NIGHT JASMINE- Sanskar's POV- A Swasan Babble Drabble

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh so this is the weird loop your mind was looping in?:D

It was ...umm I can literally smell the attar Nik...and thats saying something.

Great portrayal of the cadbury silk scene in the cr today.

I just wish you had added something at the end.

"and an ugly turtle like head popped out..and ruined the moment. who'd it belong to?...Lux of course" ufff!

anyway...this was a nice POV hon.

GN.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Oh so this is the weird loop your mind was looping in?:D
It was ...umm I can literally smell the attar Nik...and thats saying something.
Great portrayal of the cadbury silk scene in the cr today.

I just wish you had added something at the end.
"and an ugly turtle like head popped out..and ruined the moment. who'd it belong to?...Lux of course" ufff!

anyway...this was a nice POV hon.

GN.

Hahaha you caught me! This is exactly what my brain was looping in... some weird non-sense... dunno what came over me...😆 And I was not kidding when I said ur writing rooted me... It really did. 😳

And hehe turtle?! My fren used to have 2 cute lil ones, so I kinda don't want to insult the species... 😆 But now that you have said it, I guess tomorrow when they show it again, I going to crack up like a nutcase! 😆

Gunnyt n peaceful dreams huny!

-Luv Niki

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Niki- this was so nice! BTW- night jasmine is one of my favourite scents 😃.

The line- "We don't exist for her and since I exist for her happiness" was superb in particular 👏👏

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Niki- this was so nice! BTW- night jasmine is one of my favourite scents 😃.
The line- "We don't exist for her and since I exist for her happiness" was superb in particular 👏👏

Thank u hun😳 i'm glad u could make sense of this madness! I actually set out to write a poem on Sanz babes and ended up writing this out of no where! 😕 And then wrote 2 completely different poems with no connection to Sanz whatsoever! Stupid brain, I tell u !🥱

And dearie Hi5! Night Jasmine is one of my favs too... Actually had recently visited an exclusive organic shop while travelling and was shopping for attar. The sales gal was showing me all exotic fragrances saying that is what is most famous there and I didn't like a single one... She was all huffing and puffing and I was getting headaches! Then finally I asked her to show me few things she wasn't touching and she said these are the common rose and jasmine stuff. And to my delight and to her shock I liked them all! She was like 😕 and I was like😳 and said to my mom that I guess my olfactory senses are too local! Can't help it now!😆 And ended up with Night jasmine for my dresser. 😳 It smells heavenly!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Niki 😊 I really liked it. I just love night jasmine, BTW, its called pavazha malli in tamil (which is my mother tongue), and of course, parijata in Hindi.

The scent is divine, but apart from that, the sight of the fallen white flowers with reddish orange centers, carpeting the ground beneath the tree...sheer magic, I tell you! 😊

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Niki 😊 I really liked it. I just love night jasmine, BTW, its called pavazha malli in tamil (which his my mother tongue), and of course, parijata in Hindi.

The scent is divine, but apart from that, the sight of the fallen white flowers with reddish orange centers, carpeting the ground beneath the tree...sheer magic, I tell you! 😊

Thank u Viji. Glad u could make some sense of it. 😳

And thanks for the info! I was actually thinking that it was the other plump jasmine variety when I bought the attar (WRT to my above reply to Shruthi). Thanks to you, now I know that is the orange centered one! Hmm now I wonder what the plump ones are called in English... Guess that will be my today's wiki expedition! 😉

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sree2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi dear... you wrote it well...👏

But it left an ache in my heart.. I simply don't know to express it.You expressed better than the sequence aired yesterday.You are really talented.

Keep on writing.. Looking forward for your new works

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sree2015
Hi dear... you wrote it well...👏
But it left an ache in my heart.. I simply don't know to express it.You expressed better than the sequence aired yesterday.You are really talented.

Keep on writing.. Looking forward for your new works

Aww thank you for such lovely compliments dear.😳 I'm really glad it conveyed the emotions I wrote it with. 😳