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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Amazing plot !!!! 👏

Hats off to u

Do write more Plzzz

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

What a relevation..

Swara fought like a tigress to save her husband..

And end description of everyone feeling looking at Swasan is superb..

They truley are idle for everyone..

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nice os. And finally everyone realised swara good even sujatha. Sanskar is proud of her wife and walking with her.so sweet. Tat part I loved. Pls do write more 😊

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

It's amazing, superb,fantastic ...
U have written it so good
Request you to make this ss
And do write more in swasan
Hopefully u will continue soon this

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Awesome OS dear 👏
Loved the way you described Swara supporting her husband 😳
I really wish to see it in the serial as well 😳 I hope everyone will get to know her truth.
Here Swara proved Sanskar's innocence very quickly and i loved it 👏 But i know in the show they will drag it unecessarily 😕
Anyways great work 👍🏼 Do write more 😳

Thnks :)

Swara is strong lady ..she dsnt need support .she can fight her own battle .she will fight for everyone she loves.

I hope the same ;)

I know ..in show they are going draga for week or months ..dats the thing i hate abt daily shows.

I ll try writing more :)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Its so amazing,,, Loved Swara protectiveness and fierceness.
I wish in show itself something like this happen😳
you're an amazing writer... please do write more... 😳

Thnk u :)

I wish the same :D

M sooo glad u liked it ..I'll sure try writing more

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Asha122
Wow this is amazing yar...😊👏
Loved Swara...😳 The way she supported Sanky is amazing...👏
Hope to see Swara slapping ragini atleast once in the show as well..
Do write more...😊

Thanks m glad u liked it :)

Ragini deserves a slap !

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: coolcats123
Oh my god this was beautiful... Loved it completely... 😉 😊 ... I hope something like dis is shown on the episode tooo... Ragini shud be exposed like dis only 😡 ... Evil phyco ... ND swara a tigeress for her hubby ... Loved it... 😊

Thnk u :)

Ragini is such a quick mind ..had she used it in a gud way. Nonetheless all hidden reality will come in open.swara is indeed tigress. :)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: azira07
very well written dear do write more :)))

Thnks ..will surely write more :)

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: anu91
It was so gud and awesome...
Do write more os or ss on swasan...
I'll love to read...
Do pm me while updating any stories...

Thnks :)

Ah..well I have restricted myself to writing OS only ..coz of my procrastinating nature.I would not want my readers to wait :P

So yes I might write more OS

Edited by -TeriMalang- - 10 years ago