SwaSan FF --- That Night (Part 6 up page 5)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It has been almost 1 week since the fight b/w laksh and sanskar took place!
That fight had some change in swara which she herself did not knw what she knew was that now she had started liking sanskar's care his concern his affection!

That day sanskar went to office telling swara that he will be late to cum!
The day was no different to swara with all the taunts and scoldings! It did not matter to her now bcz now she found a new happiness with sanskar! A new bonding with him... all others did not matter! The day went by and then came the night!
Location SwaSan's room
At the night swara called up sanskar and asked him shen he wil be back!
Then she drank the water kept at her bed side and went to luk for the clothes to wear!

AFTER 2 HOURS
Sanskar came back and realised that there was no one in the hall everyone were in their respective rooms probably sleeping!
He without making much sound went to his room! When he switch on the lights he was shocked to see his room... it was all decorated with rose peatls, jasmin, lavander orchids and florocent candles! And in between the bed was a beautiful bride, sitting with ghoongat on her face! But who could it be... sanskar could never expect this from swara? And why would she do this! But who else could it be!!???

Guys do tell me how do u find it! This is my firstFF. Should i continue it?



Part 2

Sanskar was frezed to see that but he went to his bed with all his courage, he called out 'ssswara'...no response! He lifted the ghoongat and was medmerised to see his wife *fake wife* she was lukin so preety so innocent so shy! He never saw shy swara! He gentely put his hand on her face and lifted her face up, he was about to ask her about what was all this but was interapted by a voice...!! Kaise lga hmara surprise!
He turned to see..., it was ragini! He went to her and took her out of the room as to not creat a scene in front of swara!!

Sanskar- ye tumhara konsa mya tamasha hai ragini!
Ragini- ye koi tamasha nhi hai sanskar, ye to hmari taraf se ek tofa hai hmari bhen aur jija ji ko!
Sanskar- apni bakwas band kro aur ye batao k q kr rhi ho ye sb! Aur swara aise q baiti hai aur tumne hmara room aise q decorate kiya hai!!
Ragini- arey sanskar dheere, sb jag jaenge!
Sanskar- shut up and answer me damit
Ragini- sanskar aapko to pata hai na k aapki shadi kin halat me hui thi, to aapki suhagraat to hui hi nhi! To hmne ab kr diya intzam... aur vause bhi shadi nakli hai to lya hua, suhagraat tonasli ho sakti hai na!
Sanskar- just shut up! Tum itna kaise gir sakti ho! Vo tumhari bhen hai...bhen k nate na she ek aurat hone k nate to dusri aurat ki izzat kro!
Aur swara vaha aise q baiti hai... kya kiya tumne iske sath!
Ragini- relax sanskar, bs uske pani me thoda sa drugs mila diya! Aapse hi to seekha tha! Bs fir kya tha usne acche baccho ki tarha hmari baat man li aur taiyar ho gye!
Sanskar was shivering with anger!
Sanskar - Ragini...
before he could complete ragini interupted!
Ragini- aap bhi kin baato me pd gye sanskar, ek raat mili hai swara k sath, enjoy kijiye! Vaise bhi hmari bhen bohot modern ahi aapko raat ko mza aaega! 'Wink and a broad smile by ragini' aur vaise bhi ye to hai hi characterless... ise koi farak nhi pdega! Aaj aap hai kl koi aur hoga iske bed pe! Enjoy!
Hearing this sanskar could not control but slapped ragini hard and pushed he away so hard that she bumped her head in the wall!
sanska- swara sedur rho, aur mere swara k bare me ek word bhi mt bolna!
Saying this he went inside the room and locked the door!

Part 3
The main reason for ragini to do this was that if swara and sanskar would spend a night together then laksh would never accept swara even if ragini's truth would be out!
U all knw how she is! Evil!

So then... when sanskar went inside the room he was shattered listining to this! He went and sat close to swara.
Sanskar- swara bohot raat ho gye hai tum change kr lo aur so jao!
swara did not reply
Sanskar held her face in his hands and made her luk into his eyes and said, swara bohot raat ho fye hai na tum thak gye hoge chalo change kr lo aur so jao!
Swara- but sanskar ajj to hmari first night hai na! Aapko to pata hi hai! Aur mere bhen ne mughe kaha hai k aap mughe bohot pyar kre hai aur mughe sari raat sona nhi hai!
Ragini filled the ears of poor drugged swara with all sorts of insane talks!
sanskar- haa swara mein tumse pyar krta hu pr abhi...
before he could complete his sentence swara leaned forward for a kiss!
Sanskar held he back instinctively and got up from the bed! Swara ye tum kya kr rhi ho!
Swara- ye bhi mughe mere bhen ne krne ko kha tha!
Even tough sanskar heart was craving for this kiss but he realised that he has a responsibility towarfs swara!
But then swara even got up, put her hands around sanskars neck and said' i luv u mr sanskar maheshwari'
This was like a dream cum true for sanskar, tough he knew that swara was not in her senses but still this meant a lot to him!
then swara came close to kiss him again! This time he could not resist! He was cursing himself a thousand times each second for doijg this but he could not stop! He kissed her passionately showing all his luv, care, affection, protection in that one kiss! With one of his hand on her waist and one holding her face!
It was a deep pationate kiss! Then they parted away for air! Then sanskar realised that what he did was wrong and that swara was not in her senses!
Then sanskar asked her again to change her clothed and go to bed!
(He was repeatedly asking her to change her clothes bcz even tough she weas a descent lighe lahanga but the chunri was very heavy with stone work and mirror work which could hurt her when she sleep!)
Sanskar- swara so jao!
but swara was not ready to leave him!
Then he lifted her in his arms and made her lie in the bed! With his hand on her eyes he repeatedly said so jao swara...tumhe neend aa rhi hai! So jao shona!
Then swara fall asleep!
He was processing what all happened and went to change his clothes! When he came out le luvingly gazed at swara, she was lukin soo beautiful... he sat besides her and put a hair strang behind her ear! He then realized that there was a scratch on her neck bcz of that stone work in her chunnri! He did not know what to do! But then he nearly made her sit honding her in is arms while she was still asleep and took of her chinnri! (Just to protect her from any more sctraches, dont get any wrong ideas)
He then let her sleep peacefully!
When he went to sleep he realized that there was no couch! Surprise surprise!! Ragini madam had sent it for dryclean by intentionally splitting juice on it!
Then sanskar was again confused as what to do where to slee! He couldnot sleep on the floor! Then he decided to sleep on the bed! Next to swara!

In the morning!!
Swara was feeling cold so she clunched up the blanket, she realized a hand on her bare waist (as she had a short blouse and that skirt, i dont knw what they call it, bcz her chunri was taken off to protect her from any further scratches)
She luked to see that it was sanskar! She woke up shocked to see sanskar slept next to her! She saw around her decorated room, her chunri lying on the table! She had all sort of thoughts in ber mind but did not want to think either of them!! She wanted to trust sanskar!! But the scene in front of her said something totally different! She was shievering and tears rolled down her eyes!!

PART 4
Sanskar woke up by the disturbance (swara crying)
Sanskar- swara kya hua...tum ro q rhi hu!? Tum theek ho!? Plz aise mt roo!
Swara- sanskar ye sb kya hai, hmara room aise q hai aur hm dono bed p kya kr rhe hai! Mere chunri kaha hai!kya hai ye sb! Bolo sanskar!
She was continously crying...
sanskar i trust u, plz mughe bolo k jo mein soch rhi hu vo galat hai ! Plz sanskar bolo!
Sanskar hugged her! It was a side hug and swara laid her head on his cheast and sanskar held her hand and kissed it!

sanskar- swara tum jaisa soch rhi ho vaise kuch nhi hai! Kl raat room me couch nhi tha pata nhi kaha gya to mein bed pe so gya! M really sorry mein tumhe hurt nhi krna chahta tha!
Swara- sanskar hmara room!?
Sanskar- ragini! Ye sb ragini ne kiya hai!
just then laksh,ragini and AP entered their room! (God knows why dont they lock their room in tv) Ap asked laksh to apologise from sanskar for the fight.
Three of them were shocked seeing the view! Swara in sanskars arms, room decorated and swara only wearing her blowse!
AP left without saying a word, she felt odd! Laksh's heart broke into a million peaces seeing swara with someone else! That too his brother! He left.
Ragini- swara raat kaie the! Enjoy kiya na tumne! Hmara... she could not complete her sentence just then... thugh! Swara ka thappad!😆
swara- mere zindigi se dur rho! Mere pati se mere room se aur mughse! Aur jo tumne kiay hai na aur jis karan se kiya hai! Iska javab to mein tumhe jaldi hi dungi!
Ragini left the room tensed!

swara sat down on the bed! She had a bad stomach ache!
Sanskar rushed towards her!!
Sanskar- swara kya hua tum thek ho! Mein doctor ko bulau!
maa, he shouted but swara stopped him!
Swara-sanskar mein theek hu kuch nhi hai!
Sanskar- no swara tum theek nhi ho! Luk at u!
Swara - meine kaha na mein theek hu! Trust me! (She was on her periods! Regular stomach acje)
sanskar- are u sure! Tum hot bath le lo dard km ho jaega! Mein tumhare liye coffe lata hu!
sanskar went downstairs!

After getting ready swara also went downstairs! She greeted everybody! Only ladies and laksh were home! But she felt odd as everyone stared her! Ragini told everyone that she and sanskar had their first night!
(Bitch)
Parinita bhabhi- swara kaise rhi tumhari raat!
swara- she felt real odd,,, vo bhabhi... bhabhi!
sanskar- swara do min k liye mere sath chalo mughe tumse kuch baag krni hai!
Swara- pr sanskar...
sanskar held her hand and took her upstairs!
Sanskar- swara mughe tumhe ek aur baat natani hai!
Swara- kya sanskar!?
Sanskar- swara do u trust me!?
swara- ofcourse i do, pr ye q puch rhe ho sanskar
Sanskar- vo swara... vo ...vo
swara- kya hua kuch bolo bhi
sanskar- swara v had a kiss last night!
swara-😲😡 ye kya bol rhe h! Tum mazak kr rhe ho na!
Sanskar- nhi swara m really sory but...
thugh--- slap! Tight one!🥱
swara- how could u sanskar-i trust u! Meien kabhi nhi socha tha k tum aisa kroge!
Q sanskar q! Mein nashe me the! Mere apne hi bhen ne mughe drugs diye the! Pr tum tum to hosh me the na!



Part-5
Sans- swara meine kaha na m sorry! Tum nashe me the tumne mughe itne bar kiss krne ki koshish ki... first time to i could stop u but second time! Idk mughe kya ho gya tha! M soo sory!
Swara- to tum isme bhi mere galti nikal rhe ho! Get 1 thing very clear mr sanskar maheshwari, jo tum soch rhe ho na vo kabhi nhi hoga! Tum soche kya ho apne aap ko! Tumhare kimmat kaise hui!
Sanskar- m sorry swara i knw k tum mere responsibility ho but m soo sory...
Swara was speaking non stop hurting sanskar very much, even she did not knw what was she saying!
Sanskar could not take it any more!
He pinned her to the wall a d held her by her shoulders!
Sanskar- m sorry swara! Meine galti ki hai! Vo bhi bohot badi! I knw tumhare liye mughe maaf krna asan nhi hoga pr plz plz ek aur baar mughe maaf kr do.
Swara couldnot stop crying! He held her real tight, it was hurting her but the event hapend last night was hurting her even more!
Swara- sanskar ye jo bhi ho rha hai accha nhi ho rha hai! Mein characterless nhi hu. Meri maa aur dida ne mughe ye sb nhi sikhaya tha! Mughe pata nhi kl vo sb kaise! M sorry m soo sorry.
Sanskar- shh shh swara u dont need to be sorry. I m sory meine tumhara bharosa toda!
She hugged hin and he hughed her back! Gentelly kissing her hair and supporting her!

THE END
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And i even need ur help as to how to write next chapters
Should i go for editing the post or is there any other way!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Start yar...👏
Continue soon... 😊
Loved it...😳
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Originally posted by: anisimluv

And i even need ur help as to how to write next chapters

Should i go for editing the post or is there any other way!

No need to edit in the Same post yar...
U can post it seperately as Part 1, Part 2, Part 3 So on...
Nw which you wrote make it as Part 1 ...
Then next one Part 2 and post it seperately...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow 👏 what a start 😆 continue soon :)
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Do continue. Wanna know what happens next.
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The 2nd part was very nice 👏 And Ragini, omg 😡
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OMG!!! What a start...
N that twist...
Rags is so cheap I tell you... 🤢

Waiting for more...
Do cont soon...
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Wow...!!!!!!!!
2nd Part is awesome yar...😳
Ragini is so cheap...😡
Continue soon yar...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisimluv

And i even need ur help as to how to write next chapters

Should i go for editing the post or is there any other way!

HEY NO NEED TO EDIT U CAN MOVE ON AS THE NEXT POST IN THIS SAME PAGE

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