar smiled and completed her words " aur main wada karta hu , ye haasi iss chahre se kabhi gayeb nahi hogi.." he then took the plate of parantha and made swara eat a piece

Swara kept looking at him while eating and sanskar was smiling

But in his mind sanskar was thinking " main bas tumhe muskurate huye dekhna chahta hu , aise jab hi dekhta hu , lagta hai jaise sare dukh dard gayed ek hi pal me..maine aaj vrat bhi rakkhe hai tumhare iss khusi ke liye, aur sargi khake maine pahla rasam kar li hai ... (smiled)"

Sanskar: "arre dekho subah ho gayi..chalo vrat suru huyi tumhari aur..main ab jaunga niche... naasta karunga.. gobi ka parantha, aloo sabjee, laddu , mithai , paneer ke items , aur lunch me bhi toh aaj kuch special hi hoga nahi... oops tumhe kaise pata hoga , tum toh raat ko khaogi , ok karti raho vrat , main toh chala.."

swara ;" yeh list jo tum de rahe ho wo aaj ka plan hai ya aanewale 5 years me kya kya khaane waale ho wo bhi bata diya?"

both laughed again
sanskar in mind " sorry Swara aur ek baat maine chupayi tumse..Ragini ko khush rakhna mera maksat nahi hai , mujhe uska pura plan ab samajh me aa gaya hai... kal usine hi Lakshya ko tumhare kamre me aane ke liye directly aur indirectly , probably indirectly kaha hoga...wo chahte hai ki hum dono bhai apas me lade, aur karan bano tum... toh main soch raha hu , usse thoda wohi dikhau jo wo dekhna chahti hai..ab tak wo apna talent dikhaati rahi , ab turn mera hai... aaj se iss khel ki dusre part suru hone wali hai , lekin inn sab me main tumhe koi chot nahi pouchne dunga Swara, aaj se joh bhi main karunga wo tumhare liye hoga... aur wada raha tumse, iss khel ki ant me, tumhe wo sab kuch wapas mil jayega jo aaj tak ragini ke wajah se tumhe khona pada...specially wo khusi..Ragini be ready , main aa raha hoon"

Sanskar smiled and told swara " Swara main niche jaa raha hoon , Lakshya se baat bhi karna hai mujhe na ? tum baad me chale aana okay ?"

Swara nodded and a determined , committed and fearless sanskar left to start his mision .

# End of part 5

Precap : Unknown Sardarjee came to meet Ragini , says he met ragini in park , gave her lift and Ragini left her bag in his car, with that he returned an envelope as well , there was something in that envelope ... whole family shocked after knowing that
Edited by Vaibhi. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Grt update.
Sanskaar is back with a bang.
Ab Tera kya hoga Ragini...

Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
awesome update
awww swasan r damn cute
ragini tu to gyi now sanskar is bck
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Interesting ff..
Loved it !!
Do pm if possible.. Whenever u update next !!
Tc
Edited by Shikha022 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thank you all for liking it

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