Sanskaar Two shot: M on my Own(Note on page 4)Last part- page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anbhigya

Awww... Wowww i wud hav never thought of this kind of ending... I luvd it!!! 👏


Aww im glad u liked my silly scene dear, thnk u ... 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW..
that's lovely..

But didnt like sanskar leaving everything and going away
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful story.

If after all that has happened Swara still wishes to be with Lakshya I want him to bless the couple & leave with his head held high. No grey shades, no begging, no forcing, no gale pading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

WOW..

that's lovely..

But didnt like sanskar leaving everything and going away

thnk u... Technically he is on a much needed break!!! Hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Beautiful story.

If after all that has happened Swara still wishes to be with Lakshya I want him to bless the couple & leave with his head held high. No grey shades, no begging, no forcing, no gale pading

Thank you... Thats all what i want!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Guys this was meant to be a OS... But lifeiz beautiful inspired me so much that i decided to make it a two shot.. Will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2: Happiness comes to you when its least expected!!! He read this sum where.. But in his case it was heartbreak n loneliness! The less he hoped the more he got.. After almost one n a half year he was back to this city.. He was having this weird restlessness. Or was it the fear of seeing her again.. The same coldness in her eyes.. He cursed himself for listening to his mom that she was sick n he has to visit her.. He knew she was lying still he wanted to come. He reached home n to his surprise everyone was waiting for him.. Ma n badi ma got misty eyed.. Lakshya hugged him and said he MISSED him.. Really??? Half of the misery on his life were due to him.. N yeah swara n his marriage never happened.. N past four months he is dating a girl. N from what he heard of she was a nice girl n he was happy!! He just rolled his eyes when he saw his mom but couldn't help but smile.. She made him go to shopping with her in the evening.. N to his surprise he SAW her when she bumped into him.. She greeted his mom but not a single look towArds him.. Wowww he thought!! Nothing has changed after all... Next day he went to meet shomi n dida.. He chatted with them for long hours.. They were happy to see him.. Swara was gone to music institute.. But again they met !! Sanskar again cursed himself... But to his surprise she said a cold hii to him... After some formal mechanical talk he left.. Dida told her he was going back day after tomorrow n this time there is no coming back.. She was taken aback!! This was it!!! What does he think of himself!! He just can't come and leave whenever he wishes.. She went to MM n straight towards his room... He was working... She threw his papers.. He was about to blurt sumthing but she stopped him.. What do u think??? N what were u thinking one n half year back??? U always call everybody.. Ma n didaa but not ME.. Everybody knew u wre cuming except me.. Whyyy... He said i just want u to be happy.. N i fear ur hate for me!!! I have no energy left...!!!!! Continued below
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sanskaar continued... See u treated me as if i was a criminal.. U hated me for my ways... U hated the fact that i fell in love with u... This is not what i deserve!! U know once Kavitha said to me: Love is all about feeling free.. N letting the one u luv feel the same!! U cannot bound sum 1 to u.. N hell i was tired of everything.. So i left... N now i don't know what has gotten into you.. Go home n SLEEP... She felt guilty of causing him pain... She felt as if no word would cum out of her mouth n she left... He smiled sarcastically.. Congrats sanskaar u made her cry again!! U can give nothing but pain!! He couldn't sleep.. Next day he met some old friends n the places which were kavitha favourites !! He came back home.. Had a heartfelt chat with lakshya.. Next early morning he left... It was 6:00 AM in the morning when he reached the airport.. He waited for some odd minutes when somebody who was breathing heavily tapped at his shoulder.. There she was panting... Running out of breath.. She was just quiet.. Tears flowing down her cheeks.. Again she couldn't utter a single word.. Throat choked.. She hugged him... N jst said:PPLEASE DON'T GO!?! He was like what?? Don't go or if u r going take me with you.. It took me seconds to realise that i feel for u when u left that day without saying a word.. U just cut off all ties!! I have imagined this moment thousand times that when i'll meet u i will make u repent but now all i am able to say is Don't go even when i want to say I am deeply madly and irrevocably in luv with u!! But see i can't utter a single word... N he broke into laughter.. Hugged her back n said but u just said it!!! Well u gotta practice this proposal again minus the sobs n mumbles.. DON'T worry u got whole lyf for this... Chalo av pehle lets go home... I have to marry u first before i take u with me!!!She jst smiled... In between her sobs She said: Awww... U luk so cute when u blush... He gave a filmy look to his future wife n took her hand and walked together!!!!
Edited by Anbhigya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 Thnks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww..that so cute of sanskar..
first i have to marry u n take take u with me..

haye me marja

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