Jess_Ru thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
He was sitting on the bed replaying the days events it started with her being very happy so happy dat she was humming nd he was smiling to see her like dat at dat moment he thought i will do i can to keep her like dis


Every thing was going well when his bro started taunting him he ignored it cause he was at fault but when he was pointing at her character he lost it

He tried telling him he was making mistake by trusting dat phsycho he warned him not to talk about his wife like dat but some people understand only when hands talk

He tried telling swara d reason but dat girl is d mahaan she wants to bear every thing nd i too lashed at her.now i shouldn't even fight for my wife k fake wife

But enough is enough i promised myself to keep her happy so i have to make it up but how

Swara was in d kitchen mom was taunting her dat her beta is becoming gunda cause of her ragini was glaring all cause of dat idiot but now she didn't feel dat anger for him as it's d nature of men to fight before nd think later she thought grumpily

At dat moment sanskaar came down to the kitchen

" Mom we r going out so don't cook for us"

" really ? k am going to go nd get ready but next time tell me before now don't scold if am late "

" Mom seriously i was talking about me nd swara tell her to get ready "

" ha now my son wants to take bengalan out not me "

" why can't he say directly to me. idiot here am feeling bad for him nd he is showing attitude ughhh" swara said to herself

" Is every thing k between u nd jethji jethaniji" ragini was asking in her honey dripping sweet voice

" u handle ur life devraniji oops sorry my supposed life which u snatched "

They was silence i dat vehicle sanskaar was stealing glances as she was looking angelic nd swara was in bad mood he stopped the vehicle nd swara was shocked she never saw dis place but knew it as it's her home city

" dis is new town eco park na "

" yes dats right u came here before "

" no but i heard of the boat rides here "

" gud then shall we getting in a boat"

they both got into a boat nd sanskaar was happy yet amazed dis girl who was angry till now was smiling like a kid

" swara am sorry i shouldn't have done like dat i promise it won't happen again "

" ohh it's k am sorry too shouldn't have yelled "

" hmm swara wats ur age ? "

" what "

" I mean u look elder but ur childlike "

she narrowed her eyes at giving him a fake anger expression then he was laughing .he was like dat for few minutesthen she said

" u know sanskaar maa says we all have childlike qualities but they come out only when ur with a person u trust nd like "

He was stunned warmth filled his heart dat she trusts him again she managed to make him speech less with her innocence

" lets go na it's very late bade papa will get angry "

" we r not going home we r going to a nice non veg restaurant "

" What but ur mom "

" she is not here "

" what about ragini she may be planning something "

" ohh leave dat psycho for now u should also enjoy ur life "

they left from there nd ragini in the mansion was trying to go into swara sanskaar room then dp came gave good thrashing nd sent her away


ps: hey guys my first here it's pretty boring but who else could i write on swalak gives me depression nd ragya ughh do like if u like


Created

Last reply

Replies

10

Views

5.1k

Users

8

Likes

34

Frequent Posters

ASHAJYOTHIII thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
messi do it continue yar i liked very nice start not at all boring yar k keep going dear
SONAL30 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Hey dear
It was nice yaar...n plzz continue it😃

Anu0517 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hey nice start...😊
Pls continue yar...😳
mistofshadows thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
My fav part - DP gave Nagini a good thrasing. Loved it.
Jess_Ru thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
thank u guys for ur reviews dis forum has most of d best writers am not dat much but will try
Anu0517 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Messi2

thank u guys for ur reviews dis forum has most of d best writers am not dat much but will try

hey nothing like tat yar u r writing so well... do continue...
leelaa9 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Very nice SwaSan fanfic.😳 Thanks for writing it. :))
anu91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Nice one ...if u can cont further it ill b good...
gayu6 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Really loved this os yaar pls continue and pls do pm me wenever u r writing os ss ff n all pls

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".