Swasan and RagLak FF Betrayal:Do you Still Love Me?? part 19 pg 34 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

😲 I'm literally like this Shrisha...

Omg!!!! So Ragin and Laksh are married.. But they are not living with each other...
And the twist of Paris deal... I couldn't crack it...


Desperately waiting for the next update...


Haha thank you poo😃


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Beautiful.

I also so many questions while reading this.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm


thank you so much!!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Shirisha!!!
Oh my god 😆
I am laughing... god...at myself.. 🤣
U prankster!!
Oh my god.. OH-MY-GOD..
It was freaking awesome..
Swara n Laksh hv sm plans?
R they negative?
Poor SanGini..
Thank god RagLak r married..

😲😲
I m really like WHAT??? U r too bad 😆
But why did they separate? N why SanGini n Swa lak living together?

N what happened to Laksh all of a sudden? He changed so much.. he was ready to die for Sanskar n Ragini n now...

I think Laksh has sm reasons...

N Swara? She loved Sanskar so much..

In ur story I connect with both the couples..

Update soon..

N sorry for the unnecessary anger..

M still like 😲


So many questions at a time😆

Thank you so much re chotu!!!😃

Well lets see if you get your answers in the next part...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Yeah shiri we love you 🤗🤗

WHAT AN AMAZING UPDATE!!

What are swara and Laksh upto? They look really evil right now but you have something in mind, I know.

Thanks for the pm

Love ya🤗


Awww!!! Love you too🤗

Thank you😃

Let see in the next update what are they upto😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

Interesting update I wonder what these conditions are I hope we get the answers soon, please post the next part soon


Thank you Ray🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Intriguing chapter.. 👍🏼


Thank you so much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 16


Swara said to Lakshya that she needs to go to London for some work. He had always made her do everything independently, so didn't asked about the work and bid her good bye. On one way, it was good for him; he could do his work easily. Swara had lied him. In fact, she had to go to Mumbai for 6 months to complete her deal with Sanskaar.

And there, both Sanskaar and Ragini were in dilemma what excuse to make. Lakshya had given her 24 hours to think, so Ragini stated that she has to go Chennai for some months and she can't say how long she will has to stay there. Sanskaar was wondering for a chance so he agreed in an instant and bid her a good bye wishing her a best of luck.

Ragini landed on Delhi airport. She gazed around and found a man in driver attire with a board. "Ragini Maheswari" she read and marched towards him. She sat inside the car and reached he bungalow. It was as huge as a mansion. She entered the house while the driver brought her luggage.

"Welcome home, Mrs. Maheswari!" she heard.

She turned just to find Laskhya looking at her folding his arms near his chest.

Flashback

"Fine, I will transfer the Paris deal to Mumbai branch for Sanskaar. But I want something in exchange of this." He said with an evil smile.

"What?"

"It's been 6 months, you have been away from me, now for 6 months, you have to live with me."

She gave him an I-didn't-get-it look,

"You left me just after marriage..."

"I..."

"Shut your mouth and listen to me. You have to live with me for 6 months. As my wife. You have to take all the responsibilities as a wife and you will do everything that a wife does for her husband. Everything means E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G Mrs. Ragini Lakshya Maheswari!"

She looks on him.

Flashback ends

Lakshya smirked evilly.

Mumbai

Sanskaar was moving to and fro in his dining hall. He was restless. He had seen his watch 10 times in last 5 minutes.

Finally, the door bell rang. He literally ran to open the door just to find Swara standing in front. She came in gazing the house while he closed the door.

Flashback

"I have a condition."

"What?" he asked.

"I will be your financial advisor for 6 months, but you will work under me, not I..."

"Get it clear, please."

"Every meeting we would attain together, you will introduce me as your boss and yourself, my P.A. In short, I will be the owner of your Industries for 6 months!"

Flashback ends.

Both got accompanied by an awkward silence. Finally, Sanskaar spoke up.

"You can take Ragini's room. I will show you." He said in a gentle tone.

After Swara got settled comfortably in the room, she came out just to find Sanskaar cutting vegetables in the kitchen. She cleared her throat.

"You want something?" he asked as soon as he saw her.

"As you have arranged for my stay, I will also do something for you..."

"You needn't bother..."

"I am not complete yet." She said in a stern voice. "I don't want you to do any favour on me. So we will share our works."

Sanskaar had no choice so he only nodded his head to whatever he said. They divided the works. One day he will cook, and the other day she. One day he will clean the house and she the other day. Same followed to the utensils and clothes.

Delhi

"Where is my room?" Ragini asked.

"Wrong question, wife. You should ask, where our room...is" his smile was evil as usual.

She looked away and sighed.

"Fine. Where?"she spoke irked.

Lakshya held her luggage and moved. She followed. They entered the room and Ragini was shocked. It was a mess. Books were lying under the table. Clothes fallen everywhere. Moreover, dumbbells were on the bed. She shifted her gaze to lakshya. He was looking at the room mouth opened. He gazed at her and she could clearly see embarrassment on his face. She tried hard to control her laughter.

"Lakshya, you will welcome me like this?" she teased.

Lakshya just stood there silent. How much idiot he is! He didn't even checked the room before bringing her in.

"Ram Singh!" he called the servant.

"Relax!" she chuckled. "I will do it."

She draped the stole of her sari near her waist and started her work. Lakshya just stared at him as she kept everything in the right place. He shook his head and left the room after getting his senses back.

Mumbai

"Swara, paneer or mushroom?" sanskaar asked indulged with his work in kitchen.

"Paneer!" She answered while changing the channels on T.V.

"Beet, or Capsicum?" ss

"Mmm... Beet!"

"Cauliflower, or Cabbage?"

"Both!" she answered turning to him. "By the way, what are you cooking?"

"Well, it's a surprise." He answered being suspicious.

"Sanskaar..." she warned.

"It's Sanskaar Special. Wait till the lunch time!"

"Sanskaar special?" she laughed.

"What's so funny?" he pouted.

"Nothing. Just waiting for your special dish!" she said still laughing.

"Trust me, you will love it!" he said confident.

"Trust?" she said in a sarcastic tone.

He stopped his work and looked at her. She turned her gaze back to the T.V screen. He continued his work and but couldn't see each other wiping tears.

Delhi

Ragini opened to cupboard when she found something under Lakshya clothes. She took out the piece. Tears rolled down her eyes after seeing that. It was their pic, of Swara, Sanskaar, Lakshya and hers. It was a still from their engagement. She held the photo near her chest and cried.

6 months back

After knowing Sanskaar was not his real brother, lakshya was more than shocked. He was rather his cousin. Son of his dad's brother. Lakshya never knew about it but perhaps his mom told everything to sanskaar. He has always been his spinal cord in every situation. His mother took advantage of it and blackmailed him every time. And he, to return her favours did and directed. That day lakshya cut every relation with his mother and married Ragini.

They exchanged garlands and took the seven vows around the sacred fire. Everyone threw rose petals at them. After that they sat on their places when Swara forwarded the vermillion to Lakshya. He took a pinch and filled on Ragini's forehead. She closed her eyes and a little fell on her nose, indicating he will love her a lot. Lakshya then tied the mangal sutra around her neck. They looked at each other with unknown tears in their eyes. Perhaps it was because of happiness that they now officially together.

Everything was going so perfect. Sanskaar gave Lakshya a manly hug and congratulated him. Swara and Ragini embraced each other. Everyone was in a garden of love and flowers of happiness. Suddenly everything turned into a disaster when they heard a Gun-Shot.

To be continued...

#HOW WAS THE CHAPPY?

#WHAT DO YOU THINK MUST HAVE HAPPENED?

#WHAT WAS THE GUNSHOT?

#WHY ARE THEY SEPARATED? CAN YOU GUESS NOW?

#KEEP GUESSING!

Love,

Shirisha😊


Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update n enjoyed it very much

Curious to know what happened in past more

Hope both couples get back on their tracks.

Update soon.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update n pls continue soon
thanks for d PM😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shri awesome update omg the room is a mess poor Ragini she has to clean it

Can't wait to read more hope you post the next part soon

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