Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all of u for your lovely comments and likes 🤗
I will update the next part tomorrow
Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
😆 even I want that couch should be
Out of the room.
May be Cvs can take this in serial too 🥳
Superb yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
aww..
Cute SwaSan fight..

Ohh..
Couch hi hata di..
taki SwaSan sath rahe isliye..
wah
wah

Nice..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love their banter and i am glad that the infernal couch is gone! I am very sure that its Sujata who did this. Am i right? I cant wait to see what they will do.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
The precap is fantastic 😆 Is it Sujata or Swara's idea? 😉
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Part 3


The family came out of the court room after hearing the judgement everyone of them except ap was happy about the judgement. Ap wanted swara as her bahu now after the truth revelation.
Sanskar- swara I am sorry I should have found out about this cooling period
Swara looked at him and immediately said its OK sanskar
Sanskar looked visibly shocked seeing her reaction he thought she would be damn angry about it and here she was sounding so comfortable
Dida- kya hua sanskar koi bhoot dekha kya? Itna hairan pareshan?
And dida started laughing at her own joke
Sanskar came out of his shocked phase and cleared his mind
Sanskar- swara tum Ghar jao Aur packing karlo tab tak mai mom Aur badi ma ko Ghar chod deta hun then I will pick u up OK
Swara- haan Thik hai sanskar I will wait for u

In the badi
Swara went to her room and immediately started packing she didn't knew why was she happy she just knew that sanskar is going to come to pick her up. Dida and shomi entered her room and started helping their shona and they knew why was she so happy and the reason was that their shona was in love with sanskar. Suddenly all of them heard the door bell. Swara knew that its sanskar and she started packing her bags quickly. Dida and shomi saw this and smiled and prayed in their hearts to durga ma to keep there shona smiling.
Sanskar- ma dida??????
Dida - aaye beta
Swara came running to the hall with her bags
Swara - chalo sanskar I am ready Aur Meri packing bhi ho gayi dekho
Sanskar saw this child like women showing him his bags and was lost in her innocence
Swara- sanskar( she said loudly )
Sanskar- ouch swara chilla kyun rahi ho mai behra nahi hun
Swara- achha behre nahi ho toh kyun teesri awaz mai suna haan? Pehle jawab de detein
Sanskar- swara phirse jhagda shuru mat karo chalo ab
Swara- hawww mai jhagda karti hun??????? Agar pehli baar mai sun letein toh chewing gum ki tarah baat nahi khichti. Ulta chor kotwal ko datein
Sanskar(moved towards her angrily and pointed his finger on her face)- tumne mughe chor kahan?
Swara( swara too moved towards him similarly)-haan kahan toh?????
Sanskar- dekho swara tum
Swara- kya dekhun haan kya dekhun ?
Just then dida entered and saw them fighting and smiled seeing live tom and jerry
Dida- teen mahinai aur saath mai rehna hai itna ladoge toh Kaise chalega haan ?
Swara and sanskar realised hearing dida's voice that both of them have moved close to each other while fight. They jerked apart and maintained a comfortable distance. Both were feeling awkward.
Sanskar thought to break the ice
Sanskar- mai nahi dida Sirf yeah ladti hai
Swara- sanskar tum ...
Dida- achha Bas bas ab jao sujataji intezar karti rahi hogi
Sanskar- OK bye dida bye ma
Swara hugged her ma and dida and moved out with sanskar

Precap- sanskar- mom mom ?????
Sujata came running at his son's voice to his room
Sujata- k hua chhore kyun ghar sar par utha rakha hai?
Sanskar- ma mere kamre ka couch kahan hai???????


very well love it. basically the way u made us smile with them. keep it up. well upcoming track will be like this . wanna see laksh reactions too. little bit more intense.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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missing couch! Now you have me quipped? What's the plot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
Swara and sanskar entered mm. All the family members were happy seeing them except lucky ap and rags. Yes ragini is still in mm she has refused to divorce lucky and now is living in mm claiming her rights. She has involved the Mahila mukti mandal in this case. Lucky is exploring legal roots to get out of this relationship and ragya's case is in court in which lucky wants a divorce but ragini doesn't.
Swara went and took everyone's blessing. Dp was happy seeing her. He blessed her with a happy married life and swara was shocked that she actually felt good about the blessing.

Dp- swara sanskar tum log fresh hokar aao sab saath mai lunch karts hai
Swara sanskar- Ji bade papa
Swasan were about to leave but someone knocked the door.
Ragini went and opened the door to find a women about 26-27 yrs of age in a simple lukhnavi salwar kammez.
Ragini- Ji aap kaun
Girl- mughe sanskar Aur swara sai milna hai
Ragini came inside with girl and told the other family members that she is here for swasan
Swara- Ji boliye mai swara hun Aur yeah sanskar mere pati ( she said pointing towards sanky)
Sanskar was shocked with swara's statement and looked at her and just then swara realised what she said and was shocked with herself too.
Both were looking at each other lost but it was short lived as the girl waiting for them faked a cough
Girl- Ji mai komal hun aapki marriage counsellor
Sanskar- par court k hisab sai toh humai aapse 2 hafton baad milna hai
Komal opened the file she was carrying and gave it to sanskar
Komal- yeah court k orders hai jiske hisab sai mughe aap logo k parivar sai baat karni hai
Sanskar - par kyun?
Komal- dekhiye yahan sawal karne mai aayi hun aap nahi
Sanskar was irritated with her attitude and was about to burst but was interrupted by dp
Dp- boliye komal Ji swara Aur sanskar k sabhi gharwale yahan mojood hai agar aap chahe toh hum swara k maike sai bhi sabko bula le ?
Komal- nahi iski koi zaroorrat nahi hai mughe aap sab sai akele mai baat karni hai yahan koi aisa room hai?
Dp- Ji aap haan humara study room mai jayiye hum sab ek ek karke aapse miltein hai
Sanskar- par bade papa
Dp- sanskar court k orders hai
Komal started talking to everyone one by one
Sujata lakshay rags and ap repeated like a parrot what they were taught to say ( statements given by ap and sujaya in courts). Sujata due to sanskar's kasam and ap and lakshay because they wanted their divorce at any cost . rags also wanted swara to be out of mm.
But pari adarsh dp and ram had a different story to tell
By now komal understood the dynamics of swasan relationship. She got to know everything about this family.
She went to swara's home before this too.
And dp ram adarsh pati shekhar shomi dida dadi and Dada were the ones who spilled the beans in front of her because they knew her's and the witness she chooses in front of the court will play a crucial role in swasan divorce. They also knew that this divorce will destroy swasan forever so its necessary to stop it.
After all this komal came out in the hall and said
Komal - Ji Maine sabse baat karli hai and I have decided my witnesses
Swara- aapke witnesses??
Komal- Ji swara mughe 3 witnesses sanskar k parivar sai Aur teen aapke parivar sai chune hai Jo court mai mere analysis ko about your relationship will either support or deny. Ussi k basis pai aapko divorce milega
Swasan looked at each other none of them wanted this divorce but their stupid brains told them that's what is logical to do
Komal - swara aapke parivar sai aapki dida dadi Aur baba
Swara- par kyun ? Aap toh unsai abhi mili bhi nahi ,Aur ma Aur Dada Ji kyun nahi?
Komal - yahan aane sai pehle mai badi gayi thi and I have already had a talk with ur family Aur jahan tak aapka swal ki baat hai toh yeah decision mera hai ki mai kisko choose karun
Swara closed her eyes in frustration how will she convince dadi and dida to lie in court. She could easily cry and convince her mom and dadaji. But these 2??? And her baba will do whatever dadi says.
Komal- Aur sanskar aapke family say aapke bade papa, aapke dad Aur aapki bhabhi parineeta.
Sanskar also closed his eyes in frustration. How will he convince 2 raja hrishchandra and 1 rani harishchandra to lie in court. He frustratingly went to his room and swara followed him
Komal smirked seeing the reaction she expected and promised herself that she would save this relationship.
Komal bid adieu and left

In swasan room
Swara was sitting in her bed and sanskar was in the washroom
He came out and looked at her. She was not tended or worried but she was thinking something
Sanskar sat with her and held her hand and swara came out from her thoughts
Sanskar- don't worry swara divorce mill jayega
Swara looked at him as if he has grown two horns on his head because she was not thinking about it at all
Sanskar - kya hua?
Swara- sanskat mai voh nahi soch rahi thi
Sanskar- toh?
Swara pointed her finger behind him and sanskar was shocked to see that the couch was missing
Swara- tumne couch kyun Hatvaya?
Sanskar- tum pagal ho ? Mai kyun hatvauga?
Swara- haww u called me pagal ? Tum pagal ho samje
Sanskar got up from the bed and started shouting
Sanskar- mom??? Mom???
Sujata came running
Sujata- k hus chore kyun Ghar sar pai utha Rakha hai?
Sanskar- mom mera couch kahan hai? kisne hataya ?
Dp - Maine sanskar
Swasan looked at him shocked
Sanskar-par kyun?
Dp- sanskar iss Ghar ka renovation hoga Aur USS couch mai dimag large Thai.
Sanskar- Thik hai mai kal naya couch le aaunga
Dp quite loudly- nahi
Swasan were confused
Dp- won humara MATLAB hai humne order de diya hai couch ka. Rajasthan sai specially ban k aayega bilkul marwadi style
Sanskar- kitne dino mai aayega bade papa?
Dp- 2 mahino mai
Swasan were shocked
Sujata and dp left them like that

Precap - sanskar was preparing his bed on the ground when swara asked him to sleep on the bed with her shocking both herself and him


Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here u go guys enjoy reading
All ur comments and criticism are welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update akhansha... precap looks vedy interesting 😳 continue soon

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