swasan ff - i luv u [ part 4 up page 4]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-1
After laksh's kidnapping and when sanskar showed the video of gundas beating laksh!
Swara signed sanskar to cum out of the room.
swara- sanskar ye sb kya hai! Tum pagal ho gye ho kya! Vo bhao hai tumhara...
sanskar- haa to. Hai bhai. To kya!? Dekho swara tum bohot mahan ho, mein aisa ni ho skata, mere pas aur koi option nhi tha!
Swara- pr sanskar tum samagh q nhi rhe ho in sb me use hirt krna kaha tk justified hai!
sabskar- to uska tumhe hurt krna justified hai??
Swara- sanskar baat ko samgho! Uske nzro me meine use zidagi ka sbse bada dhokha diya hai! Uske pyar ka mazak banaya hai!
Tum kavita se pyar krte the na!
sans- swata in sb me kavita ko na lao to accha hoga!
swara- tum kavita se pyar krte the na! To agar tumhari shadi vali din Kavita tumhe chod kr bhag jati aur agle din laksh se shadi kr k ghar aati to..
Sanskar- bs. Shut up, just shut up!. Bakwas band kro apni. Ye sb tum laksh ko chidvane k liye bol rhi ho na! Oh right, tum to ye sb bologi hi pyar jo krti ho usee ab bhi ... But let me tel u one thing clearly miss swara bose, jbtk ragini confess nhi kregi , mein laksh ko nhi chodung!
With this he stromed out of the room!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice continue soo. Plz..
N if possible pm plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART - 2
But let me tell u one thing clearly miss swara bose, jbtk ragini confess nhi kregi , mein laksh ko nhi chodung!

With this he stromed out of the room!

Seeing a threat to laksh, ragini confessed all her crimes in front of the family.

Location- living room

All people are present there, even gadodias and boses.

Sanskar had set up a camere in living room to give laksh a clear reality check.

All mahiveshwaries were shocked.

AP- tum aisa kaise kr sakti ho ragini, kya yehi tumhari parvarish hai???

DP- dekh liya ap, hmne kaha the k laksh k liye swara se acchi ladki koi nhi hai, swara hi hmare ghar ki bahu bn sakti hai.

Hearing this, sanskars heart ached... he realised that swara was going to marry laksh and luved him soo much. And maybe still does.

Sanskar(to swara) - laksh ko chod diya hai, bahar jake dekho aaane vala hoga.

Swara went out without a word. She saw gundas pushing laksh out of the car and he was hurt so he couldnot stand up. Swara rushed to him and supported him to get up.

Swara- laksh tum theek ho.

Laksh- swara m sorry m really sory,, plz plz, mughe maaf kr do.

Swara- laksh in sn k bare me baad me baat ke lenge. Abhi tum ander chalo.

[Swara supported laksh, his hand was over her shoulder and her hand was on his waist to support him.]

They entered MM. as they climed up the stairs everyone looked up to them.

Sanskar could not see swara so close to laksh, maybe he was possessive, maye jelous,he himself did not know.

Ragini rushed up the stairs to hug laksh.

Laksh- dur raho muughse tum. Mughe ghin aati hai tumse, tum itna gir jaogi meine kabhi nhi socha tha.

Swara signed adarsh to help laksh, she then stepped aside.

Every family member was scolding ragini, dadi even slapped her. Laksh said thet he wants a divorce from her.

Ragini- bs!! Bs kijiye aap sb log. Aap sb ne ye to sun liya k hmne kya kiya pr kya kisi ko ye pata hai k hmne aisa q kiya.

Hne aisa laksh k liye kiya, qki hm inse bohot pyar krte hai.

Swara- ragini ye pyar nhi obsession hai, pagalpn hai, isi pagalpn k chalte tumne aoni bhn ko jane marne ki koshish ki..aur

Ragini- kya... Fir se vahi sb jhooth swara.

DP-ladki, zada hoshiyari mt kro, tumne abhi apne gunah qubol kiye hai.

Ragini- bade papa mine aisa kuch nhi kiya hai jo meine bola tha. Ye sb krne k liye hme sanskar ne kaha tha. Unhone laksh ko kidnapp kraya tha aur kaha tha k agar hmne ye sb hi kiya to vo laksh ko jaan se mmar denge.

Laksh- bs ragini bs, bs kro apna ye drama, kitna jhooth bologi, tumhari vagha se mere swara mughse dur hui.

"mere swara" hearing this sanskar felt like punching laksh's face.

Ragini - nahi laksh ji ye sb jhooth hai, aap hmpe bharosa kre...hmne hi to aapke pyar k liye swara ko mnaya tha, hmne hi aapka risha shu kiya tha.

AP - mughe lagta hai k ragini sach bol rhi hai, vaise bhi itni masuum bacchi kaise ye sb kr sakti hai.

Ragini- thank u maa, hmpe bharosa krne k liye!! Aur sanskar aap to swara ko use hi kr rhe hai na. hme pata hai aap dono ki shadi nakli hai... ye baat sbko pata hai.

Hain, maa, papa, dadi, jante hai na aap ye. Sanskar, aapki shadi nakli hai, aap khte hai k aap dono k beeche me pyar nhi hai. Aaapke dil me uske liya pyar nhi hai, pr fir aapke bistar pr uske liye kaise gagha hai.

Sanskar now slapped her so hard, she fell on the floor.

AP - sanskar ye kya tarika hai..

Sanskar- mein iske jaan le lunga, iski himmat kaise hui swara k bare me bakwas krne ki.

Swara( cummin to him and holding his hand and putting her another hand over his shoulder)- sanskar shant ho jao plz... don't loose ur patience, is time to bilkul nhi.

Sanskar- arey bs yaar, tumhe mahan bane ka shok hai tum bano, mein ja rha hu...

With this he left picking his car keys from the table.

Swara- sanskar ruko..

Seeing this ragini smirked.

AP - ruko swara hme tumse baat krni hai.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
As usual rags escaped from the truth..
😒

But a nice update..
👏👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Very nice ⭐️ 👏
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Hi dear, even I think Ragz is gng to escape the same way in the show too... She is too clever to just fall into kidnapping plan... Let's see what happens in the show... But yeah I'm really loving this FF so plz do PM me when u update! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Awesome update
Continue soon
Please do pm me for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

PART 3

Sanskar stormed out of he house, he couldnot tolerate any bakwas of ragini.

After sanskar left, ragini smirked.

AP- swara tumhe kuch savalo k javab dene hai.

Swara had all sorts of accusitoin on her character, bcz family believed that ragini was the truthful one and swara was the one who was playing with morals and values.

Laksh- swara, ab mughe pata chal gya hai k ragini ne hme alag kiya hai, tumhari galti nhi thi. Mein tumhe vaps apnane ko taiyar hu, tum bs ye bata do that sanskar did not touch u.

Everyone was shocked at this statement of laksh and wating for swara's answer. Swara indeed was shocked at the words used..

Just then swara;s phn rang.

Man- hello m I talking to swara.

Swara- yes speaking

Man- maam mein city hospital se bol rha hu. Yaha mr sanskar maheshwari ko admit kraya hai, inka kafi sever accident hua hia. Apka number speeddial pe the to meine aapko dial kr diya.

Swara- kya???

She disconnected the cal and grabbed the car keys from table and rushed.

Shomi stoped her.

Shomi- shone kya hua

Swara- maa vo vo sanskar. And she ran away..

All the others following.

[ragini thinking, her flashback shown.

Ragini- kaam acche se ho jana chahiye, MM me ek ehite colour ki BMW hai jiska number @#$# hai. Iske breaks aise fail kro k jo gadi chale vo bachna nhi chahiye.

She knew that it was sanskar;s car and now she had stooped so low that she wanted to get sanskar killed.]

Edited by anisimluv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope sanskar is fine 😲
Anyways nice update !!!!
Do give next part soon 😛

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