HEART WANTS WHAT IT WANTS - Swasan SS *FINAL CHAPTER- PG1*

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez
Beautiful

Thank u! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Finally read it all !!
And totally loved it
It was fabulous
Do write more plsss

Aww thank u so much! Glad u liked the whole thing! 😳

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

The Sum of All Fears...SwaSan were worried about each other's response...you brought out beautifully and made sure the dots connected at the end...👏

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Read the last chapter Nik.

Found this funny: She played him expertly like her guitar.

Sanky certainly has a very astute wife here...and his insecurities have finally gone away.

The whole series was crisp and nice...

This last part was a bit sweet too.:)))

Love--

Medha

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Finally u updated the prologue

So rahul is a brother figure to swara n sanskaar thought the worst possibility😆men will be men

Loved how she has explained him her POV or her planning

Thanks for the pm nikz🤗

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Hey Niki

Wonderful epilogue. 😊 Loved the part where you explained how Sansku was earlier insecure only because of his uncertainty of where he stood in Swara's life...and now that he knows he is the king of her castle, he would never again feel insecure if any Rahul or Lucky or Tom or Dick or Hari 😉

Also the Muh bola jeeja sala relationship between Sansku and Rahul would be 🤣 you should write another epilogue on their witty barbs, with Swara trying to keep the peace!

The ending paras were so touching. About how their love would grow from strength to strength. About how their intense love and care for each other would never be quenched. Very lovely 😳

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

The story was just fantastic

Loved the way It was portrayed

Swara making Sanskar jealous

Thanks for the pm

Keep writing such fabulous update

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Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Nikz 🤗
Amazing ending 😳 Sanskar felt insecure seeing Swara going out with Rahul but she considers him as his brother 😆
And muh bola saala😆 Cute 😳
I loved this lines 'He was trying to see ahead but the lashing thunderstorm had blurred his vision. But then suddenly somebody, some angel had thrown a lifeboat and rescued him from those stormy turbulent waters and had secured him to the safety of the shores...
Now he was safely on the shore with that someone who saved him, his Swara, his angel, his soul mate and he was going to enjoy the beautiful and vibrant rainbow with her after enduring the worst storm of their lives in blissful peace.' Perfectly described ❤️
Congratulations on completing this beautiful SS, keep writing 🤗

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Anbhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Wowww... Such a treat to read... Thnk u so mch.. U guys write so many wonderful pieces on swasan n it helps to get over the low feeling after watching the ways they r actually treated in d show