SwaSan FF: Abhi Mujh Mein Kahin (Updated Part6 Pg29) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Note: Here is the next update... Sorry for any mistakes was in a hurry...

PART 4(a):

Sanskaar and Arjun reaches home

Sanskaar orders watchman to take all the packets inside, watchman leaves by keeping all the packets in their bedroom

Sanskaar: He was attending a call from his employee at outside

Arjun: Runs to hall with excitement he sees Swara helping Sujatha in kitchen. He goes to her and says "Swara there is big surprise for u from Sanskaar, u fastly go to bedroom"

Sanskaar: comes in and sees all surprising faces, he silently goes to his bedroom

Arjun is not at all accepting Swara excuses "Swara jaldi chalna pls"

Swara: Atlast says ok I am going by saying she goes to her room

After Swara leaves Arjun goes to everyone and says Sanskaar ne Swara ke liye pura shopping mall karidh liya

Sujatha: In surprise what? I won't believe

Arjun: Aunty he did entire shopping infront of me for selecting each dress he nearly took 20 min. You people stop enquiring and come fast by saying he drags everyone to SwaSan room. Everyone starts peeping into their room.

SwaSan room:

Swara: She was shocked seeing so many dresses on the bed, looking at Sanskaar she asks yeh sab kiske liye?

Sanskaar: Thumhare liye?

Swara: Pointing finger towards him enquires,"thum theek ho na?"

Sanskaar: Pagal hogaya kya seedha bath karo?

Swara: Coming more near to Sanskaar starts pulling his two cheeks with her hands

Sanskaar: Ouch! yeh thum kya kar rahi ho, mei ne thumko ithna saara gifts leekar aaya, lekin thumne mujje par revenge karne ke liye plan kar rahi hu kya? chodo mera gaal, ye mera gaal hai kuch elastic nahi isa pull karne ke liye

Swara: takes her hands away from him and says i got a doubt so I am checking

Sanskaar: With irritation what are you checking?

Swara: i thought someone came by wearing ur face mask so I am pulling ur skin to test whether u or someone

Sanskaar: Ha aagaya private investigator, mujhe check karne ke liye he says sarcastically

Swara: What can I do if u r showing new shades

Sanskaar: Agar tumhara investigation hogaya tho dresses check karo

Swara starts seeing all the dresses

Sanskaar: Which is good?

Swara: All are good by saying she takes a blue dress into hands and looking into it, she steps on Sanskaar's foot

Sanskaar: ouch! thum mujje hurt karne ke liye bahuth plans kiya kya by saying he takes his foot abruptly which makes Swara to lose balance and when she was about to fall. Sanskaar holds her through her waist while Swara unknowingly places her hands around his neck. Sanskaar lost in her

Arjun: Aunty now it's time for all of us to leave from here. They all comes to hall falling in to the sofa starts laughing

Swara: Looks at her position and gets up with Sanskaar's help

Sanskaar: Takes his hand away from her

Swara: Picks the blue dress which was fallen on the floor

Sanskaar: This is my favorite color so i selected this. Is this ur favorite color too?

Swara: No

Sanskaar feels sad and he starts going from there

Swara: Suniye

Sanskaar: turns to her

Swara: Thank u bahuth accha hi sab dresses, by saying she smiles

Sanskaar: too smiles and says, ha in those packets there will be a mobile, u take it, he comes out blushingly thinking of her words

Arjun: Looking at Sanskaar, aunty kisine bahuth blush kar raha hai

Sujatah: mujhe bi lagtha hi, they both smiles looking at Sanskaar

Sanskaar: lekin mujje book ho raha hai

They all laughs seeing Sanskaar inevitable shy situation

Evening:

Sanskaar and Uttara are playing chess while Arjun and others are chatting sitting beside them

Uttara: Bhai i got trained from many chess experts this time i will win over u and by sure i will get a scooty

Sanskaar: First u play then think about winning and scooty

Swara: Comes by serving tea to all

Arjun: Swara u too play chess

Sanskaar: Hey bewakoof eh ghar ka kaam nahi hai chess iss game keliye brain hona chahiye

Swara glares at him

Sujatha: U have a very sharp brain so u always commits mistakes

Sanskaar (st): These days mom became very smart i can't deal her now.

Uttara: Bhai it's ur move now

They start playing seriously

Sanskaar: Now ur game will end see

Uttara: ye kya hi bhai everytime u r winning

Swara: Comes near Uttara and places her hand on her shoulder and starts looking into the game seriously. Everyone looks at her for sudden attempt to play. She was adjusting her hair whenever it was falling on her face

Sanskaar: He was completely lost looking at her. She was wearing red dress with one side dupatta, with loose hair

Swara: With a single step kills Sanskaar's king

Uttara: Screams loudly for winning the game which brings Sanskaar to sense. Sujatha notices Sanskaar keenly, while others completely laid their interest on Swara's play

Uttara: Bhabi we won by saying they gives hi-fi. Wow bhabi because of u i will get scooty

Sanskaar: Angrily i won't buy any scooty for u. she helped u by saying so he leaves to his room

Arjun: With surprise as Swara won over Sanskaar asks "Swara do u know how to play chess?"

Swara: Yes from childhood i used to play with my baba, i used to win always by saying she leaves, Sanskaar listens to her words.

SwaSan room:

Sanskaar: Sitting on bed he was playing chess alone

Swara: Brings milk to Sanskaar and forwards the glass to him

Sanskaar: Looking at her what maa told u to give milk for me

Swara: no u didnt have ur dinner so i brought it for u

Sanskaar: hello mam mei bewakoof nahi hu, thumhara plan me phasne ke liye what u mixed in this milk?

Swara: Innocently i didn't mix anything.

Sanskaar: I won't believe you since I tortured u a lot u might have mixed something

Swara: Sacchi mai kuch nahi mix kiya. Please u drink this i can't see you in pain because of me

Sanskaar: No i won't believe u

Swara: Ok see i will drink then u believe me, by saying so she drinks some milk and says see nothing happened to me

Sanskaar: Ha ok i will drink now by saying he takes the glass from her and is about to drink

Swara: Stops him from drinking by holding his hand. He looks at her

Swara: Rukiye thum eh doodh math peelo

Sanskaar: Why?

Swara: I tasted it i will bring u another glass of milk

Sanskaar: Taking her hand away from him says hello madam I am not bewakoof. I know ur plan u will go and mix something in that milk no need i will drink this milk only.

Swara: Smacking her head says do as u like

Sanskaar (St): As u tasted it the milk is more tasty than usual. By thinking so he drinks the milk and smiles

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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PART 4(b):

Swara adjusts herself and goes to sleep on bed

Sanskaar: Why r u so fast to sleep? You defeated me infront of everyone will any wife do this to her husband

Swara: Then will any husband talks low about his wife infront of anyone

Sanskaar: Ok now u play a game with me then we both can know who r intelligent

Swara: By agreeing she sits opposite to him

Sanskaar: But one condition

Swara: What?

Sanskaar: If u win the game then i will do whatever u say but if i win the game then u have to do whatever i say

Swara: stays silent for a while

Sanskaar: kya dar laga hi kya mera condition se

Swara: No I am ready u start the game

Both starts playing.. Swara plays well

Swara: See u will be defeated in this game too by saying she again resumes playing but soon she falls in Sanskaar's trap, she lost the game

Sanskaar: Smirks at her for his winning

Swara: Keeps a puppy face for losing the game

Sanskaar: Kya hogaya Mrs intelligent u lost the game

Swara: ha kabi-kabi isa hotha hi

Sanskaar: Now u have to do whatever i ask

Swara: Ha bolo kya chahiye thumko

Sanskaar: He reaches very close to her face

Swara: Feels awkward he reaches near her ear and says i will ask u later by saying he gets back to his previous position

She feels relaxed after he moves far from her

Swara (St): What happened to him?? He is behaving differently. Did he start loving me?? No Swara don't think too much he loves only Ragini. So without thinking anything go to sleep.

Swara sleeps and Sanskaar will be lying on coach once he feels Swara slept he goes near her and gently moves towards tummy and whispers "Hi baby.. I am your papa... Sorry baby... Your mumma gave me the best ever gift.. Lekin Papa ne thumko bahuth thakleef diya.. Mei kabhi aise nahe karunga I PROMISE.. I LOVE YOU A LOT.. I hope I will be able to fulfill all your dreams.. come soon"

After talking to baby Sanskaar goes to sleep

Next Day:

Morning @Breakfast:

All were having breakfast. Swara phone rings. She takes the call and after ending the call she was thinking.

AP: Kya hua Swara??

Swara: Badi maa hospital sey phone tha. Since my health was not good I was on leave now I should join back

Sujatha: Tum hospital nahi jaa sakte. Tumhara tabiyaat teekh nahi hai

Swara: Mom I am perfectly fine. I can't leave my work it's my passion. Waise bhi mei ek doctor hu apna dhyaan rakhunga achi tarah se...

Sanskaar: Mom Swara teekh keh rahi hai. But along with work if she rests then no problem.

Sujatha finally agrees everyone else also agrees

Swara does not understand why Sanskaar is supporting her

SwaSan room:

Swara: Thank you Sanskaar for supporting me

Sanskaar: Hello madam since I convinced mom don't do more work. Take care of my Princess and her mom. If I feel they are not well and work is more then ill not let them go to hospital.

By saying so Sanskaar leaves to office

Swara (St): Princess??? Who is she??? Wait is he talking about me and baby.. That means he started thinking about baby.. I am very happy finally he is coming close to baby..

Office:

Arjun: Sanskaar today you need attend the party along with Swara.

Sanskaar: Says ok

Ragini who came there to talk with Sanskaar might have heard it and thinks Sanskaar I will see how you will take her to party

MM House:

Ragini comes there greets everyone and goes to meet Swara.

SwaSan room:

Swara ll be just lying on bed. Ragini enters the room Swara opens her eyes and sees Ragini.

Ragini: "Hello Swara. Oh wait wait what should I call you ha got it Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari. Kaha hai tumhara pati? Abhi tak nahi aaye aapke pati parmeshwar? Awww soo sad. Tumhari kismet kitni kharab hai naa I mean pati tumhara hai lekin time mere saath spend karta hai. Abhi hum dono ek saath the in a coffee shop."

Swara is not feeling comfortable

Swara: Dekho Ragini stop all of your nonsense ok!!! I am not interested in your talk. Aur jaha tak mere pati ka sawal hai I trust him more than my life. So please go from here

At the same time Sanskaar calls

Sanskaar: Swara be ready we need to go for a party

Swara: By saying ok she cuts the call

Ragini: What happened? Sanskaar asked you to get ready for a party? I only suggested him to take you for Party

Swara feels bad and thinks about the incident after 10 days of marriage

Flashback:

Sanskaar gets ready for the party

Sujatha: Sanskaar what is that color? u doesn't have proper taste Swara u select a nice suit for him and u also get ready

Swara: why i should get ready

Sujatha: u have to go with him to the party

Swara: No I am not interested let him go mom please

DP: Swara u r his wife u has to attend all parties along with him

Swara(St): what u know about him who knows where he will leave me in the middle of the way

AP: Swara go and get ready fast

Sanskaar: Keeps silent as everyone are asking her to go,

Sujatha: follows them into their room

Swara: Selects a black shirt and white coat for Sanskaar, he takes it silently as Sujatha was in their room Swara wears a blue dress

After getting ready they leave

Sanskaar: stops the car at his farmhouse

Swara: understands that he is going to leave her there she gets out from the car silently and says u please come fast i can't go alone everyone will feel bad if i go alone

Sanskaar: Doesn't give any reply and leaves to the party

In party:

All his friends meet him and admire his suit he gets irked as it was selected by Swara

Arjun: Comes to the party and meets Sanskaar and asks about Swara

Sanskaar: I dropped her at the farmhouse

Arjun: what Sanskaar? R u in sense?

Sanskaar: Why r u reacting weird did i leave her on the roads??

He leaves from there without waiting for Arjun's reply as he doesn't want to extend the argument

Swara: Now it's 11:30 still he didn't return and he is not at all lifting my calls i will leave now i tolerated much by saying she calls to a cab

Arjun: It's already late Sanskaar. Swara is alone there she is ur wife u don't forget that if u now doesn't come along with me i will call aunty and inform her everything

Sanskaar: looks angrily at Arjun

Arjun: Sanskaar today i won't bother about anything u have to come with me

Sanskaar walks angrily out from the party and starts driving

Arjun: Why r u like this Sanskaar? Why can't u see her good nature? She is covering all ur mistakes but u r hurting her still u will pay high for ur misdeeds.

Sanskaar: You shut ur mouth dont think i will listen whatever u say

Swara: she doesn't want to hurt mom so she asks the driver to drive to the party venue so that she can return to the home along with Sanskaar on her way few goons stop the cab

Driver: Gets down and argues with goons. Goons hit him hardly and thrown him on the ground

Swara: rushes to the driver and calls bhai please get up r u ok

A goon drags her away and all others surrounds her in circle

Swara: with fear starts crying she pleads them to leave her

Sanskaar is on their way

So will Sanskaar reach on time??? Let's wait and see???

Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
Sanskar is trying to be gud
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Asha 😳🤗
First of all i loved their nok-jhok 😉 Even Sujata couldn't believe he bought all those dressed for Swara 😆
Then really liked when they played chess together 😳 And the best part was when he woke up and went to talk with his baby ❤️ So cute 😳
I really hope he reaches in time to save Swara 😲
Update fast 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ashu awesome updates 👏👏
I'm loving goody goody Sansku ❤️😳
Swara bhi happy happy 😳😳
Swara won chess yay 🥳
oops 2nd time she lost 😛
wanna knw Sansku kya karwata hai Swara se 😉
errr dat lady shld rot in hell 😡

Goons OMG 😲
hope Sansku reaches on time & beats those goons dishum dishum 😎

Excited for next part 😳
update soonish 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
ugh Sanz was a total jerk in the FBs nah?! grrr... Hmm he better be repenting all those things big time before Swara forgives him!! Hmmpf! 😡
And awsm update dear and as u can see I'm totally engrossed in this story!! Do cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww so cute 😳😳😳
sanky talking to his little princess 😳😳😳

swasan close close😳😳

swara feeling awkward 😆

what will sanskaar ask 😕😳

ragini 🤢🤢😡

sanky will surely reach on time 😃😃

continue soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow super dear

I love sanku caring

😡 try to kill that Ragini. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update asha...
Sanskar care so cute. ...
The talk with his baby was so cute...
Wt is this clip hanger yaar. ...
Plz update soon...
Will be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update ashu👏
Aww nobody believed ki he is doing so much for her😆
She lost the bethmm sansku ko kya chahiye😉
Loving the caring sansku but still i want punishment for him...just because of him our poor shona has faced so many problems
He left her at the farmhouse😡n then those goons😲
Hey i so want to see a jealous sanskaar...laksh ka entry karao na😉
Loved the update
Thanks 4 the pm
Continue soon😃
Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago

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