Hi Purbi...
I liked this chapter so very much. You have described the entire shade of emotions so well.
Swara's initial anger at Sanskaar, for having brought her there to meet Lakshya; the way she so furiously told him, that he needs to just take her out of that jungle and drop her by the side of the road from where she can take an auto or taxi to go back...
And Sanskaar was admiring her even in her anger...thinking to himself that after she leaves his life. ...who will get angry at him in such a lovable manner. Man, this guy is so completely in love...
And then you shifted to Swara's feeling of concern, seeing the red mark of her palm on Sanskaar's cheek, where she had slapped him. Now her concern for him completely overtakes her anger, and she makes him stop at an ice cream shop, to get ice with which to soothe his cheek. 😊
That scene where Sanskaar gets lost in her gesture, but then acts rude with her only to protect his own heart from feeling hope, was very well written.
And that last line was just too good: about Swara feeling so bad, both at Sanskaar's words and at the obvious pain she has seen in his eyes. She probably feels more hurt about his pain more than anything else.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the pm.
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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