swasan ff - i luv u [ part 4 up page 4] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Its beautiful, please maje them longer
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wow what an update
I loved the ending scene
But laksh gosh he is making me sick now..
Overall well portrayed
Enjoyed my reading
Will be waiting for next update..
Plz make them a bit longer if possible
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Nice update eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hope sanskar is fine pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
PART 4
swara rushed to the hospital! Al the mahishwaris, gadodias and boses following!

In the hospital.
Swara- doctor sanskar maheshwari kaha hai! Vo kaisa hai!??
Doc- aap kon.
Swara- mein uski wife hu! Swara.ughe cl aaya tha abhi thodi der phle!
Doc- ooh! Yes mrs maheshwari! Patient ka abhi operation chal rha hai! Unhe kafi chote aai hai! Situation kafi critical hai!
Sujata- kaha hai mhara chora! K hua ise daktr! Sanskar.
Nurse- dekheye aap shant ho jaeye ye hospital hai!
Sujata- kaise shant ho jau mein. Hai mhara chora yaha hai is hal me aur..
Swara-mom plz..
Doctor kya hua hai sanskar ko!
Dekhye andar abhi operation chal rha ahi aur unhe urgently B+ blood chahiye! Aur abhi blood bank me ye bloodgrp nhi hai!
Swara- doctorera blood grp B+ hai! Aap plz mera khoon le lijeye!
Ragini- nhi, swara kaise sanskar ko khoon de sakti hai! Ye sb use ki vagha se to hua hai! Chachiji ap kuch kahiye na.
swara-tu dur rho in sb se.
Doc- nurse check kro inka blod match ho rha hai to!
Nurse checked her blood and it matched! They took 2 bottles of blood from swara.

Everyone was wating outside the OT. Swara was remembering all her moments with sanskar! His confession their confrontation.
And crying and crying...

Shomi- shona kitna roegi, sb theek ho jaega!
Swara-maa ye sb kya ho gya maa! Maa sanskar... maa mein uske bina...

Just then docter came out.
Swara-doctor kya hua! Sanskar maisa hai! Sb theek hai na!
Doc- dekhiye operation sucessful tha pr...
Swara- pr kya..saaf saaf boli!
Doc- pr agar patient ko kuch der me hosh nhi aaya to vo coma me ja sakte hai!
everyone was in a shock! They all rushed to sanskar's room.
Swara was shaterred hearing this! She collapsed on the floor.
Shomi- shona tum kmzor nhi pd sakti! Sanskar ko tumhari zarurt hai! Jao uske pass.

Swara got up and rushed to the room!!
She saw everyone was standing near sanskar.
She entered the room and saw sanskar lying on the hospital bed.
she gathered all the courage and went near him. She sat near him on the bed and held his hand. In her's.
Now she did not care about the surroundings!

Swara- sanskar tum mughe aise nhi chod sakte. Kaise ja sakte ho tum mughe akela chod k haa! Tumne promis kiya tha sath rhne ka! Mera sath dene ka fir kaise ja sakte ho tum haa!
I knw meine pechle kuch dino me tumse acche se baat nhi ki mein bohot rude the! Pr m soory.. maaf kr do mughe plz... chaho to saza bhi de do pr aise chup mt rho pl...
She held her ears... dekho ab to kaan bhi pakad liye meine. mein tumse gussa the tumhe samagh nhi paai! Khud ko samagh nhi pai... lr tumse gussa sirf isliye thi qki mughe pata tha k tum mughe samgho ge! Pr sanskar tum gussa bhi to unhise hote ho na jinse tum sbse zada pyar krte ho! Meine tumhe phle nhi bataya k mein bhi tumse pyar krne lgi hu, qki mein apne mission se distract nhi ho sakti thi! Pr ab mein tumhare hosh me aati hi bata dungi k mein tumse pyar krti hu!! (With this he hugged sanskar who was lying in the bed, basically she was over him) I LUV U SANSKAR...I LUV U.
She sobbed for a few seconds and then got up! She saw sanskar had opened his eys and was smiling at her.
Swara-cheater kbse sun rhe the mere baate!
Sanskar- I LUV U se.
Swara hit him platfully on his arm and hugged him again!
I LUV U sanskar...
I LUV U swara!
He held his hand on her waist!!
( the family members were still present)

To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Guys do tell me shall i continue??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisimluv

Guys do tell me shall i continue??


Yes of course. ..its superb. .do go on
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Superb...
Pls continue.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Superb...
Both the parts are lovely..

Ragini😡 I will kill you
loved it.
Swara confession👍🏼

Loved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Superb update..
Swsan confession
Simply loved it !!
N ragini gosh kill her !!
Will be waiting for next part..
Update soon .tc

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