***SWASAN -SS-BLISSFUL*** updated part 7 on page 14. 12/11/2015 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Prithi-

very well written
thanks for the pm


My pleasure prithi...
Thanks for reading and commenting😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice update pls continue soon


THANKYOU😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...👏
Wow Shomi in Support of SwaSan...
Continue soon...😳
Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Nice update...👏

Wow Shomi in Support of SwaSan...
Continue soon...😳


Thankyou asha😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

wow sharmista suppor swasan


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou anu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Suha 😳

Thank you for the PM, I completely missed this FF!

Read everything in one go! It's lovely dear. I loved Shomi taking a stand for herself and not being a doormat to Shekhar. Really liked where Swara got in touch with music again and felt at peace with that. 😊
Dida-Sanky-Shomi bond is soo cute!
Sanskaar as always, selfless in his love for Swara. ❤️
I love Sujju here! 😆
Ragini =
Hope Swara realises her feelings soon! 😳

Continue 😛

Originally posted by: suhasini2727


NOTE- ''husbands being married to right rib serves a divine purpose''
i liked it so pasting here... explanation for above line
naturally the ribs extend from the side to the front.they are positioned just right to function as protection for the heart and lungs, the major organs. lungs represent breath and heart the centre of life. God ordained wife is the perfect fit for her husbands ribcage.the right rib is divinely positioned to protect and preserve her husbands breath and life. she will do him good no evil forever. A rib that doesnt fit will loosely protect the heart and lungs, when either is punctured, a person can die quickly. marrying the wrong rib can knock a mans wind out and cause his heart to bleed.


This is really beautiful. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Hey Suha 😳

Thank you for the PM, I completely missed this FF!

My pleasure rose😊

Read everything in one go! It's lovely dear. I loved Shomi taking a stand for herself and not being a doormat to Shekhar. Really liked where Swara got in touch with music again and felt at peace with that. 😊
Dida-Sanky-Shomi bond is soo cute!
Sanskaar as always, selfless in his love for Swara. ❤️
I love Sujju here! 😆
Ragini =
Hope Swara realises her feelings soon! 😳

Continue 😛

M really very glad that u liked it
Thanku so much for the appreciation 🤗



This is really beautiful. 🤗


I too liked it rose. .. I dnt know it's relevant or not in shomi's monologue...bt ended up posting here...
Edited by suhasini2727 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 7

next morning

* Shomi wakes up... swara still dint opened her eyes . without disturbing her shomi comes out ... sees sanskaar sleeping on the bench
she wakes him up... sanskaar beta good morning
he says good morning ma... did swara got up he asked anxiously
not yet beta... doctor came for rounds ...checked her...told she z fine.
rath bhar aisahi soyeho ...bench par?
(sadly he thoughts to himself when will she get up i am dying to hear her now...)
-sanskaar kaha khogaye ho
-kuch nai ma
ghar jau beta...fresh hojake kuck kakhe phir aajau hospital ko
ha ma mai yu gaya aur yu aaya...
aaram se beta...mai hoon na
sanskaar leaves
after sumtym... shomi z sitting near swara
then swara slowly opens her eyes
her first sentence was ma... sanskaar tikh hai na
woh bilkul tikhai beta... abthak yahi tha
thodi dher pehle hi... fresh hone ki liye mainehi ghar bejha sanakaar ko
hmmm ok ma...she smiles
why ragini wanted to kill sanskaar ma... he z just supporting me ... he did everything on my insistance and how can ragini do that ...she has lost her mind
calm down shona...when ragini told that she vl shoot sanskaar i thought she was trying to frighten us...i dint know she z so determined ...and wen u tried to move sanskaar so that he can be saved ...u got shot by ragini to ur right shoulder part...shona... my heart stopped beating ...
but thankgod shona ... she kisses swaras forehead...it was not major ...due to shock u were unconcious for few hours and doctor told u vl b alright ... few days of rest z needed
while they are still talking dida came... dida comes and hugs her shoru...
bagwan ka lak lak shukr hai ki hamari shoru tikh hai
dida... tum ho mere sath muje kya hoga...all three awesome ladies smile
then dida tells shomi ... now that i came i vl take care of shoru u can go home
shomi leaves

at mm... sanskaar in the kitchen preparing mixed vegetable soup for swara...sujatha comes mhare liye tho kabhi aisa banaya chora? banana chodo kabhi kitchen me apna pau rakha thune... is chori ke liye tho itna kuch karee...
mom... she needs to recover fast na... so thought to prepare this type of healthy food...
patha hai mujhe sanskaar mazaak karithi...acha suno thoda sa adrak dhalo acha swaadh aayega...

ok mom aap arena hospital ku ab
ha hum sab aare... pehle thum apna breakfast karo...uske badh hospital aajana...and saying so she leaves
ap dp sujju and ram will cum to hospital
here sanskaar after doing his breakfast ... packs food for swara ...he will go to temple... thanks god for his mercies for saving his life swara...prays for her well being...and starts to hospital...and thinks to himself may b swara has gained her consciousness
in the hospital...all are happy to see swara and greets both dida and swara
she wishes all of them with a pleasing smile
dp says..
swara thume hasthehuye dekh ke hame bahoth sukoon mili... hamari prardhana hai ki thum jald se jald tikh hojau...ap goes near her caresses her and blesses her
rp sujju also blesses her...watever u have done to our son v vl b greatful for u all our lives
aisa math kahiye pappa... sanskaar ne mere liye bahoth kuch kiya...
sujju... apna khayal rakho chori...and they vl leave


sanskaar comes ... greets them takes blesings from dida
sanskaar very very happy to see swara... very much relieved tooo
(the best of woman is one when you look at her, you feel happiness...
we all know in sanskaar life who that best woman is?😛)
good morning swara... she smiles...maine tumhare liye soup laaya thume peena hai
swara says no sanskaar thodi dheer pehle hi dida ne idli khilayi
dadi complaints to sanskaar...
nahi sanskaar ek hi idli khayi hai...bahoth zidh karithi shoru ne

khaneka mann nayye... thodi dheer ke baad dhekingena sanskaar... innocently looks at him

aisa nai chalega ... abhi peena hai...maine apne hatho se bannaya
dida and swara both are surprised...
why are you looking at me like this... its not that bad i tasted it...
no no sanskaar...m just surprised ...give me i vl drink says swara
she drinks and tells yummy...sanskaar u made it very well and its so sweet of u...that u prepared for me
he says its my pleasure he happily says

dida very elated to see both her shoru and sanskaar happy together
silently wishes in her heart... and prays to god to keep them happy always
she asks sanskaar vl u stay near shoru ... i vl go to temple and come
she knows very well that sanskaar vl stay with shoru... she wanted them to spend together peacefully...afterall they so deserved it... she thought
she leaves
sanskaar - swara wat u have desired god fulfilled it...ur mom n dad are one now... wats next...as u r interested in music...u have to plan ur career in it na...laughs and says not now swara...dont stare at me...i mean after u completely recovered.
swara- s sanskaar god fullfilled it through you... only through u...alone i cant do anything na... m really blessed to have u in my life... tx to god ( he was overwhelmed at her response)and sanskaar s am intrested in music

lakshya comes... he saw both swara and sanskaar talking to eachother...
how are you swara
swara m fine laksh
i know swara its not right tym to talk to you but please spare few minutes
he continues... i am extremely sorry for everything specially for not trusting you
its ok laksh... ... i forgave you long back
its ur goodness swara to forgive me...i have hurted u so much... i even forgot v are once good friends atleast for that friendship sake i would have believed u...i failed in everyway... i behaved very rudely with you and even with bhai too...
laksh...we know that u have been maniputaled...says swara
sanskaar interrupts and says u know the truth now right thats enough lucky
thankyou so much ... your forgiveness relieved me...
(he thoughts to himself...half of the burden lessened now...
i am responsible for raginis behaviour n i have to set things right)
take care swara...he gestures his bhai n leaves
Edited by suhasini2727 - 9 years ago

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