HEART WANTS WHAT IT WANTS - Swasan SS *FINAL CHAPTER- PG1*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: princess_tara
beautiful

Thank u! 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: JazzyM
The Sum of All Fears...SwaSan were worried about each other's response...you brought out beautifully and made sure the dots connected at the end...👏

Thank u so much for reading and giving me this wonderful feedback! I'm truly glad u got the essence of the story which I intended to portray! 😳 And I'm happy that u liked the ending too. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: medhasankar
Read the last chapter Nik.
Found this funny: She played him expertly like her guitar.

Sanky certainly has a very astute wife here...and his insecurities have finally gone away.

The whole series was crisp and nice...
This last part was a bit sweet too.:)))

Love--
Medha

@ red : My God Medha u really have a lazy goose detection software some where! I have big doubts now!😆 Otherwise how did u find the only place where my laziness shown its pretty face in this whole SS? 😲Well other than the dozen typos and grammar mistakes, I mean!😆

So now u hv no go but to hear my boring lazygoose story regarding that!😆

Okies so as I have earlier said in my AN, I had written this as an OS, so towards the end my beja was fried with all the heavy stuff I was thinking on behalf of swasan that I decided I needed to take a chill pill and write some fluff. So I had inserted that 'guitar' dialog with the intention that I would follow it up with some diallogues like, " Oh I can play u expertly like a guitar too, if u get wat I mean' type GM dialog frm Sanky. Or something like "sanskar btw i knw u too play guitar, we shud keep a jugalbandi and see whoz betr' or something on those lines, or Swara saying,' U know even Rahul plays guitar very well..." and try to irritate Sanky again! 😆 And had decided I will write it when I actually post it.

But before posting when I was editing it my phemouse LG syndrome had come and I decided to skip that part! 😆 I thought I should edit that word too, but then again my LG syn happily encouraged me to chuck it, saying no one going to notice it! 😆 Hmm, so I hve learnt my lesson now... So no more LGing in writing! Girl scout' honour! 😉

PS: I guess U might be wondering "why the hell did I mention it now? I had to read all this crap coz of dat!" 😆😆

And yeah before I forget, thanks a lot for compliments dear! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Finally u updated the prologue
So rahul is a brother figure to swara n sanskaar thought the worst possibility😆men will be men
Loved how she has explained him her POV or her planning
Thanks for the pm nikz🤗

I know! Men right?! Silly ppl! 😆

Thanks hun! 🤗

Glad u liked the ending!😳 I thought she needed to give some logical explanations about her so called 'master plan', to be fair to her and Rahul, the poor guy, everybody hated him! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ketty84
Very well next update pls

Thank u dear. 😃 But this SS is now finished dear. Will PM u if and when I write anything else new. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hey Niki
Wonderful epilogue. 😊 Loved the part where you explained how Sansku was earlier insecure only because of his uncertainty of where he stood in Swara's life...and now that he knows he is the king of her castle, he would never again feel insecure if any Rahul or Lucky or Tom or Dick or Hari 😉

Also the Muh bola jeeja sala relationship between Sansku and Rahul would be 🤣 you should write another epilogue on their witty barbs, with Swara trying to keep the peace!

The ending paras were so touching. About how their love would grow from strength to strength. About how their intense love and care for each other would never be quenched. Very lovely 😳

Viji 🤗 Thnx hun.

Yep our Sanky baby is all sorted now. Bandha has become super cool now! 😆

Oh I actually had plans, not actually including Rahul but just to hv a mock taunting session between swasan regarding him, but was too lazy to write... 😆 Now that u say, I can imagine a real fun convo in dida's house! He might evn speak Bengali this time and if by chance he makes a mistake and Rahul mocks him then dida will say something about that and cover it up and support him saying that he was indeed right!

Sanky might regale them with charming tales of how Mr. Rahul, there was a total casanova and how he flirted with various clients in detail! 😆 With Rahul trying his best to defend himself! May be he might get hitched bcz of swasan too! Oh it wud be real fun! 😉

Swara I believe will be supporting each taking turns, after all one is her bhaiyya n other her saiyya! 😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
beautiful end

Thank u! Glad u liked the ending. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Shikha022
Simply loved it !!!!!!!

Thank u so much!! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
The story was just fantastic
Loved the way It was portrayed
Swara making Sanskar jealous
Thanks for the pm
Keep writing such fabulous update

Thank u so much for the lovely comments dear! I'm so glad u liked the whole SS! 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Nikz 🤗
Amazing ending 😳 Sanskar felt insecure seeing Swara going out with Rahul but she considers him as his brother 😆
And muh bola saala😆 Cute 😳
I loved this lines 'He was trying to see ahead but the lashing thunderstorm had blurred his vision. But then suddenly somebody, some angel had thrown a lifeboat and rescued him from those stormy turbulent waters and had secured him to the safety of the shores...
Now he was safely on the shore with that someone who saved him, his Swara, his angel, his soul mate and he was going to enjoy the beautiful and vibrant rainbow with her after enduring the worst storm of their lives in blissful peace.' Perfectly described ❤️
Congratulations on completing this beautiful SS, keep writing 🤗

Preet!! 🤗 🤗

Thank u so very much hun! I'm truly very happy that u liked the whole thing!😃 🤗

-Luv Nikz

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago