SwaSan SS : My Only Wish (Part 6 updated on Page no 36)

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Amrtina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Nice story i read it all in one go

Plz continue soon

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

hey dear...m so sorry for the late rpl but was running busy with ma university wrk ...I read two parts ago and just read remaining 3 in a go..
wow...so finally swara got all his thing back into d place dat too from dustbin..
She felt so bad about Sanku yelling at her...
sanku smwht realised his mistake too but swara didn't budge ...hahaha
it s really needed to sabak sikhao sanku and to mk him realize she didn't mean anythng by dng all that...
nw i really wnt sanku to get rid of his past thngs and place her SANDALS der,...haayeee😳

Edited (in bolds)😆

update soon re.. moi waiting...
for Daastaan also

Edited by milisaini - 9 years ago

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Hey Sonal,

Its amazing. Can you please update soon?

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Thanks for the beautiful replies frds🤗

N sorry for the delay but will update today😃

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Note : Guys i have written a song in this update

the blue lines r for sanskaar n pink one r for swara...n the bracket lines are their actions😃

My Only Wish

Part 6

(next morning swara woke up early n went somewhere)

(at 9:00 AM , at breakfast table...sanskaar came there)

Sanskaar - Mom where is Swara

Sujata - arey chora swara toh orphanage gyi hai baccho ko sangeet sikhane

Sanskaar - orphanage kyun

Ragini - Saturday ko woh wahaan jati hai...she loves it

Laksh - that's so sweet of her

Sanskaar - which orphanage

Ragini - Parvarrish

Sanskaar - okk...bye mom

Sujata - tu kahaan jar aha hai chorey

Sanskaar - Parvarish

(at parvarish orphanage...in the class room)

Swara - so kids now m going to Father Steve's cabin...i will be back in 5 mins tab tak no masti n only

Kids - music

Swara - exactly

(swara went from there...sanskaar entered in the classroom)

Sanskaar - hii baccha log

Kids (with a confusing look) - hllo

Rihaan (the class monitor) - sir who r u...r u that new maths teacher

Sanskaar - maths teacher n me...meko maths mein passing marks mushkil se milte the😆

(n he starts laughing...the kids too joined him)

Priya - then bhaiya who r u

Sanskaar - hmm...I m Sanskaar Maheshwari

Diya - ohh aap Swara di ke prince ho

Ved - buddhu he is swara di's hubby not prince

Diya - but our swara di is princess na

Sanskaar - that's true ur di is a princess...but baccha log where is ur princess i mean ur swara di

Rihaan - woh father steve se milney gyi hain

Diya - but bhaiya today she was looking upset

Ali - woh toh hai

Sanskaar - hey kids tell me something do u like ur di's sad face

Ved - sad face bhi kisi ko accha lagta hai

Sanskaar - exactly toh baccha log lets do one thing

Kids (together) - what

Sanskaar - song

Kids - song
Sanskaar -yep(he told them the plan kids got excited)

Kids - wait but badley mein hamein kya milega

Sanskaar - hmm in return (he winked at them)

(after 15 mins swara came back to class)

Swara - very good...everybody is so calm

(ved starts giggling)

Swara - what happened

(other kids too starts giggling with ved)

Swara - hua kya hai...why u all r laughing and(then she heard a humming tone) yeh kon hai

Ajeeb itefaak hai kya mulaakaat hai

(she saw sanskaar who was standing at the door n he was smiling at her...all the kids went to him n give him a hug he hugged them too)

Ajeeb itefaak hai kya mulaakaat hai Mil gaye aaj phir koyi toh baat hai

(swara made a face at him n tried to scold the kids with an angry expression)

Takkaluf chhodiye, aji taaruf kijiye - (2)

(swara went to the kids but sanskaar held her hand n looked into her eyes)

Aaye aur chal diye

(sanskaar with a similing face tries to touch her face but she starts walking from there)

Don' t say alvida -3 na kaho alvida - (2)

(sanskaar n kids starts dancing)
(swara goes to the garden...sanskaar n kids follows her)

Chalate chlate raahon mein rukane laga hoon

Aisa toh nahi tha jaisa ho gaya hoon - (2)

(sanskaar picked diya n winked at her)

Aaye hawa toh milu muskuraake, kisse sunaau karu teri baatein

(diya gave hi fi to sanskaar)

Jaane kyun lagata hai yeh sapana, kyun koyi ho raha hai apana

Aise kyun kho rahi hai duniiya, kyun lage abb nahi hoon tanaha

(swara turned n looked at sanskaar with teary eyes)

Takkaluf chhodiye, aji taaruf kijiye, aaye aur chal diye

(sanskaar gave her an assuring smile)

Don' t say alvida -3 na kaho alvida - (2)

(sanskaar n kids again stars dancing...swara looked at them n smiles)

(they all came to the cafeteria n swara starts serving them the snacks)

Shikawa nahi hai tujhase shikaayat nahi hai

Teri har baat mujhako achchhi lagati hai - (2)

(she smiles at sanskaar)

Dekho jo mudake darata hai yeh dil

Kahin raason pe kho na jaaye manjil

(she remembers his outburst n his rude behaviour)

Tera yuun milana ek karam hai, dil mera tod na kasam hai

(sanskaar held his ears n said sorry)

Tere bina tanaha tanaha hum hai, ruk ja jindagi kasam hai

(he winked at her)

Takkaluf chhodiye, aji taaruf kijiye, aaye aur chal diye

(she smiles at him)

Don' t say alvida -3 na kaho alvida - (2)

(swasan n kids starts dancing)

(SwaSan were coming back from the orphanage...in the car)

Swara - sanskaar aap bohot accha gaatey hain...u sings really well

Sanskaar -i know m superstar Swara - hmm...dekha mainey...waisey u bribed them

Sanskaar - whom

Swara - kids...what did u do

Sanskaar - woh i said ki next week we all go for a picnic

Swara(with a shocked expression) - what...sanskaar yeh aapne kya kiya did u ask father steve

Sanskaar - haan

Swara - when

Sanskaar - after the bribing n before the song

Swara - really

Sanskaar - swara m sorry...i know I was rude but i didn't meant that matlab jo kaha woh sab...that wasn't ur fault still i shouted on u so plzz forgive me

Swara - its okk sanskaar...actually I felt really bad but shayad ab jaane dete hain...infact the way u have apologised was nice...I am imperessed

Sanskaar - thank u princess

Swara -sorry

Sanskaar - no i mean ur students said that u r a princess that's why(sanskaar felt some unknown kind of feeling)(rest of their journey went silently)

(back to MM...SwaSan entered)

Sujata - swara beta kaisa gya thara din

Sanskaar -accha tha mom

Sujata - tharey se pucha...jab dekho tang karey hai mahri bahu ko

Swara - nhi mom

Sujata - mahrey ko sab pta hai jab yeh kisi ko naraaj kar deve hai na tabhi aisa pareshaan hokar usey dhundhe hai

Sanskaar -what mom

Sujata - maa hoon thari sab pta hai mahrey ko

Sanskaar - yeah yeah...I know that(he made an annoyed face...swara n sujata smiled after seeing his expressions)

(At night...In SwaSan's room...when swara entered samskaar was doing something on his laptop)

Sanskaar - woh i was doing some office work

Swara - it's okk sanskaar...u can do ur work I don't have any problem with that...seriuosly

Sanskaar - its not that...actually

Swara - sanskaar aap theek hain na

Sanskaar - swara m sorry

Swara - sanskaar we had talked about that na...then why again

Sanskaar - no swara i have to clarify something

Swara - no sanskaar

Sanskaar - plzz swara let me

Swara - okk...kahiye

Sanskaar - u know na me n kavita we both were in a relationship...she was my life the only reason of my survival main na uska chehra dekhkar jeeta tha uski hansi sunkar saansein leta tha but suddenly she left me(he had tears in his eyes)mujhe bohot bura laga aisa laga ki jeeney ki wajah hi chali gyi main toh muskurana hi bhool gya but today I laughed...I enjoyed my life today after 5 long years I lived my life fully...mainey woh khushi mehsoos ki jo kahin kho gyi thi n that's all brcause of you I know m not perfect but i really want to give this relationship a chance I want to give us a chance...I don't know how much time it'll take but still I want this relationship

Swara - sanskaar m sorry I thought u don't like me

(sanskaar hugged her)

Sanskaar - m sorry swara plzz don't leave me plzz

(swara hugged him back)

Swara - never sanskaar I won't leave you...never ever

(after sometime they broke the hug)

Swara - I'll go n change

(she was about to go but sanskaar called her)

Sanskaar - aaj couch par toh nhi soyogi na

Swara - nhi(they both smiled at each other...swara went to change her clothes n sanskaar feels relieved)

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago

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JIDHNYASA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Finally you updated...

Thank you so much...

🤗

Sanskar went after swara to orphanage

Hayyee That tooo dreMY

song selection was awesome...

The dance and act was awesome...

Finaaly they are happy and friends together...

Now Plz don't take long time to continue next part..

😳

Continue soon..

And do pm me..

Edited by Jidnyasa - 9 years ago

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PUBALI BASU

@MysticMoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Awesome update..
so well written...
loved the concept...
Thanks for PM

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sana2c

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Nice update..
song was super cute...
nd picnic fun.. (waiting for update)

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Sonal this was a very cute story 😊

Read all the updates in one go!

So Laksh and Ragini were already in a relationship and Swara loved Sanskaar - like the twist from the show😃

Why does Ragini hate Swara so much? Hmm looks like I will have to wait to read more about that huh?

Swara is behind Sanskaar and not the other way around ! Thank god! The show one seriously is mental for not noticing the guy in front of her so this was a very pleasant and welcome change from that.

Lovely story Sonal. Looking forward to how it unfolds further😊

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Loved the song selection... It was apt
Finally Sanskaar ne Swara ko mana liya... Yaaay
And so now they are going to give this relationship a real try...
And Sonu agar tu itne gap ke baad updates degi na toh I want longer updates

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