Sanskaar Two shot: M on my Own(Note on page 4)Last part- page 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

aww..that so cute of sanskar..

first i have to marry u n take take u with me..

haye me marja

Haha... I always like angsty sansku but i dnt know how he became cute n mushy.. Hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I loved the first part, it was a brilliant concept👏
Sometimes I feel Sanskar should just leave everything and make a better life for himself away from his family and swara😭 Then only they would all realise his worth...
I loved his angst and all the emotions you portrayed...something along the same lines should happen in the serial - it's so much better than the current track...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part was just as good😃
I loved the fact that Sankar did not try to ingrate himself with Swara. He let her go to decide for herself what's good for her.
Although he was heartbroken his life still went on - that was the most commendable thing😃
Swara's confession was lovely...I'm glad that you made her relent and confess...She definitely had to do some running for a change😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That one phrase...Don't go...is a tough cookie to utter and you made Swara say it...
Loved the way you have written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the second part! I am so happy sanskaar didnt leave the city a second time with more pain. Seeing swara there asking him to stop, not leave...it must have been such a balm for his broken heart 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear
It was a very cute update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAVI55

I loved the first part, it was a brilliant concept👏

Sometimes I feel Sanskar should just leave everything and make a better life for himself away from his family and swara😭Then only they would all realise his worth...
I loved his angst and all the emotions you portrayed...something along the same lines should happen in the serial - it's so much better than the current track...😃

Awww... Thnks for detailed comments... I don't want sansku to unite swalak... I jst want him to step aside... Jao swara do watever u want to do!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: JazzyM

That one phrase...Don't go...is a tough cookie to utter and you made Swara say it...

Loved the way you have written

thank u so much... Am a bit partial towards sansku!!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Loved the second part! I am so happy sanskaar didnt leave the city a second time with more pain. Seeing swara there asking him to stop, not leave...it must have been such a balm for his broken heart😳

M glad u liked it... Thnks for d cmmnt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update dear

It was a very cute update

Thnk u so mch..

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