swara and sanskaar wedding forever togather. PART seven

ketty84 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

Ragini felt how its feel like nobody belives you even you are right.

Ragini

Sanskaar

I came here to see u r ok

Iam

I gave u leave for today

Iam sorry sanskaar

Its ok now. Go home

Why I cant be like u. why

Ragini starts crying sankaar removed her tears.

No ragini you were always so sweet. You lost yourself for wrong desire use ur chance

I ... Everybody think iam still like that

Come on ragini

Ragini rests her head on sanskaar shoulder. He tap her back lightly.

Ragini felt disturbed.

Ragini felt disturbed. She came to mm business house to take revenge from sanskaar. Now she felt immense respect for him. What she was thinking. She went so low again she did the same thing. Is laksh that important she put everything on stake for him? Is he worthy of her love? No he never was because he saw only exterior of her. Even it was his choice kind of girl he want. He used her. Her sister, maa, pa, her friend sanskaar all loved her because what she is? She doesn't need laksh. He's not worthy of her love. She lowered herself that much now she's not worthy of anybody love. She betrayed her family and she came back to hurt them. She's not worthy of anybody love and trust. Kannha ,how can I live with this guilt.

SWARA HUGGED HER SISTER

Oh god ragini are u ok

Yes iam ok

Sanskaar told me

Iam ok swara don't shower your love on me . Iam not worthy of anybody love or sympathy

Sona

Somi ran into the room and hugged ragini.

Ma why you love me iam bad , I tried to destroy all of you

You are my daughter

Step daughter

Na sona you are in shock.

I wanted to take revenge from u all again will u all now again forgive me. I wanted to kill swara and sanskaar.

Sona

If I say I forgive u

Sanskaar n Nikhil sir

He called me and told me how upset are you. I made you ragini what you are? Will you ever forgive me.

Sanskaar you

Ragini came near sanskaar . he put finger on her lip.

shh

iam bad very bad. What I did to you happened to me. If you didn't came..

come on

sanskaar took her in embrace like his small sister. She hugged him back.

Swara looked at her husband with proud and confusion.

Laksh looked at sanskaar and ragin. Something snapped in him.

RAGINI STARTED HER NEW LIFE

It was a new day for ragini . she started her day she used to be. Pray god to forgive all bad things she did n strength for all new things she do. Somiu gave her breakfast. She looked at her mother with tears in her eyes .

Na sona

Ma I will be able to succeed na

My sona have strength she will win the word

Swara wanted to thank sanskaar

Sanskaar came out of bathroom. Water drops was dripping from his wet hairs on his body. Towel knotted around his hips and other towel draped around his neck. He was searching for clothes. Swara startled him as she entered in changing room.

I want to talk

You must have waited

So you might have gone.

Ok talk I have not all time in world for you.

Why are you doing this?

What

sanskaar you know

What?

Ignoring me.

No iam not

Look into my eyes

Swara came near him. He can feel her breath. She looked into his eyes. Unaware of what she was doing. She grabbed sanskaar arms and pulls him near her to get his full attention.

Why sanskaar? I don't want laksh . Even whatever you do I will never be his.

Ragini got over of him.

Sanskaar tried to back off a little. Swara closed distance between them.

He will always be my sis husband. So don't spoil our friendship. Thanks whatever you done for my sis.

Sanskaar said something, he tried to move on. swara was unaware what she was doing to him. Her closeness made sanskaar senses gone crazy. As he moved a little swara land on him and he was pinned to wardrobe otherwise fell on floor.

Swara saw directly into sanskaar eyes. She can feel his love. Strength of his love has shaken her. Her lips leaned over him. She transfixed with the magnetism flying between them.

Sankaar wasn't able to stop himself. He pressed her body to him.

He lowered his lips over her. swara closed her eyes. Her fingers dig into sanskaar shoulders. Sanskaar hand traced her back than his fingers dig into her long black hairs. He pulled her face little more near him. He remembered his promise, he will never impose himself on her.

He kissed on her temple. Swara encircled her arms around him. He made his distance. Took his clothes silently and went away.

Tears came in swara eyes. She fell on knees and start crying. She remembered her time with laksh than her marriage and today what happened between them.

SANSKAAR FELT RESTLESS

Sanskaar was restless. Why he let this happen. He promised himself, he will make swara leave him. How he can now. He closed his eyes and felt her again in him. Suddenly one voice took him in reality.

Edited by ketty84 - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

7

Views

2.3k

Users

6

Likes

29

Frequent Posters

ll_megha_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
wow...
awesome update...
loved it...
thanks for the pm..
Swetasweet thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
awesome update...
loved it...
thanks for the pm.. 😊
ketty84 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: ketty84

Ragini felt how its feel like nobody belives you even you are right.

Ragini

Sanskaar

I came here to see u r ok

Iam

I gave u leave for today

Iam sorry sanskaar

Its ok now. Go home

Why I cant be like u. why

Ragini starts crying sankaar removed her tears.

No ragini you were always so sweet. You lost yourself for wrong desire use ur chance

I ... Everybody think iam still like that

Come on ragini

Ragini rests her head on sanskaar shoulder. He tap her back lightly.

Ragini felt disturbed.

Ragini felt disturbed. She came to mm business house to take revenge from sanskaar. Now she felt immense respect for him. What she was thinking. She went so low again she did the same thing. Is laksh that important she put everything on stake for him? Is he worthy of her love? No he never was because he saw only exterior of her. Even it was his choice kind of girl he want. He used her. Her sister, maa, pa, her friend sanskaar all loved her because what she is? She doesn't need laksh. He's not worthy of her love. She lowered herself that much now she's not worthy of anybody love. She betrayed her family and she came back to hurt them. She's not worthy of anybody love and trust. Kannha ,how can I live with this guilt.

SWARA HUGGED HER SISTER

Oh god ragini are u ok

Yes iam ok

Sanskaar told me

Iam ok swara don't shower your love on me . Iam not worthy of anybody love or sympathy

Sona

Somi ran into the room and hugged ragini.

Ma why you love me iam bad , I tried to destroy all of you

You are my daughter

Step daughter

Na sona you are in shock.

I wanted to take revenge from u all again will u all now again forgive me. I wanted to kill swara and sanskaar.

Sona

If I say I forgive u

Sanskaar n Nikhil sir

He called me and told me how upset are you. I made you ragini what you are? Will you ever forgive me.

Sanskaar you

Ragini came near sanskaar . he put finger on her lip.

shh

iam bad very bad. What I did to you happened to me. If you didn't came..

come on

sanskaar took her in embrace like his small sister. She hugged him back.

Swara looked at her husband with proud and confusion.

Laksh looked at sanskaar and ragin. Something snapped in him.

RAGINI STARTED HER NEW LIFE

It was a new day for ragini . she started her day she used to be. Pray god to forgive all bad things she did n strength for all new things she do. Somiu gave her breakfast. She looked at her mother with tears in her eyes .

Na sona

Ma I will be able to succeed na

My sona have strength she will win the word

Swara wanted to thank sanskaar

Sanskaar came out of bathroom. Water drops was dripping from his wet hairs on his boady. Towel knotted on his hips and other around his neck. He was searching for clothes. Swara startled sanskaar as she entered in changing room.

I want to talk

You must have waited

So might have gone to office.

Ok talk I have not all time in world for you.

Why are you doing this

What

sanskaar you know

What?

Ignoring me.

No iam not

Look into my eyes

Swara came near him . he can feel her breath. She looked into his eyes. Unaware of what she was doing. She grabbed sanskaar arms and pull him near her to get his full attention.

Why sanskaar? I don't want laksh . even whatever you do I will never be his.

Ragini got over of him.

Sanskaar tried to back off a little. Swara closed distance between them.

He will always be my sis husband . so don't spoil our friendship. Thanks whatever you done for my sis.

I

Before sanskaar said something, he tried to move . swara was unaware what she is doing to him. Her closeness made sanskaar senses gone crazy. As he moved swara and land on him and he was pinned to wardrobe otherwise fell on floor.

Swara looked into sanskaar eyes. She can feel him. Her lips were near his. She transfixed with the magnetism flying between them.

Sankaar wasn't able to stop himself. He pressed her body to him.

He lowered his lips over her. swara closed her eyes. Her fingers dig into sanskaar shoulders. Sanskaar hand traced her back than dig into her long black hairs. He pulled her face little more near him. He rembered his promise he will never impose himself on her.

He kissed on her temple. Swara encircled her arms around him. He made his distance. Took his clothes silently and went away.

Tears came in swara eyes. She fell on knees and start crying. She remembered her time with laksh than her marriage and today what happened between them.

Sanskaar was restless. Why he let this happen . he promised he made swara leave him . how can he. He closed his eyes and felt her again in him. Suddenly one voice took him in reality.

guys open for suggestion . suggest further
krishuuuuuuuuuu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Ur awesome...wonderfull post...❤️
gayu6 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Nice update pls pm me whenever you are updating. Can u pls give the link for 5th 6th chapter.
JazzyM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Loved the update but can't fathom why Part 7? It's only 1 part, where are the rest...?
Liked the way Swara got her priority straight and how Sanskaar was still in midst of guilt...Well written...
ketty84 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Loved the update but can't fathom why Part 7? It's only 1 part, where are the rest...?

Liked the way Swara got her priority straight and how Sanskaar was still in midst of guilt...Well written...

all part four togather with one

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4483075

part five six

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4485799

part 7

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4487250

part 8

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4488758#p127732191

SANSKAAR FELT RESTLESS

Sanskaar was restless. Why he let this happen. He promised himself, he will make swara leave him. How he can now. He closed his eyes and felt her again in him. Suddenly one voice took him in reality.

LAKSH WAS THERE IN FRONT OF HIM.

Laksh

Why are you supporting ragini? She is venom.

Yes she was...laksh she needs new life. Iam giving her fair chance that's it.

I know you are doing all this so I will forgive her and forget swara.

Laksh

I know she's your wife because of me.

What you want laksh?

Laksh don't know what to say. His heart desire stopped on his lips. He saw lipstick mark on sanskaar face. He stretched his handkerchief towards him. Sanskaar looked at him.

Remove lipstick mark from your face bade pa will be there anytime.

Sorry

Sanskaar took handkerchief from him.

How many times you will apologise me.

Laksh looked at him with accusing eyes.

Laksh

You know why I heard when you ask me to reveal the truth. I thought you were imposing yourself on swara.

That's not true laksh

I don't want your left

Laksh don't

Sanskaar eyes suddenly sparked with anger as laksh insulted swara.

You know sanskaar , Whatever u does . You will not able to make things back too normal u can't ...after this never. Everytime I thought swara is mine. She always marked herself on you.

It was not

Sanskaar closed his eyes.

She's your wife. So don't explain. She's also giving quite a fair chance to you. I lost everything. Now you got swara and ragini .Why she praise you that much. You are taking care of her only for swara or new plan both of you made.

Laksh.

Sanskaar caught laksh collar. He realised laksh was in alcohol influence.

You are drunk and came to office.

You killed me sanskaar. Ragini killed me and you are supporting her.

Laksh has gone out of sanskaar cabin as quick as possible. Sanskaar fell on chair.

Sanskaar got more unsettled by laksh feelings came before him.

He never wanted swara to be his . but he was unable to stop himself as he love her very much. How can laksh talk about swara like this? He never thought if swara will get to know mere glimpse of it. She will start hating him. He never wanted laksh love will be his. What the hell laksh is doing.

He needed a break. He decided to go on upcoming tour.

RAGINI NEW LIFE STARTED.

RAGINI new life started as Nikhil gave her chance to sing and give music in Bangla movie as he heard her murmuring while she was working. She hesitated a little but sanskaar made her go ahead.

She have to work on music too. She suggested swara name.

Maheshwaries don't want her bahu sing in movie or gave music.

Sanskaar fought for swara . dp gave swara permission. He went on tour.

Ragini requested swara to don't leave sanskaar.

Swara completed her melody. Ragini looked at her. Swara was thinking about sanskaar and his touch. The way she melted in his arms.

Swara

Ragini voice made her came in reality

Ragini

You were thinking about sanskaar

No

iam ur sis . don't let him go. You got love like this once in life.

Ragini please

Movie director publicity stunt

Movie director wanted to publicity. What will be more stunt if he made news city top industrialist bahu was with his hero.

This time swara fell in trap with film hero abhi. Swara was excited to meet him .went for coffee with him. She was going towards her car. One car came so abhi pull her in his arms . she was clicked by media.

SANSKAAR CAME BACK FROM TOUR.

Everybody was blaming swara. Swara was in tears. Sankaar made everbody stop accusing swara.

CHORE TU NA JANNE

Sujata wanted to say something. He stopped his mother and everybody. Before laksh said something in favour of swara. He put real photograph on table. Tyold everybody how used wrong angles to show them something else. Tomorrow paper there will be apology for swara.

Bade pa I trust swara. I don't need any pareeksha kind of thing. She is my wife the end.

But sanskaar

Bade pa you also know swara. U don't trust your daughter. Why you questioned her.

Laksh was stunned to see sanskaar trust on swara.

Swara came into a room. Sanskaar came after her.

Sanskaar

Tears were in swara eyes. She wanted to say thanks to him. She wanted to tell him what happened. Swara wanted to justify. She doesn't know why?

Swara I don't need your explanation. Outside I told everybody all that because

There was anger in sanskaar eyes.

Swara misunderstood sanskaar . She fell down on floor. Again her character was in bracket. She can't tolerate this pain. How many times she needed to prove herself. Sanskaar cover for her outside only because she is his wife. She can't breathe. Tears choked her.

Swara

Sanskaar sat beside her

One more time sanskaar I can't do it. You have to trust me.

I trust you swara.

Sanskaar hands softly touched her shoulders. He made her look at him.

Sanskaar

Look into my eyes and tell me what you see.

Oh sanskaar it meant lots to me.

Tear fell from swara eyes. sanskaar brushed them away. He took her face in his hand. He lowered his head and covers her mouth. His lips touched hers. Swara arms came up and encircled around his neck. He deepens the kiss.

He thought lot when he was on tour. He decided swara is his wife he will never give her up. The comment laksh made on her. Never let anybody insult her. He loves her deeply and madly.

Suddenly he realised what they were doing. He wanted to pull away. swara don't want him . Swara stopped him. Her hands traced his neck. He got up and pulled her up with him. He pulled her up in his arms. He placed her on bed. swara closed her eyes . Every part of her body felt shy but screaming for sanskaar. Suddenly and slowly sanskaar body covers hers. He made her open her eyes as his lips touched her nape. Her fingers dig in his back. She don't want to think. She closed her eyes.

Swara open her eyes. Suddenly she felt presence of sanskaar in her bed. She realised what they did last night. How she fell for sanskaar. She doesn't love him. Last night she needed a support. Why Sanskaar didn't stopped them. What she will do now.

Tears rushed in her eyes. Sanskaar wake up as he heard her sobs. He Looked into her eyes. She looked away. He sat up and touched her shoulder lightly.

Swara

Don't

Swara backed herself immediately.

What happened?

Why are you asking me this question u destroyed me sanskaar.

You wanted me swara.

We don't love eachother.

You don't love me..

So you took benefit of my..

Just don't

swara. Enough... what you want?

I want our divorce to be final.

So you said you respected this mangalsutra and sindoor more han your life was lie.

Sanskaar i

We will go and sign our divorce next week. Our advocate called me too. Please leave mm by today itself. I set you free for forever.

Sanskaar

Swara realised a little. She wanted to say sorry to him. He went to bathroom.

Swara looked into mirror. Today she signed divorce paper. She felt empty without sanskaar.

She smiled as she remembered. How sannskaar washed cups when they were in tent. How he ordered noodles for her when she was practicing in studio from his tour. How she felt when he looked at her. That night in his arms . she forget herself.

What the hell she did ? why she did? She loved him.

Somi entered in room . swara looked at her.

Sona why are you crying . finally you are free.

Maa

Swara looked into somi eyes. Somi understood everything. Don't wanna believe .

Don't say it sona . how can you?

I love him.

That's bwhat iam saying you loved him . why?

I didn't know whom I love ma . sanskaar will never forgive me.

Sona

Sanskaar looked away as swara came to meet him.

Sanskaar

I have so many meetings so

Iam sorry.

My secretary will show you out.

Sanskaar secratry looked at sanskaar and ragini

He was the one who was responsible for her sister death. Now he is planning with ragini to made swara realize what she actually felt. He will be grilled in fire forever as she is in. he will never get love. He left his sister on road in blood . her mom told him everything last week.

Laksh saw sanskaar and ragini laughing with eachother.

He felt his heart will burn out. How they can laugh like this . he lost everything because of them. He will never forgive them. Ragini will be burn in same fire in which he was in.

Sanskaar

Ragini blushed a little. Her cheeks became rosy.

You loved Nikhil

No he loved me

What you told him. Come on.

That iam obsessed like devil .

What he said

He still wants me

Ragini smiled again.

What you want ragini

I can't lie to you . I still somewhere love laksh.i told him I need time.

Sanskaar looked at her in serious mode.

Oh come on I will not became obsessed unreasonable like that... chill.

Yes my dear Sali

Sanskaar put his hand on her shoulder. And laughed with her.

Edited by ketty84 - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".