SwaSan TS : Jealousy (Part 2 & 3 updated on Page No. 11 & 12) - Page 8

@viji n shweta

Hey its beautiful.
ab akal ayega swara ko.she needed ths.
Waiting 4 nxt part.lets c hw its going

It's awesome

JEALOUSY

Part 2
(thay all reached MM...everybody was waiting for them n sujata was holding a pooja ki thali)

Swara(monologue)-mom mera welcome karney wali hain kya

Shonali-suju Aunty(she goes n hugged sujata)

Sujata-arey tu jara bhi na badly hai...tharey ko pta hai main kab se thara inezaar kar rhi thi cha lab teri aarti utaar loon(n she stats doing the aarti...swara didn't like it a bit)swara tu bhi ab 6 mahiney yahin rahegi na

AP-sujata

Sujata-na jiji main sirf keh rahi hoon aao na tum teeno andar

(SwaSan n shonali went inside the MM)

(At SwaSan's room)

Swara(she was feeling so uncomfortable in shonali's presence)-finally peecha toh chooda

Sanskaar-did u say anything

Swara-no i was just saying ki...who is this shonali

Sanskaar-she is my childhood frd...she is mom's fav

Swara-i can see that fevicol ka majboot jod hai

Sanskaar-what kiska jod

Swara-nhi woh

(suddenly they heard a knock on the door)

Sanskaar-hey shona come yaar...why the hell r u knocking mera room tumhara room ek hi baat hai

Swara(monologue)-what the hell ek baat kaisey hui...n for god sake I m shona she is she is chipkali

Shonali-swara tum aisa ajeeb sa face kyun bna rhi ho

Swara-nhi toh main tumhe dekhkar itni khush hoon na ki bardaast nhi kar paa rahi hoon

Sanskaar-kisey

Swara-khushi ko

Shonali-okk...no prob hey SK see what i have got for u

Sanskaar-kaju katli...wow shona kaju katli is my fav...i love u so much yaar(n he hugged her in excitement...swara felt some strange feeling...sanskaar starts eating kaju katli n offered to swara)

Swara-no thanks m happy with my figure mujhe weight put on karney ka koi shauq nhi tumhi khao

Shonali-ohh hello mrs ex

SwaSan-matlab

Shonali-she is ur ex wife na toh mrs ek

Swara-excuse me m not ex atleast not now

Shonali-whatever...u know what itna bhi koi weight put on nhi hoga

Swara-hoga(n she has snatched the box from sanskaar's hand)

Shonali-nhi hoga(now she snatched the box from swara's hand)

Swara-hoga

Shonali-nhi hoga

Swara-i said hoga

Shonali-nhi hoga

Sanskaar-arey but ladies

Swara n Shonali(together)-tum chup karo

Sanskaar(with an annoyed look)-what the

(n they both starts fighting for that kaju katli box...n the box falls on the ground)

Shonali-SK thank god u guys r separating ur wife is mad(n she stormed out of room)

Swara(to sanskaar)-sab tumhari galti hai(she too stormed out of room)

Sanskaar(with a confused expression)-mainey kya kiya...main toh kuch bola hi nhi

(at the evening...swara n sujata were making tea)

Shonali-suju aunty

Swara(monologue)-a gyi chipkali

Sujata-kya hua shonali

Shonali-aunty i have to go somewhere can u plzz send a driver with me

Swara-main call karti hoon driver ko

Sujata-arey driver ki key zaroorat hai sanskar jayega na tharey saath

Swara-ji

Sujata-haan phir

(sanskaar entered)

Sujata-sanskaar mahra ek kaam karega

Sanskaar-of course mom

Sujata-jey shonali ko kuch kaam hai usey lekar ja

Swara-but mom sanskaar is also busy na

Sujata-usey kya kaam hai aaj Sunday ko

Sanskaar-mom m free lets go shona

Shonali(with a winning look)-lets go then(she hugged sanskaar...n they went from there)

JEALOUSY

Part 3

(Swara was in her room...she was feeling dejected n she was crying bitterly when parineeta entered)

Pari-swara why r u crying

Swara-bhabhi woh aankh mein kuch chala gya tha

Pari-why r u lying

Swara-aisa kuch nhi hai bhabhi

Pari-tum shonali ki vajah se upset ho na...woh aur sanskaar bhaiya abhi tak nhi laute n its already 9:30

Swara-nhi toh aap jaisa

Pari-u know what i had too faced the same situation when i got to know about adarsh ji n lovely...i know u n sanskaar bhaiya r together for only 6 months...but ask urself do u really want this divorce

Swara-bhabhi woh

Pari-humein explain mat karo khud se pucho

(n she went from there)

(Swara remembered the time which they had spent together...their moments which they spent in the tent...his confession...her outburst the way she shouted on him n told him that his love is a betrayal for her...the day when ragini's truth came out...when they filed the divorce...his smile)

Swara-kya hai yeh...the beautiful feeling is this called love...phir mainey laksh ke liye yh kyun nhi feel kiya...matlab main sanskaar se(n she starts jumping like a small kid...sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar-why r u jumping

Swara(in an angry tone)-where were u

Sanskaar-u know na i was with shona

Swara-she is not shona...n tum khud ko kya samajhte ho(he throws a pillow on him)

Sanskaar-have u gone mad...what r u doing

Swara-ohh really n she throws her hair brush then her clutch

Sanskaar-kar kya rahi ho...why r u throwing this stupid stuff

Swara-tum uss chipkali ke saath kya kar rahe the

Sanskaar-kon chipkali...u mean shona

Swara-what the(she grabbed his collor n pull him towards her)woh shona nhi hai I m shona ur shona

Sanskaar(with an unbelievable look)-matlab

Swara-matlab duffer I love you...kab hua nhi pta...tum se hi kyun hua nhi pta bas ho gya

Sanskaar(he was still in shock)-that was my dialogue

Swara(with an angry look)-mainey itna kuch kaha aur tumhe yeh samajh aya(she hugged him tightly n starts crying)sanskaar plzz don't leave me

Sanskaar(he came out from his shocking state)-never ever swara(he hugged her back n kissed her forehead(n they heard a knock on door)

Shonali-ahem ahem can we come in

Sanskaar-mom shon...shonali aao na

Shonali-toh sab normal hua...dekha suju aunty mainey aap ka kaam kar dia

SwaSan-konsa kaam

Shonali-tum dono ko ek karne ka kaam

Swara-matlab

Sujata-sanskaar tharey ko yaad hai tune kaha tha ki main duniya ki akeli aisi maa hoon jo apne hi bte ko pareshaan dekhkar khush hoon tab mahrey ko ehsaas hua ki main kitni galat hoon aur tab mainey socha ki main hi tum dono ko ek karungi

Shonali-n then aunty called me n asked me to help her

Swara-kaisi help

Shonali-tumhe jalaney ke liye...n u were jealous

SwaSan-mom

Sujata-toh key karti

Shonali-but it works na n m sorry swara

Swara-no I m sorry...n i really mean it

Shonali-its okk anything for SK

(swara hugged shonali)

Sujata-ab tum dono khush raho

Swara(she hugged suju too)-thank u mom

Sujata-haan par iska jey matlab na hai ki tu macchi pakayegi toh main kha lungi

(SwaSan n shonali laughed on her comment)

-THE END-

Sonal!! 🤣 🤣

Just finished reading Chapter 2. This dialogue was EPIC, EPIC funny. Too good!

""Shonali-swara tum aisa ajeeb sa face kyun bna rhi ho

Swara-nhi toh main tumhe dekhkar itni khush hoon na ki bardaast nhi kar paa rahi hoon

Sanskaar-kisey

Swara-khushi ko""

🤣

Sonal, Part 3 was awesome too. You have such a talent to write humorous stuff.

""Swara-matlab duffer I love you...kab hua nhi pta...tum se hi kyun hua nhi pta bas ho gya

Sanskaar(he was still in shock)-that was my dialogue

Swara(with an angry look)-mainey itna kuch kaha aur tumhe yeh samajh aya(she hugged him tightly n starts crying)sanskaar plzz don't leave me""

🤣 🤣

You made Swara mirror that wonderful love confession scene of Sanskaar's. And Sanskaar's response was typical Sanskaar!! Good thing Sujju and Shonali plotted this---else these 2 duffers would never have confessed till the last minute!! 😆

read the last two parts in one go. Really loved both. And how pari came to swara and make her realise her feelings. And the way she proposed him and ask him not to leave her.😳😳😳. She was telling she his one and only shona not her. 👏👏👏

part 2

shonali n swara's convo was hilarious 🤣
n then swara n sanskar convo 🤣
n swara's reaction.. 😆😆😆

this part i loved it...
"Swara(monologue)-what the hell ek baat kaisey hui...n for god sake I m shona she is she is chipkali"

then fight over kaju katli..
totally loved ur update !!👏👏

part 3

enjoyed this part !!
"Swara-tum uss chipkali ke saath kya kar rahe the

Sanskaar-kon chipkali...u mean shona

Swara-what the(she grabbed his collor n pull him towards her)woh shona nhi hai I m shona ur shona"

loved it again !!

sply the confession part..

truly amazing !!