***SWASAN -SS-BLISSFUL*** updated part 7 on page 14. 12/11/2015

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hi everyone😊
i have been in this forum since few months
got encouraged by beautiful ff os ss...in this forum
so making an attempt for the first time
guys spare me😛
no intentions to hurt anyone love u all🤗


PART 1, 2 & 3 - PAGE 1
PART 4 -PAGE 2
PART 5 -PAGE 6
PART 6 -PAGE 10
PART 7 -PAGE 14

here a glance of everybodys status in swaragini in my story

it hasbeen 6months ...after marriage



swara ... poor girl has lost hope...thinking
why she failed to expose ragini... ragini n her cunning dadi steeped low day by day
what should i do nw...hw can i unite my parents
equation between her n sanky z very good...they understand eachother very well...quite good friends nw...


sanskar.... feeling bad for swara that he couldnt do anything to make swaras mom n dad together...he was understanding slowly that he z deeply in love with swara the princess with pure n golden heart...bt never showed his feelings as he knw swara will nt love him...
more than love he respects shona alot
he is very much attached to shomi n dida...



ragini... is happy that inspite of swara n sanskar tried to expose her they failed
n she z disappointed that till now laksh dint accepted her as his wife
n moreover she z calm that swara n sanskar now stopped attempts in exposing her since few days n ragini failed to prove all of them that swasan marriage is fake
even she failed 100 times... in her next attempt also she vl try her best to come close to laksh


laksh.... confused soul...he tels he hates swara bt couldnt hate
he wants to be close with ragini bt couldnt do...tries his best to b outside home...
bt he sincerely cares for ragini n believes her
he knowns swasan marriage is fake bt couldnt understand wats swaras motive is
he z very jealous wen he sees swara with sanskar


DP aur AP .... they think that everything vl fall in its place in its time...
forgiven swara and sanskar gave them second chance...ap belives ragini completely but dp doubts her... he always feels she is not as innocent as everybody thinks...n ther is something behind her always running tears


Ram n sujatha... accepted swasan ...quite opposite to serial😆...sujatha helps swara in cooking...ram admires swara for her quick learning brains



Adarsh n Parineeta.... .lovely couple...adarsh sees no differnce btwn laksh n sanky...
adarsh is in love with fruit salad wich swara prepares
parineeta helps both ragini n swara in household works n she spends more time with swara unknowingly...she wonders this pretty girl swara does magic with her words...hw this innocent soul can betray laksh...parineeta n swara are more like sisters
adarsh n parinneta has a little daughter ...her name is pyari.... n specially swara calls her HASI
swara spends most of her time with pyari...everybody adores her bond with pyari

uttara... busy in her studies


dadi... thinking that my lado will not have any problems now... relaxed
dadaji...proud that ragini has all sanskari qualities...


shekar n sharmishta (mishti)....both have love for eachother bt wont show out
mishti z worried for her shona...she thinks my daughter is trying hard to expose ragini bt its like mission impossible... shekar n mishti are living separately...shekars mom z very happy that mishti z not in her sons life.


dida... always telling that shoru vl expose that chudail very soon n always always praying for shoru😊


PART 1


PRESENT SCENE.


dp ram adarsh to office... laksh went out to meet his friend who z comming to his home town after one year...ap n sujatha went to mandir...parinneta went to her moms home with pyari... ragini in her sanskari mode in her room talking with lakshs photo n crying like always


swara n sanskar in their room... swara z quite depressed n tells m missing mom n dida ...can u drop me home... very uncomfortably sanky tels her that he has work pls excuse... swara says,...chilll sanskar its ok...i can manage...wishes him good day n tels him to take care n leaves
swara comes back n tels after ur work cal me... sanky infront his laptop nods at her n thinks sorry swara for i lied with u today...he doesnt have anywork bt feeling very sorry for not helping swara...he want to plan something to expose ragini n want to c swara back to normal




sanskar makes his way out n passing through raginis room...ragini sees him n stops him...
she sarcastically tells...sanskar ji aaap aur swara ne kithe koshishe ki mujhe our laksh ji ko dur karne ke liye...bagwan ji bhi mere sath hai...
sanskar says o common ragini pls stop this utter nonsense u r cheater who cheated her own sis n separated her own parents for the so called love
its not at all love but infatuation
do u really love laksh... i dont think so... u love ur self...thats y...u r able to c lakshs heartbreak...
i know i am the reason n initiation for ur foolishness... ur kidnapping story...drugging swara
u r so foolish even after telling u even tried to do black magic spell on swara with the help of that dayan
then i told stop all ur attempts n let swalak marry
u stooped so low ... i never imagined... u pushed swara to death
if she would have died wat have u done
sanskar ji ... app ka ekek shabdh sahi hai par swara mujhe dhoka dia na... swara ne hi mujhe majboor kare e sab karne ke liye...usne hamara pehli pyar ko hamse cheena...par humne apne pyar ko wapas paliya...insab me ham kidar galat hai sanskar ji...
wake up ragini... u need a psychiartist...
u instigated feeling in swara for laksh... did u forget
ragini said its a part of our game
sanskar looses his temper... shouts r u mad ragini
how can u forget that ur sister loves u immensely
u r just one sided loving sorry lusting obsessive girl n leaves from here




do pass ur comments guys... sorry for mistakes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2


all this conversation is heard by shekar...he z broken...he felt his biggest blow in his life he z speechless
he has come to mm to give kheer to ragini as dadi prepared specially for ragini...as he saw there was no one...he started to walk near raginis room...so heard the conversation...he kept that kheer there n left... neither sanskar or ragini saw shekar
sanky thought this girl spoiled my mood ... he thinks of swara n rushes to her... to c weather she z ok or not...morning i dint spoke to her properly even though she told she z depressed



swara tooks a taxi n in the middle she finds her friend
she forces swara to come to music class...as swara recently had not attended her class...
swara forgets everything... tensions in her life...n completely into music world...she thanks her friend to bring her here... after that... they vl go to have panipuri...their she sees few places wich makes her recollect memories of her n laksh
she felt very down n everything flashes infront of her...laksh nt trusting swara...her baba hating her...fake marriage...she immediately needed her ma n dida





dida n sharmishta... happy to c swara n sad also to c swara lifeless
they make all attempts to c lively swara bt invain ...she hugs both of them... n cries terribly...pours her heart out
dida n mishti also cries cing her shonas pain
ma dida is my wish so bad that god is nt answering me
i want a happy family... i accept ma u n dida gave everything to me...gave me freedom in everything...hw can i deny that i missed my father very badly... u dint even told me whom my dad was... i had many questions bt dint dared coz i dint want to hurt u...in school all my other friends use to come with thier parents...my heart use to break ma...wen i thought that i dnt even knw how my father looks...wen i saw my dream coming true...i was in 9th cloud...wen came to knw raginis dad z my dad tooo...c my bad luck ma...it dint lasted long...baba z hating me...
i loved laksh...i thought he will trust me bt i am wrong... i cnt completely blame laksh to ... bt c i dnt have a family ...a happy fmily today with ma n baba...nor i have laksh in my life
sanskar z heart broken to c swara like this...tears rolled out from his eyes ...just staring at swara
her mom says chup hoja shona... bus karo...meri bachi tumne bohot kuch saha hai...enough z enough,,,,. v vl leave to mumbai in few days...complete shifting...i cnt take this no more shona...i will resign my job here...dadi says shekar... mishti says he cant see the truth ma...i cant wait for him...i only want my shonas happiness
dida says okay n both vl kiss shona... mishti sees sanskar... aawooo beta... he comes n sit... swara n sanky vl c eachother...in these six months sanky became very close to mishti n dida... he z less of damadh n more of son... swara like this nature very much...
mishti tels... ab beta...e khel bas bi karo... aapka ka maksath acha hai par kya kare... lagtha hai e tharika hi galath hai...i dnt want to c u both in such a stress...i vl shift to mumbai with ma n shona...n i vl talk to everyone in family about fake marriage...nw m ready to face any circumstance i vl protect my daughter,... i dnt care anyone nw...
sanskars heart broken into million pieces... coz he cnt imagine being away from shona
bt he just nods at mishti n trying to control his emotions
shomi dida swara sanky have a warm talk
all 3 lovely womans thanks sanky for his help n care towards them n specially towards swara...he tels i am ur son... dntmake me feel as if i am an outsider... dida hugs him ,,,, mishti blesses him... he gives a last look to swara n leaves



PART 3

shekar z heartbroken...feels ashamed of what he has done in his blindness...thinks... how can i face swara ... poor girl hw many times pleaded me to believe her...mishti, can she forgives me... i have commited a sin.. he z fulll of thoughts ... how ragini betrayed... his mom z like that bt never expected ragini to become so obssesive n foolish...he goes home n lost in thoughts...sits in darkness...earth below his legs seems to stumble.



ragini sees kheer box on the table...she wonders who brought it...she identifies it as kheer made by her dadima...calls her for clarification...dadi tels i have sent shekar to you dint he come.i dint c baba bt kheer z there... ragini suspects sumthng is not right..she cals bt shekar vl nt respond...her doubt deepens.
she goes to her dadis home...asks dadi...dadi also doesnt knw shekar is in his room.ragini goes to his dads room..shocked to c him in darkness...asks him kya hua baba aap is andhere me kya karre...by cng ragini shekars bp raises...he slaps ragini...ragini n dadi hell shocked...ragini asusual starts her drama... baba ..humse kuch galti hogayi kya... shekar asks thum dhoke se laksh se shaadi ki... ha ya na...ragini just stares...he shouts jawab do...mishti ki ma ne thumare bhareme bathaya kya wo sach hai...kya o janthi hai tumhare bareme...did u snach laksh from swara... she says ha ha ha maine hi sab kuch kiya...
he again slaps tightly... dadi asks him to stop...he replies bus karo ma...iski pagal panme apne sath diya...chi ma chi...u can steep so low...ragini tels baba isme dadi ki koi galti nahi...
shekar says chup karo...dnt cal me baba... m ashamed to b ur baba...ghen aathi hai mujhe..
i always asked ur opnions bt always u use to tel dadaji n dadima vl select every thing good for u
they spoiled u they made u obessed n now u r a murderer...u dnt value relations.u dint even cared that because of u whole family lost peace...defamed swara...u separated ur parents hw selfish u r...ok u dint cared about me n mishti...bt ragini u cheated urself u can never b happy with a man who doesnt love u...u lost evrythng... ragini cnt believe her baba speaking to her that rude
swara ne majboor kiya baba..hum laksh se bahot pyar karte hai...uske bina jee nai sakthe...
swara ne hum se hamara pyar cheena...hum tho bus usko hatana chahthene...marne ka irada nai tha...dida bhi sach pathachalnekebad girgayi... hum ne kuch nai kiya
shekar tels...unbelievable...u r still defending ur self...dnt show me ur face again.
he leaves...dadi tries to speak to shekar...bt for the look he gave she dint dared... she tels her laado to go home


sanskar in his room lost in thoughts of swara...feels very sad to get separaed from her...while thinking itself he sleeps... swara also was thinking of sanskar in these 6 months...how he helped...hw he cared... hw he was a pillar for her in every instance...memories spent together...




shekar z restless n goes infront of mishtis house ... n thinking weather to go or not...he z very ashamed...completely lost
swara sees him... n says baba kya hua...r u ok...shomi sees him bt unreacted... stands like a statue... just tears are rolling out from shekars eyes...
swara says baba z everything ok...very concernedly she askes
mishti asks shekar did u came here again for ragini...v r leaving forever shekar dnt wry...v r shifting to mumbai in few days... u ragini can leave peacefullu...
his heart wrenched...swara says ... maaa pls wait..
she makes sit bt he stands ,,,, holds his hands n ask forgiveness for swara
all are surprised... mujhe maf kardo swara... i dnt deserve to be ur father
i blamed u... never believed u...becuse of my mistake i snatched ur childhood... dint fullfilled any duties of a father... still u loved me immensely n u were ready to sacrifice everything to unite ur parents
swara says its ok baba dnt b sorry...i cn understand ur trust on ragini
shekar tells mujhe bolne do beta
u too r my daughter my blood bt i dint trusted u
m a blackspot on the name of father
please forgive me beta...mishti cries... swara hugs her baba... both cry,,... mishti hugs them both... cing trio dida has happy wala tears.

Edited by suhasini2727 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice, i loved it 👏 😳 Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just loved it
hope it happens in serial too
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thanku very much sneha
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anu thankyou😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

Very nice, i loved it 👏 😳 Update soon 😊




thanku very much... thanku 4 reading tooo...🤗
i knw its lenghty...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am really sorry... lenghty na...bt u hav read it...thankyou 4 it😊
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Originally posted by: muktha_cute

just loved it
hope it happens in serial too




thankyou very much muktha😊...
wat i wrote may b illogical bt somehow want raginis truth to b out
thanku again 4 reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice

Please continue. want to know how swasan will confess their love??
update fast


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