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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#261

part-2

wow dear...

mind blowing update

so raglak got engaged...

hope lux become responsible

continue soon..

thanks for the pm..

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Sharon 🤗
Okay i'm really sorry for commenting only now, but i have been a bit busy this week
The story is beautifully described 👏
Every chapter is very well written😳 I loved this part especially, of course there were their confession and hug
I loved this line 'The sunshine who had entered his life was back. And she was his for life. Sanskar hugged her closer not allowing even air to pass between them. He bent his head and touched his cheek to hers. He revealed in euphoria taking over his heart 'I love you Swara''❤️
And Danny deserved that 😆
Sanskar se panga liya tha, to sazaa to milni hi thi😉

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Sparkle..
🤗

Sorry been meaning to comment..
then meaning some more.
Finally i dragged my lazy out here.😳..

I am loving the progress of the Story.
so the back story is Danny _ very interesting.

my favourite part gotta to be the proposal.. so damn sweet and simple.
and Sanskaar could truly be overwhelmingly scary when it comes to loving his loved ones.
khool..

terrific writing buddy.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#264

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Edited by Sparkler8 - 7 years ago

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Shivangi

@Annei123

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Wonderful Chapter Dear !!!

Waiting for the epilogue 😛

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gayu6

@gayu6

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Nice finally raglak marriage is also done. And he is there for her as support to do their album. And sanskar also is like a child asking swara not to leave him alone and go with ragini.Super. He can't live without her😳😳😳😳. Well written. Loved each and every lines dear.👏👏

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Wow a truly lovely end to a lovely story! Congrats!! ⭐️

I loved how she said,' Shona' is reserved for her parents, bro and dida!😳

And how he made her own name sound so seductive! ❤️

Loved how Sanskar wanted Uttara to be independent and if that meant he had to stay away from his kid sis for her good, then so be it. Aww...

And the loved how they dealt with their first separation news. ❤️

But am I thinking right when I think Sanskar was referring to his early college days when he meant 'love at first sight' or is it the recent meeting with meeting a more matured Swara?🤓

Anyway, will be eagerly waiting for your new PM indicating the start of a new story!😉

-Luv Niks

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago