Despatches Series Part 6-OS - Letter from Sanskaar to Swara - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

So finally the most awaited letter is here- Sanskaar to Swara & as expected from you Shru- Absolutely brilliant! It's just spectacular, like I had expected ⭐️

Okay sabse pehle, I love that bit about Sanskaar not using any salutation for Swara despite his heart probably overflowing with the most endearing titles for her. You see Swara, what you have done to this guy with your constant rebuffing & accusations showered upon him? I hope this stops now that she has apologized for hurting him in the quest for her stupid missions 😆

I was reading this in Sanskaar's voice, like this literally felt like Sanskaar speaking & reading it out. You really understand Sanskaar's POV & his unspoken feelings for everyone re. Such good grasp you have over him, it's unbelievable. I am so glad you are a Sanskaar fan Shru cos it's a delight to have his thought articulated by you in such amazing manner 😳

My absolute favorite bits are:

The Ours v/s Yours debate: Absolutely mind-blowing! This bit I am sure would stung Swara in a brutal honest manner if she ever were to read this.

BK & AS analogy: Oh dear, this just DEFINES Sanskaar. What he was Before Kavita & What he has become After Swara. These two different Sanskaar's, both of them in love but in varying degrees. Love as an emotion has always ruled Sanskaar, hasn't it? This needs to be read by those thick headed people too who "THINK" that Sanskaar fell for Swara in few minutes & forgot Kavita instantly. Errr no, it took him bloody 5 years of trauma to overcome Kavita's death & that growing feelings for Swara were there from the beginning itself, even when he was out to harm her but the feeling of revenge was much stronger for him at that particular point. No wonder the guy was on his way towards light & redemption as soon as he heard it from Swara itself. It wasn't sudden but very gradual IMO.

Idealist v/s Realist: Swara's utopia where everything & everyone is perfect and Sanskaar's real world solutions. Enough said.

Swara exercising her right over him & their marriage being pre-destined: Even you felt so? Thank god, I thought I was the only one grinning at the irony of her saying some relationships are just fated & no obstacle can stop them from culmination. I was like, Lady just pause for a minute & please realize what you just said cos more than RagYa, it bloody applies to YOU & YOUR marriage with Sanskaar! Even Sanskaar caught the hiddem symbolism in her words I think 😆 & Swara SO behaves like she has full rights over him. You should have included those moments where she was more disappointed in Sanskaar than Lux when Devar Ji had proposed to him. Boy, was she behaving like the typical wife there ;)

I pray that I am strong enough to withstand what awaits me. The agony of being around you without being able to hold you like I want to, kiss you senseless, make you my wife in every sense of the word, will be agonising. The pain of knowing you do not, will not, return my love will dance an endless waltz with the pleasure of having you with me, being able to see your face first thing when I wake and the last thing before I sleep, of being able to talk to you, make you laugh and dry your tears and simply just be there for you. I just wish you would open your eyes and really see- see the possibilities we have, the chance to make our little heaven for ourselves, but fortune does not always favour all those who dream of it. Yet, I cling on- to the vestiges of a frail hope that took root when you asked not to get divorced. Oh, I know why you did that, I have more than delved into that above, but I heard something on radio the other day that has stayed with me:


^^ This part OMG. I have no words to describe. It just shows the depth of love this guy feels for her, it is SO heartwrenching. Can someone be so much in love? I have a lump in my throat here ❤️

This was absolutely mesmerizing Shru 🤗 Damn I am your fangirl for life now, such finesse in writing ❤️ You are AWESOME! 🤗

Can I request for a response letter this time from Swara to Sanskaar? Don't write it now ofcourse. After Swara starts feeling something for him, hopefully Karwachauth itself :P I know you'll just kill it. Pretty please? 😳


Kavyu🤗 Some of you guys make me almost speechless as to what to say in response- thank you yaara! You have totally captured all i wanted to portray through my ramblings and like always, we are on the same wavelength 😃.It's really funny but all the bits you picked out as your best were the ones I truly and deeply felt when writing, I mean in the sense of they were simply pouring out from my heart as I typed! As for Sanskaar- what to say? I just commented above that i genuinely feel a fictional soul connect with this man- he is the sort of man I get totally attracted to- practical but romantic, truly "manly" if that makes sense- not one of those typical lovelorn types who bore me to tears. I just said to Shruti i think that I will at some point think of a Swara letter- love your suggestion of after KC- remind me if I forget although I doubt it- given the endless SwaSan obsession 😆. Thanks again my love! x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

My dear sweet Krishna- can I just say that you are seriously awesome! 🤗 I am so grateful that you spent such a lot of effort in reading so deeply and even more time in such meaningful comments. Thank you so much!
I think I have changed my mind about Shomi- in the current track if he's not leaving, I can't risk him writing to Shomi? So it will be Ragini. I wanted to do Ragz before but yesterday I was in a serious SwaSan mood so Swara got lucky and got my mad ramblings 😆. Yeah, I thought about how to start and thought that no salutation would work for Swara. You have analysed my letter probably better than I wrote it so what more can I say?! Please keep reading if you can and give me feedback, including any negatives too of course if you think them! 🤗


Aww...so Ragini is next...great can't wait to read that one...Yes as hes not leaving😆...Shumi not needed...but if you ever feel like doing one include Shumi & Dida together...😆😆😆

You could always rant about Swara and her one track mind and not noticing the obvious...😆😆😆

Till date I have loved all your Letters...there was nothing that I didn't like or love...if ever there is I will definitely tell you dear...but we seem too like minded...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purbishona

Its so beautiful Shruti.. Simply heart touching.. I was eagerly waiting for this letter.. Loved the Ashoka and Phoenix part.. So, realistic.. The division of his life BK and AS is so true.. The lines "There is no remedy for love but to love more", it is one of my favourite lines.. Your last quote is seriously just like written for Sanskaar.. I loved each and every part of this letter.. And one thing I want to say that from Sanskaar I learnt that what love actually is, true definition of love..


Purbi- thank you so much for your lovely words. Glad you liked the Ashoka reference- it always fascinated me how he really saw the terrible effects of his war after winning rather than losing. I have always loved the idea of phoenixes:). Ah, you enjoyed the Aristotle reference too? Yes, Sanskaar is an inspiration for those learning of love so couldn't agree more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

God...god...OMG!!!

Shruti dearest this is the best you have written yet. Now it seems as if really Sanskar is writing through you. This is exactly what he would say if he had a chance to get all his feelings out without being interrupted by his ever misunderstanding lady love. Good job, I love it!!


Thank you Saku 🤗. So this makes your favourites from the ones so far? Glad!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Hey Kulsum 🤗 Thanks for replying sweetie and such nice comments too! Such lovely way to start your day you described- Salaam ailekum from me! Glad you enjoyed this. Seriously, for an supposed to be intelligent girl, how dumb i is Swara being?! Haha- I know yaar, head spinning triangles and squares dikha rahe hein! Yes, next one is to our dear Ragz- but i'm feeling quite benevolent to her at the moment as she's playing Cupid for SwaSan- now how to write a mean letter to her?! 😆


Oh Loving Ragini too with all the news of her playing Cupid to Swasan...😆 I even liked her when she got married to Laksh and got rid of him from Swara's life for good...making him Swara's jiju forever...😆

As for being Mean to her...you could be empathetic..talking about what Love really is...give her some sound advice I can so see him give her with some really good veiled threat too...to never harm Swara ever again...😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piccola1

This was simply outstanding Shruti ! And such a well written, heartfelt ode to true love..I think you wrote thi straight from your heart which is why our hearts are overwhelmed reading it ⭐️

You have depicted Sanskaar's pain and frustration superbly and along with it, his unending patience, his deep understanding and his infinite love for Swara, so very beautifully. (If our Cvs and Varun were to read this, surely, it would be irresistible to them too?..I wish !😳)

Wish Swara could read this and realize what love actually means...and learn that the deep regard and respect and total trust she has for Sanskaar are the building blocks of a love that she doesnt even have an inkling of yet.

A true materpiece of a letter..Shruti and I want to thank you for this treat of despatches..each has been superlative, carrying in their flow, the ebb and tide of Sanskaar's emotions...

Btw was listening to Hemant Da's immortal rendering of "Jaane Wo Kaise Log The Jinke Pyaar Ko Pyaar Mila" while typing this and couldnt but think it is a most apt song for Sanskaar at this moment !

P.S. : Would love to see you capture Swaraa's response to this..or a Diary update of hers that will help us understand the confusion that is Swaraa !


Pic 🤗
Haha- how can the CVs and Varun see it 😆 Actually today on twitter one of the writers was posting poll on SwaLak vs SwaSan so I sent him this link and referred him to the comments too so he could see SwaSan love but i don't think they will be bothered to read anything. Not that I care as I write because I feel it all- and your 100% right- it came straight from my heart. What's amazing is the proof that when it does, others pick up on it as the comments I have had have been incredible! Am so overwhelmed. Oh God- Hemant Da is one of my all time faves and the song ❤️, perfect for Sanskaar! I am already thinking of a Swara letter so maybe after KC?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kubare


Oh Loving Ragini too with all the news of her playing Cupid to Swasan...😆 I even liked her when she got married to Laksh and got rid of him from Swara's life for good...making him Swara's jiju forever...😆

As for being Mean to her...you could be empathetic..talking about what Love really is...give her some sound advice I can so see him give her with some really good veiled threat too...to never harm Swara ever again...😆😆😆

You have taken the suspense out of my Ragz letter 😆. Psychic connection?! There's a big time veiled threat there- don't you worry but hopefully also some understanding and yes, hopefully sound advice.
BTW- random question, have you managed to save the colour and font you use as your preferences somehow or do you have to change it each time manually like I have to? I am trying to figure out a way to keep a certain font for all my posts and replies but don't know how! 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Well Written..👍🏼


Thanks a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

You have taken the suspense out of my Ragz letter 😆. Psychic connection?! There's a big time veiled threat there- don't you worry but hopefully also some understanding and yes, hopefully sound advice.
BTW- random question, have you managed to save the colour and font you use as your preferences somehow or do you have to change it each time manually like I have to? I am trying to figure out a way to keep a certain font for all my posts and replies but don't know how! 😕



Psychic connection indeed as like minded ppl think alike mostly...😆

Can't wait to read...your Sanskar's letter to her soon...😆😆😆

No have to do it manually all the time...hate that...wish IF does something to improve it...so we can keep a font ..colour.. size as our very own ...so that it remains till we change it from our setting...sigh...

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