SwasanFF : Start a fresh life with you CHAP2

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SwasanFF : Start a fresh life with you


Sanskaar : Swara now everything is out, I feel so relived that you can live a life like you want we are not obliged to maintain this forced marriage.

Swara rest silent and they finish to pack her bags.

Sanskaar holds her hand : Swara tomorrow I will come to your house and give the divorce papers. And I request you something I know that you still love Laksh so please forget his behavior and start a new phase of life with him. I will be very happy.

Swara was shocked with his words but doesn't say it.

Sanskaar goes to his car and places Swara bags with teary eyes.

Swara takes everyone ashirwaad and leaves with her parents.

Sanskaar : Ek minutes Mrs Shekhar I will droop you in your house.

Shomi comes to him and caress his cheek : Kya was beta? Ajanaak you call me Mrs!

Sanskaar : It's better I think because now Swara and ma can live our life like we want. We will sign for a mutual divorce tomorrow. So it's good if I try to call you Mrs that maa...

Shomi : Likin beta...

Sanskaar : Please let me drop you in house and take care of your health.

Sanskaar sits beside Swara while Swara's parents and dadi sits behind.


He drops them even if Shomi asks him to come for tea but he refuses.

Shomi sees that Swara is little upset.

She sits with Swara : What happened to you Shona?

Swara : Nothing maa, I am fine.

Shekhar comes with mittai : Shomi and Shona please take this mittai and forget my bad behaviour.

They take it.

Swara : I will got to dida house for some time.


Swara comes to her dida house. She hugs her.

Dida: Congrats Shona you win today.

Dida sees that Swara is not happy.

Dida : Kya waa tumko?

Swara : Nothing didou I just wish to sleep in your hams.

She closes her eyes while Dida didn't understand her.


Shekar and Shomi are in the room. He tries to touch her but he jerks her hands.

Shekar is stunned because of her behavior: Kya waa Shomi?

Shomi turns her face with tears : With which rights you touch me Mr Shekar?

Shekar : Mero ko kuch...

Shomi : I accept you only for my Shona but you didn't deserve my love. I was mad on you and today I regret to quit my ex-husband for you.

Shekar : Shomi please...

Shomi : No Shekar I am staying only here because of my daughter's trust that she can join us. But when she can understand I will leave this house forever. Because of this parivaar Shona and me, bear a lot of tortures and accusations. No one has right on us.

She takes a cover and pillow and sleeps on the ground.


Next day, they hear a bell door. Swara opens the door, it's Sanskaar.

Shona wants to go but he holds her hand : I know you are hurt because of me. But please listen to me.

Everyone comes to them.

Sanskaar : I really love you and I can't deny it. But the truth also is that you deserve much better than me. So sign on these papers and lets end this fake relation. I talk to my brother he will divorce Ragini and he wants to tie the knot with you. So I request you one thing I hope you will not say no for it. I never say no for your suggestion. I talk with lawyer as it's a mutual divorce it will take just a week to do the formalities so after that you can marry Laksh and live your love. I will never come between both of you. You can believe me.I will leave in some time for Australia to start a new branch. I wish u all the happiness.

He puts the papers on her hand. He is about to quit but she holds his hand.

He turns himself to see her. She slaps him very hard. She cries.

Swara : What the hell are you thinking about yourself? Haan? How dare you to tell me to live with your brother? I feel ashamed today because of you. You think I will live with a man like Laksh who didn't think a second before to marry Ragini. How I can forget his bad words toward me. How you forgot his treats toward me? I know Ragini did some bad things but she did everything because of Laksh. Every time he breaks her heart, he never thinks that she is a woman with desire. When he needed he comes to me or to her. How cheap he is? So Mr Maheswari never think that I will marry your brother.

She tears the papers. All are shocked. They hear a noise.

It's Shomi she faints.

Swara throws water but she didn't wake up.

Sanskaar : We have to go to hospital right now.

Shekar holds her.


They come to the hospital.

Swara and dida cries.

Swara : Please doctor save my mom.

Sanskaar tries to comforts her but fails.

Swara : Leave me warna I will...

She stops seeing doctor coming : Kya waa maa ko?

Doctor : Please sir come with me?

Swara holds Sanskaar hand : I am her daughter, tell to me.

Doctor : Please try to understand.

Swara : No I will come with him.

Sanskaar : Please doctor.

They enter doctor cabin.

Doctor : You have to be strong for your mother, she has a weak heart. I think she is very sad and she can't bear a bad news otherwise her heart can stop. I will prescribe some tablets but the important thing, it's to make her happy in any situation. Pressure it's not good for her.

Swara : No she can't be sick, she is very strong. Even if, it's the truth, you have to treat her right now. Do whatever you want operation therapy... but she has to be treated.

Sanskaar : Calm down Shona everything will be right.

He puts his hands on her.

She pushes him : It's all because of you kya zaroorat hai to divorce me right now. See her condition are you happy now?

Sanskaar hugs her but she didn't stop her sobering so he slaps her.

She is shocked.

Sanskaar : Now listen your mother need love so we will go to her ok.

She follows him.

All enter in her room.

Shomi : Sanskaar beta come beside me. He sits in the chair and holds her hand.

Sanskaar : Don't worry maa, I will not leave you.

Shomi : Beta I always wanted a son to care for me. And you come in my life. Thank you so much. So I request you not to leave me. Shona didn't understand your heart but I need you in my life. I ask you as a mother will you be stay with us in my house? I can't see my two daughters marital life ruined.

She entreats him.

Sanskaar is stunned : I promise maa I will not leave you until my last breath.

Shomi : It's a benediction to hear "maa" by you.



Precap : Sanskaar sleeps beside Swara. Swasan moments.




Leave your comment if I got more ten comment I will post Chapter two tomorrow the Swasan moments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice!
Im loving the precap!
8seetha thumbnail
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thanks u guys hope you support me until the end, take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very nice start to what I am sure is an awesome story! I hope Swara in the show also reacts like this when the divorce topic comes about in the show. Continue soon, please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow interesting start cant wait for more

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so are you going to update it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it! Please update especially because the promo looks interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVED THE START AWESOME LOVED HOW SANSKAR GAVE HER THE DIVORCE PAPERS GLAD SHE REALIZED SHE WANTS TO STAY WITH SANSKAR AWESOME UPDATE LOVED THAT SHE REALIZED LASH IS A TERRIBLE CHOICE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear...
Awesome start...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
And please pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice start. Pls continue and pm me whenever u r updating.

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