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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This is simply beautiful! Love how the story played. Would be interesting to see how the rest plays out. :)

Nisha

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ashred12
Awesome... wish der was a sec part on d scene downstairs...

Thanks for reading and commenting 😊 Hmmm...about the 2nd part, I'm frankly not sure yaar. But I am working on another TS, which should be up by the end of this week, I guess.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.
This is simply beautiful! Love how the story played. Would be interesting to see how the rest plays out. :)
Nisha

Hey...thanks for the comment. Well, I don't really plan to continue this with the scene downstairs. But if I do, will PM you. I am working on another TS which should be up by the weekend. 😊

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

SERIOUSLYY viji !!!!!! 😲😲

i'm damn speechless !!!! 👏

i really think ur a wonderfull writer !!!!😆😊

really loveddd n admiredd ur workk 👏👏

this one was so soo so FABB !!! 🤗🤗

i really wishh this thing to happen in the show as well !! u knw what the serial makers have to get advised by u on their story lines ...seriouslyy 😳😊😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Ammiey
SERIOUSLYY viji !!!!!! 😲😲
i'm damn speechless !!!! 👏
i really think ur a wonderfull writer !!!!😆😊
really loveddd n admiredd ur workk 👏👏
this one was so soo so FABB !!! 🤗🤗
i really wishh this thing to happen in the show as well !! u knw what the serial makers have to get advised by u on their story lines ...seriouslyy 😳😊😉

Oh God...That's too much praise yaar, seriously. 😊 Thanks though. Well, this track is what I fear will be shown in the serial. I say "fear", coz I am not really a fan of separation/ MU between leads. If at all it happens, I hope and pray its very, very brief. 😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

why did you not name it something more romantic? Like maybe 60480 minutes without you...or realisation? or something like that?( don't get cross, I'm just picking faults at this overwhelmingly beautiful OS😉😛)

The writing is as always brilliant and beautiful...which i think is a given anyway when you are the writer.

I almost felt like enacting the parts out while reading it. Did it too. Thats how wonderful it was.

and your personality analysis of Sanskaar, swara and lakshya was so great.

also DP has a sense of humour here.😃

applause. because i ran out of superlative adjectives👏👏

love

---medha

Edited by medhasarkar - 10 years ago

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Beautiful .!

I cannot find any other wrd to describe ur writings. Every stry I read of yours I end up smiling :)

M sure this phase is definetaly going to come in their relation.

Sanskar sacrificing and swara fighting.this tyme she will not let her love being taken away for the happiness of others.

I loved thay way she confronted sanskar about his changed attitude.self hurting and sacrificing his love.

Nd laksh ji ..can be be kicked in the head ? Or be sent with ragini so DAT both can get psychiatric help .?

Shekar being forgiven is beyond my understanding this man arghhh. I cannot stand him even for a sec how spineless and coward can any1 be .

I love ur writing

Do write more

Thnks for the PM :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
why did you not name it something more romantic? Like maybe 60480 minutes without you...or realisation? or something like that?( don't get cross, I'm just picking faults at this overwhelmingly beautiful OS😉😛)
The writing is as always brilliant and beautiful...which i think is a given anyway when you are the writer.

I almost felt like enacting the parts out while reading it. Did it too. Thats how wonderful it was.
and your personality analysis of Sanskaar, swara and lakshya was so great.
also DP has a sense of humour here.😃
applause. because i ran out of superlative adjectives👏👏
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love
---medha

😊 Thanks so much Medha. I had a little fun while writing this one, actually. I wanted to take some mild digs at Sujata, which I did (indirectly though). I unfortunately failed to take only indirect digs at Shekhar and Lakshya, for the simple reason that these characters are irritating me so much now, I couldn't control my snarkiness. 😊 Glad you liked it. Thanks for the PM of your latest, am about to read it now and shall comment there.

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Viji Viji Viji😃

Again a beautifully written OS

Loved the starting yaar...i mean u r toh great yaar...i love the way u writes👏

Coming to the OS

SwaSan were awesome as usual😳

Dadi shekhar n AP were😡 brainless creatures

N laksh toh dont have brain yaar bewkoof hai yeh banda🤢

I mean he was actually thinking ki swara still loves him bhai swara itni bhi pagal nhi hai🤣

Sujata shomi dida rocked👍🏼

Swara came there just to meet sansku...awww😳

N that jerk was behaving like a fool...tum pyar nhi karti n all koi isko pakad ke peet do...beat him very hard😡

Loved the aarti scene...sansku was so concerned😳

N the confession

Loved it yaar😉

Thanks for the pm🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
Beautiful .!
I cannot find any other wrd to describe ur writings. Every stry I read of yours I end up smiling :)
M sure this phase is definetaly going to come in their relation.
Sanskar sacrificing and swara fighting.this tyme she will not let her love being taken away for the happiness of others.
I loved thay way she confronted sanskar about his changed attitude.self hurting and sacrificing his love.
Nd laksh ji ..can be be kicked in the head ? Or be sent with ragini so DAT both can get psychiatric help .?
Shekar being forgiven is beyond my understanding this man arghhh. I cannot stand him even for a sec how spineless and coward can any1 be .

I love ur writing
Do write more
Thnks for the PM :)

Hey, thanks so much for reading and leaving such a detailed comment. 😊 Glad you liked this and my previous work.

Yes, I am quite irritated with the way Laskhya and Shekhar's characters are progressing in the serial, so I have taken some (not too severe) digs at them in this OS. 😊 😉

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