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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
So Sanskar didnt hurt Swara!!!
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Great..
Loved it
continue soon

Thank you very much😊

I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
superb one !!!!!!!!

Thanks😃

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dimaag

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Aye hay tune mar ditta soniye
So our ice king is slowly melting and I liked that sanskar confessed his feelings with kavi.
😛
Wondering how brilliant writing skills you have got dear.
Each chapter till now has left all of us jaw dropping. 👏 😉
Thanks for the pm dear sakura. 😆 😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: dimaag
Aye hay tune mar ditta soniye
So our ice king is slowly melting and I liked that sanskar confessed his feelings with kavi.
😛
Wondering how brilliant writing skills you have got dear.
Each chapter till now has left all of us jaw dropping. 👏 😉
Thanks for the pm dear sakura. 😆 😃

Awwweee Thank you😳

This melting ice king is loved by everyone then, I thought there would not be anyone else who he would talk with nothing holding back, so I had to get Kavi somehow.

I'm glad you liked it😛

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Was busy today, finally got online to read it. Thanks for the PM.

I loved it, he is finally melting that a great sign. Can't wait for the next update.

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Part 8- very worth it indeed! I love that Sanskaar couldn't do the deed as he has that softness where Swara is concerned. I have always had a fascination with masquerade balls- this wasn't too filmy- we are dealing with a story that needs big drama after all:). This Ragini- is very intriguing too. Hope to read the next part asap- you are really getting fluid with this Saku 👏

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Hey!

I've only read up to the 4th part and loving it!

Sanskaar-Kavi relationship is quite interesting. Can't wait to read how Sanskaar has fallen in love with Kavita. From what I read, I feel Kavita already has feelings for Sanskaar.

I'm loving Swara-DP bond! She truly is his soul-child. Even in the show, I feel the same.

Sharmita, you go lady! Deciding to stay well away from Shekhar is a fab decision!

Really liked the KIng-Queen-Knight analogy. 😳

Had to comment before I read the other parts, just to have a record of how my opinion/feelings changes while story progresses.

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

A brilliantly written update. One could see the cracks forming and the ice thawing. This Sanskaar is not going to last long infront of his Shona.

The Ragini in this is very dangerous. I hope Sanskaar comes out of this revenge mode soon and be there to protect his Shona from the wicked witch of the west.

Can't wait to read the next update. Continue soon, please.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

I really liked the update...and your comment, that the "Ice was melting" brought a big grin to my face! 😊

This para was really very moving ""I've heard that good people are watched over by gods. But how can someone be so good that even demons watch over them? I can't protect her now Kavi, she has fallen too deep in to my web... But I can't watch her suffer either! What is it that I'm supposed to do to be salvaged?'""

Portrayed Sanskaar's battle with his conscience are true inner self, so well.

Thanks for the PM.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Was busy today, finally got online to read it. Thanks for the PM.
I loved it, he is finally melting that a great sign. Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks dear for the lovely word as well as for taking time to read it. I'll be updating soon😊

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