Swara-Sanskar-Laksh OS 'Made in Heaven'

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

You created such a cute and loving atmosphere and feel with this piece Preeto 🤗 I love Sanaya for Lakshya- a proper new beginning for him. SwaSan are so like I want them to be- perfect and totally in bliss. And best of al, you showed the sort of SwaTa moments we were talking about in the AT and then both ladies bullying Sanky too!! Yayyy! I felt like I was watching a happy moment in a film 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Wow Preet...👏 So romantic...so warm and fuzzy and filled with sugar, spice and everything nice!

Where do I begin--I loved, obviously, the tender yet passionate romance between Swara & Sansku. The way he tries to corner her in their room as well as the kitchen--completely besotted 😉

Loved the Sujata--Swara bonding too. I loved that scene where Sansku pretends he is there just to take photos, and tries to "put maska" on Sujata by saying she looks so Fab, he just wants to photograph her! 😊 Reminded me of a scene from one of my favorite movies, HAHK, where Salman tries to similarly spend time with Madhuri 😊 and flatters Bindu that he's actually there to photograph her! 😉

It was lovely too, that you've given a closure, and a moving ahead to a new life for Lakshya, with Sanaya. Sanaya seems like such a lovely character. Are you a fan of Sanaya Irani the actress, BTW?

Thanks for the PM. BTW when are you updating part 3 of your SS? 😊

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Smilelicious

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Aw such a cute OS!

Glad Laksh found someone who can make him happy 😊

SwaSan moments were ☺️ If we get anything like that on the show ...
Very nicely written, hope we get more of these!

Thanks a lot 😳

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Smilelicious

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Asha122
Amazing Preet...👏
Loved SwaSan...❤️
Sanky was naughty...😉
Waiting to see these kind of scenes in show yar...
Do write more...😳

Thanks a lot Asha 🤗

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Beautifully written! !

Thank you 😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
preet lovely os as usual.
i loved the delicately written prose...and the beauty of their relationship.

and of course laksh moved on...I'm happy.

it was beautiful, sweet, naughty and pretty os.

love--

medha

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment Medha 🤗 😳

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Smilelicious

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: white_rose
Preet,
Love it love it love it...what a refreshing OS to read when ur stuck in a crazy day and in between writing a crazy scene. Thanks for the PM too...keep it up...a perfect read for a crazy Friday morning after being stuck in traffic and rain for over an hour.

TY,

Rose

Thanks a lot for the amazing comment Rose 😳 Really means a lot 😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

loved it👏

swasan😳

Thank you Prio 😳

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Sanskaar and akki's conversation was so cute.. Parineeta coming in at the 'perfect' time...🤣

Sanskaar really knows how to pacify his Mom with flattery..

But it all boils down to the one guy who was a star in this OS - Sanskaar Maheshwari..

Preet Thanks a lot for this OS..

N sorry for reading it after so long.. thanks for your pm..

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Jamina96
Wow beautiful as usual 👏
Love your works naughty sanky lovely swara
Laksh sanaya part is also good 😳
Thanks for the PM preet. Do write more

Thank you dear 😊

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